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Arshi143143

@Arshi143143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

Your story is just amazing.. I read all the threads in one go.

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Arshi1195

@Arshi1195

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Posted: 11 years ago

#492

I'm surprised that I hadn't read this ff before! It's such a beautiful story :)

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kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#493

I just loved reading this story.
You sure have a way with your words. They just transported me back to my school days which is like 15 years ago. I'm so glad I read this story, it made me dig a lot of beautiful memories from my brain archives 😊

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#494

awesome story there were so many ups and downs but they got there in the end

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aachal20

@aachal20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#495

I love this is most realistic story .and I have read it fully you are amaging writer.I love it.

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#496

What a beautiful journey this has been Chaitu... I am in love with these Arnav and Khushi... very realistic and idealistic. From the wonder years of school and college to the birth of their baby... this story has been a delight to read. I wish I had been along with you, while you were posting the chapters... to feel the excitement of what was to happen next. Not only the leads, but the other characters as well were very beautifully etched. The wonderful scenarios of school, took me down memory lane and even I recollected some similar situations that had happened in my life. Shyam's character even though negative, I like the demented feel you gave to it... Trust me, I am not exaggerating, but this has happened to me in reality too... People and their psyotic behaviour!! Anyways... thank you for giving us such a beautiful story that I could read... eventually! 😃

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charmfriend

@charmfriend

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Posted: 10 years ago

#497

Hi.. I came across ur ff recently.. It's wonderful.. U r an excellent writer.. Pls continue writing...

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charmfriend

@charmfriend

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Posted: 10 years ago

#498

Hi.. I came across ur ff recently.

It's wonderful... U r an excellent writer.. Pls continue writing.

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undercoverhappy

@undercoverhappy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#499

fantastic this FF took me 1 week to read yes i agree as a writer u hv come a very long way

really happy to read abt the manglik bit u did justice to this topic

please continue writing

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redpetals123

@redpetals123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#500

Hey dear, Its a wonderful ff, loved reading, a childhood love turned into love of their life, so many years of togetherness after facing all the hurdles finally they became one.

Its written beautifully all the characters were apt. I loved aman and priyas character their friendship with arshi.

Even I loved the creepy shyam, though he was not tht creepy but I think he was apt.

Over all it was a nice journey penned beautifully with all the passion and romance.

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story.

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