Khwaishein |OmVya ft SauBhay Crossover FF|Update:CP 1 - Pg 5| 16/03/18 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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its was amazing start

so bhavya and soumya are sisters here...nice😳

both of them have different views on khwaish..one who believe in this and other doesn't..

interesting

btw love your dp😳

waiting or the next part..update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: rikara94

its was amazing start


so bhavya and soumya are sisters here...nice😳

both of them have different views on khwaish..one who believe in this and other doesn't..

interesting

btw love your dp😳

waiting or the next part..update soon



thank you!:)

yeah...i decide to make them sisters here:) 😆

P.S Thank you!:)

And hope u will like next chapter)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
Firstly I like to confess I like Kunal and Mansi pair right from day she entered OM and they used upload pics together . In fact Mansi looks good with not only Lee but also Kunal and Nakul also . Always loved , Shivya , Omvya scenes and thanks Elvira for coming with edits, vm which I did see and its beautiful 👏 and i do miss all those talks in RuVya page though I joined late and was there for short period Ihad fun there .So many wonderful people 😳
Coming to FF .Its very good . Specially characters of Om and Bhavya got lots of depths .Loved the fact that you have kept the name Om and Bhavya . Waiting for them to meet .😳 Sure there is going to be lots of tashan and sparks fly when OmVya will met. I so wish that one day we can see Kunal and Mansi together in show with such a beautiful concept like the one you have come up with in your FF.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Nandinisharmaa

Firstly I like to confess I like Kunal and Mansi pair right from day she entered OM and they used upload pics together . In fact Mansi looks good with not only Lee but also Kunal and Nakul also . Always loved , Shivya , Omvya scenes and thanks Elvira for coming with edits, vm which I did see and its beautiful 👏 and i do miss all those talks in RuVya page though I joined late and was there for short period Ihad fun there .So many wonderful people 😳

Coming to FF .Its very good . Specially characters of Om and Bhavya got lots of depths .Loved the fact that you have kept the name Om and Bhavya . Waiting for them to meet .😳 Sure there is going to be lots of tashan and sparks fly when OmVya will met. I so wish that one day we can see Kunal and Mansi together in show with such a beautiful concept like the one you have come up with in your FF.



Hello Nandni!

Thank you very much for ur such a lovely comment! Its really means a lot!:)


I also like KuMan right from day when she entered OM:) And also miss AT days:)


About FF: I'm very glad you like my concept and liked first part! I hope u will continue read it and I will wait for ur review!:)

Hope in future we will see them together:)

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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Elvi🤗

Ek haseen update..

Their take abt life is so different..ek ko khawish matlab zindagi and bhavya ko khawish kuch bhi nahi hai..just a lifless thing..

So soumya is her sis..they loves each other so much.bhavya is working hard for educating soumya and make her a doctor.

Here,om want to fulfill his dreams without any support of his fam..

Their first meeting happened..just like a khubsoorat sapna..

So Om is remembering the past..

Well written chapter..⭐️




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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lakshmi32

Elvi🤗

Ek haseen update..

Their take abt life is so different..ek ko khawish matlab zindagi and bhavya ko khawish kuch bhi nahi hai..just a lifless thing..

So soumya is her sis..they loves each other so much.bhavya is working hard for educating soumya and make her a doctor.

Here,om want to fulfill his dreams without any support of his fam..

Their first meeting happened..just like a khubsoorat sapna..

So Om is remembering the past..

Well written chapter..⭐️






Finally tum agayi!😭

thank you for ur review! 😳

yeah...here I made them sisters and maybe here will be love-line between Saumya and Abhay:)

Om and Bhavya different lets see what will happen with them:)

thank u!:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ElviraRK_PC



Finally tum agayi!😭

thank you for ur review! 😳

yeah...here I made them sisters and maybe here will be love-line between Saumya and Abhay:)

Om and Bhavya different lets see what will happen with them:)

thank u!:)



I thought that soumya and abhay will be another jodi..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lakshmi32



I thought that soumya and abhay will be another jodi..



yeap...2 crossovers in one😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Elviii 🤗
Interesting start! Switch between past and present, i want to see more of OmVya meeting, i love how unplanned and simplistic it was yet for the rest of the story, that chota sa meeting plays a big part!

Interesting, Somya and Bhavya sisters 😆 i enjoyed part 1 Elvi, jaldi update karo, i need more DistressedKara 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Wow 🤗
Interesting start
Somu and bhavya has different views
I am bit shocked to see them as sisters
Abhay and om are brothers wow
Past and present simultaneously
Loved the way you have explained everything in detail
Loved the narration
Continue soon 😊

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