AvNeil OS: Some Home Truths (Based on Current Track)

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Nidhii

@Nidhii.3007

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Mind blowing

In case CV's stalk this forum . I want them to read this and include even an ounce from it.

I want them to first clear their head about what was the real reason behind Avni's leaving.

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Pretty good one about time Neil gets his brain back

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

So good...Neil need someone to knock some sense into his brain...Finally sunehri lost her cool n it was much needed..

Cant see the pain of avni n mowgli...cont soon

Love

Sushree

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Thank you so much for writing this! Much needed at the moment. How I wish Sunehri would actually knock some sense into him! Anger has clouded his senses to such an extent that he isn't even realizing what he is doing. It just deeply hurts and angers me to see the Neil Khanna I loved so much like this. This is not him. The Neil Khanna we all know is not this insensitive. When I see him trying to separate Avni from her son, all I could think of is one of his dialogues from initial days of AvNeil. He had said to Avni (who was Ananya back then) that a mother won't be separated from her child. Such a contrast. Sigh! There's no point of talking about it now.

I know this is an OS, but can you please continue this? I seriously want to see Neil putting an effort to find the truth and repenting his mistakes. I so badly want him to use his dormant brain which is stuck at one point right now. So please do extent this to few more shots and help me get some peace.

Edited by Ashi3 - 7 years ago

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445
Mind blowing
In case CV's stalk this forum . I want them to read this and include even an ounce from it.
I want them to first clear their head about what was the real reason behind Avni's leaving.

Thank you!😃

But this OS is not for the CVs but for me...I wanted to clear the rumbling in my head...CVs can go fish in the Arctic for all I care!

What they did, do or are going to do; is something m not bothered about ab. They've lost the privilege to affect me!

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

It's time, Neil Should start reasoning everything. I hope this happens in the show payal...hope sunehri does this...much needed atm...

If not now, I'm worried that he'll take such steps Which he would regret badly..

Great piece of work!!😃❤️

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Good OS. Well written.

Thank you so much!😃

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia
Pretty good one about time Neil gets his brain back

Thank you!😃

Isn't it? M tiered of seeing him bumbling in the dark mumbling blah blah🤢

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sushfiza

So good...Neil need someone to knock some sense into his brain...Finally sunehri lost her cool n it was much needed..
Cant see the pain of avni n mowgli...cont soon

Love
Sushree

Thank you so much!😃

Someone needs to knock some sense into Neil & since Sunheri is the only one without any ulterior motive except wanting to see Avni happy with her family & the only one who knows the truth...I hope she steps up to her role as a true friend soon.

I'm sorry but this was a random OS, totally unplanned. As of now I have no thoughts of extending this.😳

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Ashi3
Thank you so much for writing this! My pleasure!😃Much needed at the moment. How I wish Sunehri would actually knock some sense into him! Anger has clouded his senses to such an extent that he isn't even realizing what he is doing. It just deeply hurts and angers me to see the Neil Khanna I loved so much like this. This is not him. The Neil Khanna we all know is not this insensitive. When I see him trying to separate Avni from her son, all I could think of is one of his dialogues from initial days of AvNeil. He had said to Avni (who was Ananya back then) that a mother won't be separated from her child. Such a contrast. Sigh! There's no point of talking about it now. Yes, let bygones be bygone & hope for a better tomorrow!

I know this is an OS, but can you please continue this? I seriously want to see Neil putting an effort to find the truth and repenting his mistakes. I so badly want him to use his dormant brain which is stuck at one point right now. So please do extent this to few more shots and help me get some peace.

Hey,

Thank you so much!😃

This OS popped into my head because I got tired of waiting for these characters to act like they are supposed to!!

I mean Sunheri is the only one who knows the truth about Avni & she's not telling Neil a thing. She's letting him hurt Avni at every instance. I don't think they've made any pinky promise, or a spit or a blood oath that she can't break!!

Except for Avni's constant pleading I don't know what's stopping her. I don't know what will be her breaking point when she will vent her frustration out at Neil & make him see the hole he is digging for himself with his blinded stubbornness!!

I don't know if I'll be continuing this because making the characters serve the purpose they are created for was the sole reason for writing this OS.

Baaki I don't know...the brain might just oblige me again!😆

Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago

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