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Posted: 11 years ago
I had a journey of a lifetime aling with ur story. Plz dont stop writjng on arshi. N add me too in ur pm list
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous story and perfect ending ...love your writing style and your stories 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
kya maza kya maza. ..

shyamu ki kya bezzati hui but I really feel bad for his parents.
I feel good for Arnav Khushi Aman Priya N.K Ayushman and also bonus jodi Akash Payal. :)
I feel good ki eventually after facing all the difficulties., shyam and horoscopes. Arnav Khushi mil hi gye.

I really love the way you knit out the whole story. agar mere paas time hota ho exams ka tension nahi hota toh main saari story ek sath padti. I loved it bas! and I can't believe k this is your first ever pieces of writing on IF.
Thank you for writing :)

p.s I really loved the stunt pulled out by Priya about her's and khushi's delivery. tauba tauba! I don't want anyone to do this in real life.

love you chaits!
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow... what a story it is... passionat...intense.. emotioanl.. drama .. evrything..

starting frm a school crush to dating.. then as lovers and finally as life partners... such a beautiful journey...so beautifully penned down...

i loved it so so so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just started reading this FF today and I am already on Ch. 12 while working 😉

Loving every bit of bit.. and reminds me of good old highschool days 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was what could be expected of Shyam, right!!
What did Garima tell Khushi?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Garima loves Khushi a lot, so couldn't believe those accusing words that Shyam had said about her daughter.But when she saw Arnav at the house, all her hopes and trusts were broken.
Glad that Arnav didn't leave Khushi's side and stayed with her throughout the conversation.
Aradhana taking the role of the mother-in-law and supporting her Khushi whom she had always adored and now accepted as her daughter-in-law.
Akash, Aman and Priya the friends who always supported them and today also.
Sashi understood the matter and even made Garima understand.
Being a mother, she just wants her daughter's happiness, so accepted their decision and relation.
Things have turned out well enough now, but what will the talk to Jha family lead to? Hope that things turn out well.
Great chapter.
Brilliantly written.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shyam Manohar Jha and his failed plans.He would never have succeeded in his plans to separate Arnav and Khushi and destroy them.
Now every thing is all right,
the Marriage is on Cards..
That was a happy wala chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
The way the marriage was described, from bride descending the stair to the groom watching her lost, it was so beautifully potrayed.
The dress of both Arnav and Khushi was also perfectly described.
Finally, the marriage took place with happiness all around and blessings of all the elders, Priya's gesture of doing the work a sister should do, was touching.That was for the happiness of a mother who always supported her children.
The night after followed by the rememberence of past memories and promise of togetherness for the future.
That was the best chapter.
Loved every bits of it..<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
The epilogue was another beautiful one marking the extention of family for both the couples Arnav-Khushi and Aman-Priya.
Khushi and Priya had wanted to give birth at the same time, so Priya insisted on C-section even when it was not the due date, and the logic being that they would not just be sisters but best friends too, that was cute one.
Arnav wanting to name their daughter as Anjali and Khushi agreeing to it was touching.
The fact that the rumor of Arnav-Khushi dating and the matchmaking followed was planned by Aman is out now, I hadn't wanted it to remain hidden.
That was a Beautiful one..

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