Khwaishein |OmVya ft SauBhay Crossover FF|Update:CP 1 - Pg 5| 16/03/18

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello everyone!

Its my second fan-fiction! This time I'm writing FF ft Ishqbaaaz characters - Omkaara and Bhavya. But my FF will not have anything related to the show except characters name. Characterization also different.😊

Hope you guys will like it!:)

NOTE: If you against crossover things then please ignore this:)

Sorry for my mistakes because my english not good:) FF will be on hinglish:)

Btw sorry for some cliche dialogues and scenes.😆


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"Khwaishein"



Plot: The world of fashion, dreams, and desires. So many girls want to touch this world but they don't have the chance. But some girls don't want to even come close to this world. Bhavya is a simple girl from Mumbai. She is from a middle class family. She doesn't have big dreams, she just wants to see her family always happy. Omkaara is a boy from rich family. Everyone thinks he has a big attitude, but he is very simply a boy with a big heart. His passion is photography.He wants to become a famous fashion photographer. Though he has everything for this, he wants to make a place for himself with his own hands without anyone's help. He is in search of inspiration. One day he meets her, he meets Bhavya. He sees something in her that no one else was able to see.She becomes his KHWAISH. From here their journey starts. The journey of friendship, love, hate, pain, and betrayal! How will their lives change when they finally meet?And how will they change when they enter into the world of fashion where almost everyone loses their simplicity and innocence?

"
Never lose your identity"

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Prologue: Page -1
Part -1: Page -5

P.S Will love to read your feedbacks:)
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PROLOGUE.



"A broken soul."

Autumn. It was the usual cloudy day. It was raining. A young guy with an umbrella was running to the mansion. The guards opened the gates for him and he ran into the house. He threw the umbrella to the side and brushed his hair. He was dressed in simple clothes. He had long hair. In his ear he had an earring, and on his wrist a simple black watch. No one will say this guy is the owner of this big mansion. He slowly began moving to some room in the house. Meanwhile, some fuzzy flashbacks were coming in front of his eyes. He opened the door of the room and raised his eyes. The room was filled completely with photos of some girl. This girl was very beautiful. Her greenish eyes were sparkling. Her smile was playful. There was some innocence on her face. The boy was looking at all these photos with so much intensity. The boy was looking at all these photos with so much intensity. His eyes were red and wet. He slowly started moving towards a photo on the wall. He came closer and slowly started touching her face on the photo. It was a photo with an angry expression.

"Hello...Kaise ho tum?"
- he said quietly.

"Tum chup kyu hai? Arey mujhe pata hai tum mujhse naraz hai par main kya karoon yaar...Aaj kal time nahi milta tujh se
milne ke liye."

He touched her lips: "I promise...I will not do all this again. Ab please apne gussa chorde aur mere taraf dekho. Yaar aisa maat karo tujhe pata hai na main tere bina nahi jee sakta. Chalo ek smile mujhe de do...please."

He moved towards another photo. On this photo girl was smiling.

"Wah! Finally tum mujhe apne smile diya. Good one. Tujhe pata hai, jab tum smile karti hai na toh dunya ke har cheez mujhe accha lagta hai. Tumhari smile mein ek aisi jadoo hai."

In next moment he heard some laugh. It was ringing laughter. Her laughter.

"Why you laughed?" - he said and moved towards the next photo where the girl was laughing. Her hand was on her mouth. She tried to hide her laughing.

"Tum phir se chup hogayi.. Yeh sahi nahi hai."

"Tum mujhse sach mein pyaar karta hai?" - from somewhere came the sound of a female voice.

"Ha! I love you! I really love you!"

"Toh tum mujhe kabhi maat chor na...Tujhe pata hai na...Main iss dunya se bohot darti hoon...Yeh dunya bohot ganda hai..."

"Nahi! Never! If I will leave you then I will lose my life!"

"Dekhna..Apna promise maat bhulna.."

He moved towards next photo where girl was sad.

"Maine apne promise nahi bhul sakta...Par tum...tum shayad bhulgayi..."

The tear slowly fell from his eyes.

"Tum mujhe chor kar chaligayi...Kaha chaligayi tum, ha? Main tumhe kab se dhoondhne ki koshish kar raha hoon..Kaha hai tum? Kaha?"

"Yaha!"

He turned and save looked at another photo on wall on another side of room. It was another photo where girl was laughing. He started moving towards this photo and was saying.

"Tumhe hasi ara hi hai? Yeh maazak nahi hai. Agar tum wapas nahi aogi na...Toh main maar jaunga."

"Chup!"

"Kya hua?"

"Mere saath maut ke bare mein baat maat karna...Tujhe pata hai na mujhe accha nahi lagta."

"Teek hai...Nahi karoonga. I'm sorry. Please..Apne gussa chor de aur mere pass wapas aaja. Please yaar...Kab tak tum mujhe saataogi?Ha? Please bass kar.."

He sat down on his knees and started crying.

"Ha! Maine galti kiya! Agar uss din..." - he stopped and raised his eyes and was looking at her photo.

"Kaha dhondo tujhe? Kaha? Log kehte hai ke tum hamesha ke liye mujhe chor kar chaligayi par main janta hoon yeh jhooth hai. Ek din tum zaroor wapas aogi..."

He got up from the floor and wiped the tears.

"Tum aogi aur ek bir apne labon se mera naam legi..."

He closed his eyes and saw her. She was in beautiful white sari. Her hair was fluttering in the wind. She was laughing and in next moment with her sweet voice
she screamed: "Omkaara..."

He opened his eyes. Those eyes where you can see so much pain.
He moved towards table. On table was camera where some video was playing. Yes, from there girl's voice was coming.
That's how during all this time Omkaara was having convo with her. He took the camera and was watching video. The painful smile came on his face.

"Om...Aisa maat karo...Om...I hate it! Omkaara...Please stop...Omkaara Singh Oberoi!" - these words were coming from video which one Omkaara was watching.

Suddenly the video ended. And the smile left Omkaara's face. The screen became black. Black like Omkaara's life. He started taking steps back and was looking around.
Her photos were around him. He fell on knees and screamed:

"Bhaaavya!!!!"

Bhavya. Who is she? Yes, she is a girl from photos. The girl from Omkaara's flashback. But most important she is a girl which one lives in his heart. Bhavya.

"Bhavya...Ek aisi ladki jo sab se alag thi...She was from different world. She never had a dreams when all her friends were only dreaming about something. Bohot simple thi meri Bhavya. Very simple..." - Omkaara was saying and smiling through a tears.


"Na koi sapna...Na koi khwaish...Par jab woh mujhe mili..toh woh meri sab se badi khwaish bangayi...Mujhe abhi bhi uss din yaad hai..."

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Edited by ElviraRK_PC - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The plot is very interesting 😃 great going 😳
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Interesting plot Elvi, really excited for more! OmVya make me so happy
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Something new. Interesting. Intriguing concept. Actually I'm a bit of a traditionalist but you've giving me a bit of courage with this girl - so really thanks for that 😃. Actually I've always loved the idea of RuRi but I thought everyone would chase me with jhootis 😆 - but now I'm a bit more confident so thanks a lot 😃 .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting plot, El. Bring it on!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Woow elvi u r a writer too. Bring it on. Something differnt.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anokhisharma

The plot is very interesting 😃 great going 😳


thanks!)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZaalimaOberoi

Interesting plot Elvi, really excited for more! OmVya make me so happy


Thank you very much Zaalima!)
I know you love them also!)

Hope you will like FF)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its very interesting plot..

Excited for the first chapter

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