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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 11 (Previous part : Part 10 )


"Hello Lady Imli!" Vivaan went near the lady "Welcome! Welcome!" he said as he took her hand to kiss to greet her which she it away immediately "It's really a pleasant surprise to see you here!" he continued.
"I think you are fully out of your mind with your drinks!" she said pointing at the glass on his hand and went inside to greet others.
"Nice to meet you Highness!" she said before turning towards the Prince, showing her teeth "Hello Suraj!"
"Hello Imli!" he goes near her to do a courtesy hug "Welcome!" he said and distanced himself while Miss. Rosella and Pakhi saw them with no interest.
"I have brought a small gift for you Highness!" she said as she opened the box she was holding.
"Oh! It wasn't needed!" Queen said.
"It is!" she said.

Pulling out a heart shaped shinning Christmas tree ornament which might be a silver plated, she turned towards Suraj.
"Oh! It's so beautiful!" Queen appreciated.
"Suraj!"
"Yes!" Suraj who was not all seeing what she was doing, gave his due attention to her.
"Can you please put this in its place?"
"Sure!" and he took it in one gest from her hand.
"Please take care of it!" she said passing a smile to him as his lips were pressed in a straight line.

Right at the moment he put, Vivaan came near the group.
"Sorry to disturb!" facing Imli "I have few things to discuss with her!" and he pulls her to a side by her hand against her will as she smiles in a way showing her hatred to his act.
"Why did you invite her?" Prince asked his mother as he saw the lady to be out of range.
"I thought you would be happy!" Queen replied.
Not knowing what to say to his mother he goes near his sister.

"This is my last year gift!" she says showing a beautiful doll to her tutor.
"It's really so beautiful!" touching it "Can't believe he did this!"
"Father is so talented!" Princess says with a sad tone as Suraj comes and sits by his sister.
"I know how it feels to loose someone close!" Miss. Rosella said smiling at her.
"Here is another gift I received one!" she said showing a mask "By the way, how do you celebrate your Christmas?" facing her tutor after passing a smile at her brother.
"Hmm! Me and my father decorate our Christmas tree, then bake cakes and cookies. Sign songs and finally watch a film that my mother liked." she said.

"How is life?" Vivaan asked Imli as they were standing not so far from everyone.
Not interested to reply him, she turns her head and spots Chakor "Who is she?" she questions as she sees the trio smile and laugh.
"Princess Pakhi's new tutor!" he said not interested of changing the subject.
"She has a weird taste for shoes I see!" Imli commented seeing Chakor's sneakers.

***

And the next day started with Chakor taking notes.
"Lord Vivaan is not at all seeing the royal family in a friendly way!" typing on her pc "Lady Imli seems to wanting somethings but don't know what! May be Queen have called her to make the Prince accept his position. It seems like Prince is more than friendly with her!"
Removing her hand "Where is Prince in all this? What about him? His wish?"

"Hello!" Pakhi enters the room making Chakor to shut her laptop immediately.

"Ready for lessons?" she asks her student.
"I'm in a mood to do cookies!" is the reply she gets along with a happy smile.
Facing the little girl "I can't do that now! We have to study!"
"I want cookies!"
"If you want, I can ask to do someone to for?"
"We are doing it!"
"What if someone says something to Queen?"
Entering fully the room as the door closed automatically behind her "What if I say the real name to my Mother, Miss. Chakor Bhuvan Lal?" with a smirk.


*******

Thank you buddies for reading!
Hope you all liked this part!
Let me know your thoughts!
Next part on Monday!
See you then!

I.E. A small discussion about the story if you want to participate, it's in the next post ( Let's Discuss )


Next part : Part 12


- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
#82
Hello lovely people!

As you all know that week-end is coming!
So thought to have a small interactions with you all!
Not a big one but yes, you can post your thoughts here!

What is it?
Well! As you have read all the parts of HK until now, you might have few thoughts and ideas of how the story is going to go.
As I know how it will be, wanted to see what all you think.

What to do?
Nothing!
I mean you have to reply with just few words to the questions!

What will be the plus point of this?
Not a big thing!
Just small interactions during week-end!

Negative point?
Consummation of our time!

What are the questions?
Here it goes:
1) What is the next thing Miss. Rosella will break according to you? (Only one thing you can say!)
2) Will real Miss. Rosella enter the screen or not?
3) Why is Miss. Imli is here? (One word is enough to say I think)
4) Do you think Pakhi will tell about Chakor to others? (Just yes or No if you don't want to detail!)
5) What can be the reason behind Suraj's hesitation to take the throne? (Any guess?)

