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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Hey there...recently finished reading this. And like all your other works, loved this one too! :)

There's something charming about imagining Arnav-Khushi's high-school romance, if I may call this that. All their cute moments during school were so adorable. ^_^ The reunion was great too. and the dating phase post that was just lovely and passionate. *sigh*

I liked how the story was developed over the years. How their love evolves with time. Also, all the characters were well-portrayed be it Arnav, Khushi or Aman-Priya, Mrs. Raizada and Shyam too. His obsession and psychotic behaviour came across quite effectively.

One of my favourite parts of this story was the secret wedding. I have had this strange fascination for it since I watched Saathiya and to think of it happening with Arnav-Khushi was just awesome and so exciting!! 😆

One thing I had hoped for was witnessing Khushi bridging the gaps between Arnav and his brother and maybe, father too. But I guess that was not on the cards.

Anyway, I loved the FF, really enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing!

P.S. Congratulations on the publication of your e-book! :)

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

I read it again and fell in love with the story all over again❤️

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Wow. This is a beautiful journey. I loved everything about this fic. You've done more than a commendable job at it !

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Thanks for this lovely tale. I have finally gotten sometime to read this tale and I am awestruck and enchanted by the progress in Arshi's relationship over a span of 10-14 years. It was definitely not love at first sight but love that was meant to be long lasting and eternal. The characterization in this tale is amazing. I love how Arshi fell in love and how they surpassed many obstacles and challenges to be together. It's definitely a sweet tale.

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shalbi

@shalbi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#505

this is an awesome work I came across and I m truly glad that I did.. I couldn't have missed sucha a great work..

I sometimes wonder how you guys write so well and I was so addictive to the story that despite my exams, I m reading this and I don't know what I will be writing in papers tomorrow..

An indeed fabulous work..

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Finally I completed reading IMTBE today. It was such a good journey with high school, college and so much more.
Who would have thought Aman would do such a thing!! I mean he could have spread rumors to push Arnav but given that Khushi is his own cousin - was quite a shock. After all Aman only knew about Arnav's feelings and not Khushi's. Aman was a matchmaker since high school. 😉 and mujhe Priya and Aman ki daal bahut time se kaali lagti thi.. Actually school time se hi.. Waise I love kaali daal😆
Shyam was quite a psycho - the silent, obsessive lover who was delusional also.
I feel bad for Arnav and his family to have gone through so much , to lose so much in riots. It must e really hard to get over loss of someone so close and that too due to human thoughts and actions on the name of religions.
Aradhna is one cool mother. Akash is awesome. So funny with his Bhabhi thing..😛 He is the coolest devar.
It's insane that people believe in kundlis & all in 21st century but I guess it's more because that they don't want to take a risk with the live sof their loved ones. But times are surely changing.
Priya is surely crack to have undergone C-section just to have her baby on the same day as Khushi's. I'm sure their daughters could be best friends even if they are born a week apart as per her normal delivery status.
I would have loved to know if relationship between Arnav and his father got better. Also if arnav accepted Ayushmaan as his brother or not?
Thank you for this amazing journey.😳