OS ~ Not everything is lost (ft. ShivIka RiKara RuVya)(On Track)

Originally posted by: rikarafan1

Thank you so much for writing this one

I had always wanted them to show each of them supporting one another. But the show has dumbed down all the characters to literally nothing.

It should have actually been the way you have penned it down.

Very beautifully written ⭐️

Wonderful plot as always Lizzie! ❤️

This is exactly what should have happened..it would have bought the show better trps to but then again..CVs..

Anyways I love the first part so much..how all six are helping each other..it's veey sweet :)

I can't wait to the see the character development in everyone and also how their relationships changes for better :D

Originally posted by: ..LittleLiar..

Wonderful plot as always Lizzie! ❤️

This is exactly what should have happened..it would have bought the show better trps to but then again..CVs..

Anyways I love the first part so much..how all six are helping each other..it's veey sweet :)

I can't wait to the see the character development in everyone and also how their relationships changes for better :D

Amazing loved it so much.
Superb.

Very well written... You aptly described their feelings
AniRiVya being support system for their better halves
Loved it

hmm not happening in serial but yeah i can so imagine everyone'sreaction

That's how a meaningful track for any story should be. 👏 startin with the struggles and conflicts, the doubts and insecurities, the retrospections and introspections.

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

That's how a meaningful track for any story should be. 👏 startin with the struggles and conflicts, the doubts and insecurities, the retrospections and introspections.

I am glad that you gave each character a role in the struggle, the men working things out based on their basic nature and the women doing what they can, characters being realistic and facing issues head on.

Well done.⭐️ hope the makers take a page out of this and do something sensible.