Khwaishein |OmVya ft SauBhay Crossover FF|Update:CP 1 - Pg 5| 16/03/18 - Page 6

Originally posted by: ZaalimaOberoi

Elviii 🤗

Interesting start! Switch between past and present, i want to see more of OmVya meeting, i love how unplanned and simplistic it was yet for the rest of the story, that chota sa meeting plays a big part!

Interesting, Somya and Bhavya sisters 😆 i enjoyed part 1 Elvi, jaldi update karo, i need more DistressedKara 😭

Originally posted by: Deepa219

Wow 🤗

Interesting start

Somu and bhavya has different views

I am bit shocked to see them as sisters

Abhay and om are brothers wow

Past and present simultaneously

Loved the way you have explained everything in detail

Loved the narration

Continue soon 😊

Chapter 2 will come in few days:)

Phir kya hua, Elvi? Jaldi batao 😃
Kidding , take your time. I am really intrigued now. Can't wait to see what changes Bhavy's mind, and hiw they fall in love, and more importantly, why she is no longer in Om's life.
I love the past and present cuts. Excellent 1st chapter, El. 👏

Originally posted by: DivzOnAir

Phir kya hua, Elvi? Jaldi batao 😃
Kidding , take your time. I am really intrigued now. Can't wait to see what changes Bhavy's mind, and hiw they fall in love, and more importantly, why she is no longer in Om's life.
I love the past and present cuts. Excellent 1st chapter, El. 👏

Awesome update dear

Hey finally caught up with this FF and I have to admit it is really interesting elvi 👏 Om was searching for some inspiration and he finally found one. I loved the scene where he saw her for the first time. You wrote it really well I could picture them coming from opposite sides and Om clicking her photos. Can't wait for the next chap girl. Keep it coming 👍🏼