That's all buddies!
It's your choice to select your way to answer!

See you all!

Advance Happy Pongal!
Advance Happy Sankranti!

- Maithili

(Please no quote, only replies!)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
1)might be Prince n queen trust.
2)Yes,real miss Rosella will cum back when Prince n chakor will be in love n when he wants to marry her so stop their marriage as I think imli wants to marry Prince for money n property n so imli might bring d real miss Rosella n tell everyone dat she is not miss Rosella but chakor a journalist.

3)imli wants to marry Prince for his fame,money n property.

4)No as she likes chakor who understands her very n might get ok also becoz of chakor.

5)might be something happened in his personal life or he wants his sister also try to get d throne or he is getting scared to take responsibility so soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting update👏
So the lady is Imli, she seems to be interested in Suraj
Suraj is not so fond of her😆
Loved the moment of Chakor, Suraj & Pakhi😊
Chakor has a good observation about royal family😊
Pakhi is aware of Chakor's identity 😲
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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1 Miss Rosella will break the trust of prince
2 I think yes maybe when everyone will start trusting Chakor
3 Imli is maybe after money or the fame
4 No she likes Chakor
5 I think something related to his father or maybe a bad past
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting update!
Imli is after Suraj but he isn't interested though the queen mother thinks he is.
Vivaan is after Imli, is it for her money and rank?
Chakor is getting insecure, how can she think Suraj likes Imli?
Loved Chakor-Pakhi bond, poor Chakor she misses her mother just like Pakhi misses her dad.
Pakhi is very smart, how did she find out Chakor's truth?

Eagerly waiting for next.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting questions Maithu.
1) What is the next thing Miss. Rosella will break according to you?
Is it possible to break a silver plated ornament? if so then she'll break Imli's gift.

2) Will real Miss. Rosella enter the screen or not?
I think she will and then Chakor's truth will be out in front of everyone.

3) Why is Miss. Imli is here?
Simple, she's after Suraj, the future king.

4) Do you think Pakhi will tell about Chakor to others?
She could tell Suraj, but I think she won't tell anyone because Chakor will ask her not to. They like each other and have bonded very well.

5) What can be the reason behind Suraj's hesitation to take the throne?
I think he needs to find a wife soon and he isn't ready for commitment as he hasn't found his true love.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Di ...
THis story is so interesting that i went to find the name of the movie
I googled it and finally found the movie's name .
"A Christmas Prince"

I love Prince and Princess story .
Thank u so much for writing this story .
Eagerly waiting to see how this story would proceed 😊

And wish u a happy pongal di 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shar456

1)might be Prince n queen trust.

2)Yes,real miss Rosella will cum back when Prince n chakor will be in love n when he wants to marry her so stop their marriage as I think imli wants to marry Prince for money n property n so imli might bring d real miss Rosella n tell everyone dat she is not miss Rosella but chakor a journalist.

3)imli wants to marry Prince for his fame,money n property.

4)No as she likes chakor who understands her very n might get ok also becoz of chakor.

5)might be something happened in his personal life or he wants his sister also try to get d throne or he is getting scared to take responsibility so soon.


Thank you dear for reading and replying for the queries.
It is so nice to see your views on different points.

Well! A lot of things are likely to what this story reveals.

Thank you once again.
See you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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1) What is the next thing Miss. Rosella will break according to you? (Only one thing you can say!)
Maybe Imli's gift, or some of her belongings and then Imli will go crazy, while Prince will defend Chakor, I mean Miss. Rosella.
2) Will real Miss. Rosella enter the screen or not?
Definitely yes. But not yet. She will come in the moment when Chakor will want to tell Princ the truth on her own.
3) Why is Miss. Imli is here? (One word is enough to say I think)
She is behind money and crown. She doesn't care so much for Suraj I think.
4) Do you think Pakhi will tell about Chakor to others? (Just yes or No if you don't want to detail!)
No. They bond so well. But she will continue to blackmail her with that, for her cute little demands.
5) What can be the reason behind Suraj's hesitation to take the throne? (Any guess?)
Maybe taking the throne means he needs to get married soon but he doesn't want or it can be something related to Vivaans jealousy.

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