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Completed the story in last 2 days...its just too awesome...throughout the earlier chapters I missed my school days so much...teachers day...food-fair...farewell...loved that cute teenage ArShi...then 3 years later their reunion...their dating...taking time for each other despite academic commitments...some little fights...lots of romantic moments...and then comes the separation...for two years...for me his confession and proposing marriage were enough to make up his immaturity of handling her confession...and what follows after that is so beautifully written...it feels so real...as if happening before my eyes...and that Shyam...loved it how u portrayed him as a patient of neurosis...really really fabulous...I'm glad I didn't miss the beautiful piece of work...

Finally

Finally finished the beautiful story of Arnav and khushi.
Sorry i was so engrossed in the story that i forgot to
comment in thread six . Love arhi's friends especially
Aman. Loved all the following :
1) arnav's anxiety over khushi and his mad rush to
the hospital.
2) their heart to heart talk.
3) their wedding
4) their train interaction.
5) shyam's and khushi's confrontation
6) Garima's confrontation with khushi.
7) the grand finale 👏 .
I truly enjoyed reading this story. I am happy I came across
this story and had the pleasure of reading it. Hope to see more
Of your future works.

read in a go .loved it so much

Hey! What can I say except brilliant brilliant brilliant👏
I was totally blown off by the flawlessness of your story. And to be honest there are very few stories on the forum that respect all aspects of story writing, for, content and language and yours is one of those. Also, I must thank you for enriching my language as well, you vocab is really amazing. And now to our beloved Arnav and Khushi, what can I say but that everyone is meant to love them... eventually. And your Arnav was fantastic with all his flirtyness and so was khushi with her blatant sexuality. Love everything about this story and I am really glad that so many months back, when I hadn't even read half of it, I had known that this would most definitely be one of my favorite Arhi fictions and could I be more right! Love you for writing IMTBE.

Re-reading the story for the third time; Aah, the nostalgia! I am still optimistic about a sequel, though. 😛 [I know I'm bugging you with this since long, but patience always pays off!]

P.S Do you actually mind be trailing your profile for other stories? I don't know why am I such a laggard while tagging on stories.
Just saw Much Ado About Nothing... Will give it a go after Opposites Do Not Attract- since it's a completed tale, it's worth it! I'll not even get the opportunity to be eager to know about the forthcoming chapters, as in your current ongoing ones!😆

Hi,

you must be thinking, why I'm writing here, although the story ended more than 4 months ago. Actually what I'm writing today I wanted to write it 4 months ago after the story had ended, but then I also didn't want it to be done in quick and only few sentences.

So days and weeks passed and with every day and week passing, I more and more felt, that it's now too late and that the right time is gone. But today I found the right time as it's been almost 1 year, that you had started this wonderful story.

So let me go 12,5 months back. It was a damn hard time, from one day to another I was like many others left alone without my "drug" IPKKND. Slowly slowly I was suffering from the lack of my daily dose of drug, but luckily I got the hint, that here on IF there are several "drug dealers", also known by the masked term "author", who provide one with almost same stuff like the one mentioned above. 😊

And I took what I could get to fill the gap, which the end of our show had left. And it helped, but still my hunger wasn't sated. So I kept observing the "drug market" on IF. 😃 And it was about three weeks later, when I found a new dealer, calling himself "Eccentrica", with his own created drug named "IMTBE".

But to be honest, I just got to the second chapter, when there I read

Originally posted by: Eccentrica

A chirpy thirteen year old that she was, Khushi had absolutely no worry in the world.

Thirteen year??? Come on, that's stuff for kids, but not for me. So I stopped there and left. About two weeks later, it was the 2nd January, I had vacation, so had more time and was bored and while observing the market once again I ran into "IMTBE". I thought, hmm better than nothing. At that time IMTBE was 10 chapters big and after 10 chapters I was: "Wow, that's amazing stuff, one of the best I had till yet." This "author" has to become one of my "dealers". So I used the code word, which is used in this line of business to ask a dealer to supply one with stuff.

"Please PM me" 😆

And I'm so glad I did this that day, else I would have missed one of my favourite and best "dealer" and next to IMTBE also L3.

In the end of the first chapter, you have written

Originally posted by: Eccentrica

Little did she know that this was not going to end so soon...

So true ... also for me and I'm glad it didn't end so soon and glad, that you had started during IMTBE also writing L3, else I would have felt after ending IMTBE same like after the show had ended.

What else can I add? Only

THANKS 👏

for giving me (us) such wonderful stories and wish, that you will continue for very very long.

All the best for future.

Finally I have finished reading this story and the entire journey is wonderful. It even brought back some of my school and college memories :). Each and every chapter and characters you portrayed so well. I have huge smile on my lips while reading epilogue and this is how a story should always end . I have no doubt that you are an excellent writer and I hope you will write many more arshi stories with different genres. Good luck.

Beautifully written...this story is no less than a movie...I could visualize the situations, characters...the leads meeting when they are in teens...eventually fallen in love and stood the storm that raised in their lives and finally married with elders blessings...the role of friends in their lives is commendable...best friends are meant to be...Aman has planted the rumor about Arnav and Khushi initially which later was reciprocated well by both and slowly grew fonder about each other...When Aman took Priya's help to track khushi...I felt that there is more to their relationship and felt happy that they are together...the friends Felt nostalgic about the teachers day celebrations, sports day, annual day...all the initial episodes took me back to my school days...thanks for that...I was so enthusiastic reading those chapters and may be that is the reason it hooked me to this story and made me complete it...the way the story progressed through years has kept me glued to it...there was lavanya in school...I have expected some thing on the lines of didi tera jethji deewana kind...like some body else will be enacting ASR during their farewell...but did not expect khushi to enact ASR, that was Awesome...in spite of having their ups and downs in their relationship they have not neglected their studies... I have to appreciate you for showing the leads not neglecting studies and both have studied hard and stood in a respectable positions today...khushi was confident in Arnav when she placed her first call to him to pick her up when she was stuck in rain...they could have the gap which the Harvard news created...had Arnav listened to Aman...Khushi's love was not reciprocated by Arnav as expected as he was still tied up with his past...the 2 year break has taught him what he was supposed to do...Aman was face less in IPK but you have shown him as a best friend, match maker, cousin, lover...Shyam is a child who did not get his parents attention and he grew up a cynical...he love was not reciprocated...Arnav and Aman have correctly perceived him from the initial days...Akash also played a very important role in identifying Shyam's true nature initially...when Arnav came back from Harvard and he went to meet khushi and her phone rang with the caller id shyam...I was skeptical about what might have happened...but further chapters relieved me like nothing untoward has not happened...the secret marriage and the secret coming out the way it has come out was very well handled...I just loved Aradhana...she loves her son very much...very understanding lady...loved this story very much...thanks for a wonderful story.