Our love is different rikara( part 3 pg no 3) by kavita

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Posted: 7 years ago

All character from isqabaj

But here in this story gauri family will be added

Anika gauri and bhavya are sisters they lost their parents in accident

Gauris family and oberois are friends

Three sisters are living in Oberoi mansion only

Anika married to shivaya

Om and gauri still doing their studies in same college (some thing more then that it is suspense)

Rudra bhavya in same college

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Edited by user88295853 - 7 years ago

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user88295853

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 1

This is my new ff on rikara totally different from dbo and isqabaj I hope you like it

Raj: I love you gauri

G: who the hell are I am not loving you

R: see this letter I written this letter with my blood .

G: are you mad if you want to waste blood then go and give to blood bank at least you can save a people life

Raj: please gauri dont do this to me I can't live without you

G: go and die

Raj: sure I will die for you ..

(Raj went on the top of college building)

R:(shouted)gauri I will you if you don't accept me I will fell down from here

All: please raj don't do this gauri will accept you

(Gauri closed her eyes )

G: shankarji please save he is doing more act please

(One tall boy came there he is non other then omkara )

O: raj what happened to you

R: om my dear friend from two years I am living gauri but she is not accepting me

O: what (he started laughing)

R: you think it is joke

O: you know you are mad. See here sakshi is there sneha romi everyone is. There you can't love them she is beauty queen of college or what try to understand gauri has to make suicide because she is loosing a good boy like you

R: ya you are right

(Raj came near gauri )

R: sorry sister but you are loosing a good boy like me (he went from there)

G: om (shouting )

O: what

G: I am not beautiful

O: who said you are beautiful

G: I will go and say to dadi

O: do whatever you want in home if you are ruler in college I am ruler remember it

Hi friends how it is I hope you like it give me your comments

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user88295853

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansumondal
Interesting story
Continue soon ...

thank you dear you can check first part i updated it

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Posted: 7 years ago

Looking forward to read the story...

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user88295853

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Originally posted by: Ansumondal

Looking forward to read the story...

thank you dear I will update soon

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Posted: 7 years ago

If all characters are from IB and Gauri is the daughter of Tej's sister and Jahnavi's brother doesn't it make her the sister/cousin of Omkara. I hope you are not taking it to be incest

Actually if Shivaaye is Tej's brother's son and Anika is Gauri's sister and thereby Tej's sister's daughter then it makes Shivaaye and Anika cousins so it gets inxesi there

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Originally posted by: FlauntPessimism
If all characters are from IB and Gauri is the daughter of Tej's sister and Jahnavi's brother doesn't it make her the sister/cousin of Omkara. I hope you are not taking it to be incest
Actually if Shivaaye is Tej's brother's son and Anika is Gauri's sister and thereby Tej's sister's daughter then it makes Shivaaye and Anika cousins so it gets inxesi there

. Dear if tej sister and jhanvi brother is married then anika can marry shivaya na how they become cousins

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Originally posted by: user88295853
. Dear if tej sister and jhanvi brother is married then anika can marry shivaya na how they become cousins

As per the lines in the foreword, it seems you have kept the relations same as IB so I assumed that Shivaaye is Tej's nephew or the son of Tej's brother. So Anika's mom who is Tej's sister automatically becomes the sister of Shivaaye's father too making Shivaaye n Anika cousins

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: FlauntPessimism

As per the lines in the foreword, it seems you have kept the relations same as IB so I assumed that Shivaaye is Tej's nephew or the son of Tej's brother. So Anika's mom who is Tej's sister automatically becomes the sister of Shivaaye's father too making Shivaaye n Anika cousins

any way you liked the story

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In fact all three couples here become cousins making this incest

I suggest you either change their religior/and thereby surnames (as cousin marriage happens in Muslims) or make the sisters the children of some close family friends of Oberoi who started living with the Oberois after the death of their parents

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