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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

aww tasnim🤗

What an amazing shot dear

Its really sweet and romantic❤️ yet emotional

Its Her first holi in OM as a bahu and wife..reminding her the moments which she spent in bareilly

And The way he hugged her and how she comforted him when he feel guilty..loved these beautiful moments

They need to talk often..their conversation.. perfect han

Loved the idea of shower wala romance☺️

Its Beautiful ..thanks for sharing

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The_RomancePen

@The_RomancePen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Thank you so much Aaru.. 🤗 😃
I wanted to add some "AHEM AHEM" stuffs at the first place..but I changed my mind as I don't think I'll be able to do justice with all of your expectations..
Again the things is, I wanted to give them some moments and some husband wife conversation...
Hope you liked it.. 😳

More than those i loved the conversation tasnim

Only once we had a normal husband and wife conversation in ib

this was fantastic

Do write more

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: rikara94
aww tasnim🤗

What an amazing shot dear

Its really sweet and romantic❤️ yet emotional
Its Her first holi in OM as a bahu and wife..reminding her the moments which she spent in bareilly

And The way he hugged her and how she comforted him when he feel guilty..loved these beautiful moments

They need to talk often..their conversation.. perfect han

Loved the idea of shower wala romance☺️

Its Beautiful ..thanks for sharing

Thank you so much Didu.. 😃
I wanted to give them some moments..they're getting scenes of nano seconds in IB nowadays.. 😆 But that cat woman cannot write a proper convo for them.. 🥱 So I thought why don't I write something..?! 😛
I'm so glad that you liked it.. 😳
Ri has been the one who always comforted him with her mere presence.. ❤️
And Kara feeling guilty seemed very usual to me..so I added a GuiltyKara..
And I really feel Rikara should talk before makers jump into their SR track.. 😲
I got the shower wali idea while standing underneath the shower only.. 😆

Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi

More than those i loved the conversation tasnim
Only once we had a normal husband and wife conversation in ib
this was fantastic
Do write more

Bold : I achieved what I wanted.. 😳
My intention was to write a conversation for them..abd I'm glad that people liked it..
After all the appreciation I've got, I'll surely try to write more often now.. 😆

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda
I reallly loveeed it

Thank you.. 😃

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses
Me first!😛

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Unres

Long Overdue ... *Sorry*

First of all Tasnim you have immense potential when it comecomes to writing ... You make me feel so proud ... Here you have held RiKara to their core ... Subtle understanding and romantic.

Gauri standing in the shower after a tiring holi celebration ... I am so glad you chose such a scene ... And not just any typical rang lagaao nacho gaao scene.

She recalls her Bareilly days ... Again ... Its not just a bathroom scene ... You have given characterization here ... Gauri has changed into a different mature woman ... She is not the little chirraiyya now ... She is Nandi ki Gauri ...

He steps into the bathroom *Hotness alert*☺️

The way they get closer and he gets upset seeing her skin ... The comfort level is amazing ... I love to imagine Omkara taking care of Gauri in such a manner ... RiKaralicious.

And then comes the conversation part ... I liked how Gauri handled her 'Chotu Kara' ... My favorite line is going to be ... "If you try and be so cute ... I don't think I will let you rest tonight" What is this man made of? Honey, caramel or brown sugar?

Omkara is feeling guilty about things that have happened in the past but the way you treated this situation makes me feel so good ... There's no drama and no hassle ... Its just traces and they have moved on ...

I love the maturity of RiKara here ... They are just living in the moment.

Above all what I liked the most was how normally a husband and wife can be with each other ... Like she is tired and he is helping her relax and then they just talk ... Yeah ... Every real couple can be so.

As in just like drama ... There is no need to initiate sensuality in every other writing ... You proved the point ... Subtle works better. I liked how there existed a need but it was more about loving each other ... Than touching each other.

This was your best Tasnim and yes ... Shower can be a good idea.



Behnaaa.. 🤗
Yes, you're the first one to reserve and currently the last one to comment.. 😉
But don't be sorry pleej..I know you're having a hectic schedule..upar se tumhara sar dard.. 😲
I'm so so so happy that I could make you feel proud.. 😳
You're the inspiration behind this subtle, understanding and romantic Rikara..I just tried to write them the way I want them to be..
I never liked those raang lagao, bhaang peeyo aur talli hoke nacho wale Rikara..they're much more than just a happy couple to me..
Gauri thinking about those days she spent in Bareilly as a child and teenager and realizing how far she had come from those days was the base of this..I simply wanted to show the changes of her life..
Kara stepping into bathroom and I let out a sigh as I couldn't make him do anything sanskaari.. 😆
Omkara has been the most caring one..he's caring and sometimes strict..
The comfort level they share is something I cannot describe with words..
The idea of giving them a husband wife conversation was very basic..I just wanted to keep it simple and soothing..
Kara is
Yes, he was guilty for his doings of past..but they have moved on from the phase of regret and cursing..they both are mature enough to handle it when the talks take turns to the past incidents..
I try to relate Rikara to those real life couples I see before my eyes every day..life is not about being emotional and dramatic..it can be as simple as you want it to be of you know how to just live in the moment leaving all the traces of past...
Sensation is something that gives you chills through down yours spine..it can be a mere eye lock..it can be a simple touch..
I'm glad that I could do it better this time..
Thank you so much behnaaa..
This sanskaari and paglait chiraiyya labhs you too.. 🤗 😳

Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago