Rikara OS - Quality Time (HOLI SPECIAL)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I tried to give Rikara some private moments along with some husband wife talks...


Standing underneath the shower she closed her eyes and let the warm water soothe the tiredness of her body..

The day has been a hectic one for her...after all today, she has celebrated her very first holi as an Oberoi bahu ...there were so many works to be done..she attended the guests, helped the servants, ran behind Anika bhaujai to apply colors on her face and even did tapoori dance with her Rudy bhaiya..and now, standing under the shower, she could feel that her whole body is aching..

Closing her eyes, she remembered the days she has spent in Bareilly, playing holi with her best friends, her bachha party..they used to apply color on each other, eat laddoos, finish several glasses of lassi..she even used to hide behind the Shankar ji's mandir with the young girls of her neighbourhood, just to have the taste of bhaang, gingerly..she still remember the day when her mother took her class for having bhaang and dancing with the children like an unencumbered teenager..her lips curved into a smile as those moments started flashing before ger eyes..

She has realized that her life has been changed..she's not the same small town girl anymore..she's now the wife of a renowned artist..she's a daughter in law of an aristocratic family..she herself is a mature woman now, who has a big family of her own to handle...

She was rubbing her skin unconsciously which was more like scratching to remove the faint stains of colors from her body while thinking about all the changes of her..he entered the bathroom and snaked his arms around her exposed belly..her expression softened in a moment and she leaned into his hard chest closing her eyes..he smiled and nuzzled behind her ears..she moaned and his hands started wandering down to her arms..

"What happened..?", he asked while scouring her skin..

"Nothing..", she sighed.."But I'm so tired, Omkara..", she breathe out, her eyes still closed..

"It's obvious to get tired after the long session of running, dancing and applying colors, baby..", he chuckled..

"Not so funny..", she pouted..

"Hmm..", he said not trying to laugh, listening to his chiraiyya's childlike voice..but his expression changed in a moment looking at the scratches on her skin which she has gifted herself.."Who told you to play with colors..?? Look what you've done to your skin..", he said strictly, rubbing her skin with his thumb..

"I love colors, Om..", she said turning to face him.."You know it was my first holi with our family..and I really enjoyed..", she said and her eyes twinkled with excitement..

Omkara looked at the woman who was looking at him with childlike excitement..she never fail to surprise him..it's miraculous how every time her eyes manage to express her inner feelings..he couldn't but smile..

Scouring the colors from her cheek, he asked, "Okay..but how can it be your first holi with my family, Ri..?? Even last year you were here.."

He could see her expression changing with his words..suddenly all the excitement turned into disappointment..

"Kya hua, Gauri..??", he asked her worried..

She looked down to avoid the eye contact with him..she knows that he's already guilty for leaving her alone..for not treating her as his wife..for not giving her the place she deserved in his life..and today, when they're carrying all the love in their heart for each other, she doesn't want to make him remember about those days...she has been with him for more than a year now..there was a time when she stayed with him and his family disguised as Chulbul..she got the chance to know him by staying his side..but she was deprived of the rights of being a wife, of being a daughter in law..she wasn't allowed to celebrate with him...but she could never complain..he didn't know that she was his wife..his family had no idea about her..and she herself never expected to be loved by him, by his family...and she's thankful to her Shankar ji for whatever she has today...

Omkara made her look at him.."Say it, Gauri..I know there's something bothering you..", he said caressing her cheek..

She looked at him.."Woh hum...", she stopped before continuing in a barely audible tone, "That time I wasn't living in your house as your wife..I was disguised as Chulbul.."

As her words made their way to his mind, he closed her eyes feeling guilty... and she could see him cursing himself..

"Omm..!!", she called for him and he looked into her eyes..

"I'm sorry, Gauri..", he said hiding his face in the crook of her neck..

"Ssshhh..!!", she rubbed his back trying to calm him down.."Hum saath hain, Omkara..we are together..we love each other and we've promised each other a lifetime to spend together..don't think about anything that makes our moments bitter..those days are gone...", she said while he hugged her tightly not wanting to let her go..she wrapped her arms around his waist and murmured, "My husband is being a baby..and now I've to handle a chotu Kara.."

He giggled and raised his face from the flex of her neck to look at her..she was staring him with puppy eyes..he kissed her nose and said, "If you try to be all this cute, I don't think I'll be able to let you rest tonight.." He winked and his eyes gleamed mischievously..

Gauri's mouth shaped in a perfect O watching her husband flirting..he smiled at her and turned her back towards him..she rested her head on his shoulder while he helped her to wash away the colors from her body...

"Now your husband is going to give a you a pleasing message and all your tiredness will vanish..", he said wrapping the towel on her body..


And I just realized that shower thing is fun to work on.. 😆

Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago

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Cinnamon_Kisses thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Me first! 😛
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Unres

Long Overdue ... *Sorry*

First of all Tasnim you have immense potential when it comecomes to writing ... You make me feel so proud ... Here you have held RiKara to their core ... Subtle understanding and romantic.

Gauri standing in the shower after a tiring holi celebration ... I am so glad you chose such a scene ... And not just any typical rang lagaao nacho gaao scene.

She recalls her Bareilly days ... Again ... Its not just a bathroom scene ... You have given characterization here ... Gauri has changed into a different mature woman ... She is not the little chirraiyya now ... She is Nandi ki Gauri ...

He steps into the bathroom *Hotness alert* ☺️

The way they get closer and he gets upset seeing her skin ... The comfort level is amazing ... I love to imagine Omkara taking care of Gauri in such a manner ... RiKaralicious.

And then comes the conversation part ... I liked how Gauri handled her 'Chotu Kara' ... My favorite line is going to be ... "If you try and be so cute ... I don't think I will let you rest tonight" What is this man made of? Honey, caramel or brown sugar?

Omkara is feeling guilty about things that have happened in the past but the way you treated this situation makes me feel so good ... There's no drama and no hassle ... Its just traces and they have moved on ...

I love the maturity of RiKara here ... They are just living in the moment.

Above all what I liked the most was how normally a husband and wife can be with each other ... Like she is tired and he is helping her relax and then they just talk ... Yeah ... Every real couple can be so.

As in just like drama ... There is no need to initiate sensuality in every other writing ... You proved the point ... Subtle works better. I liked how there existed a need but it was more about loving each other ... Than touching each other.

This was your best Tasnim and yes ... Shower can be a good idea.

Edited by Cinnamon_Kisses - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hayeee
It was sweet and hot yet emotional
How she was there as his wife for the first time, all the dancing and playing reminding her of her youth, how her childhood , the happiness she experienced. It was sooo sweet
And then The way he hugged her, how she comforted him reminding him that was all in the past now.
It was just BEAUTIFUL Tasnim 👏
Thank you so much for gifting us something so lovely on Holi :D
Edited by GoWithTheRhythm - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This was beautiful!!
They need to talk often...it could be anything but they need to...and i loved how you got her being chulbul into this conversation.

I simply love how ri comforts kara whenever he feels guilty...they both are sweethearts❤️

Shower waala romance is mast😉😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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res - because i'm a slow reviewer but i loved it😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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n'aww!! ❤️
it was sooo romantic n cute...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I love this ❤️ You should write more often 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Another beautiful write up !!
Thank you so much for writing such lovely things ❤️
Really liked your shower idea❤️

All you writer's are talking about night but don't reach the climax😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aawww Tassooo this was so beautiful 😳 ❤️
RiKara convos ke liye taras gaye hum...these conversations are so precious...❤️ I loved it Tasnim... I so want to see something like this on RiKara... RiKara in shower aaahhh 😃 ❤️. Hot Hot ☺️

I'm waiting for more and more works from you Tasnim darling 😃 ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome loved it so much.
Fabulous superb.

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