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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update👏

Loved the bonding of Chakor &Pakhi😊
So Vivan is next in the line to take crown
Looks like Chakor &Pakhi are not fond of him , loved the way Chakor teased Vivan😆
Chakor thinks Suraj is suitable for crown but there is some mystery about Suraj😉
Suraj was playing piano , is there any significance
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!
Glad you liked this update too!
Happy that the bonding are remarked
Yup it's Vivaan after Suraj
Soon the mystery about Suraj will come out! ;-)
Not a big significance, all his talents will be related!
See you
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Maithu

see I finsihed soon

very nice and smooth

hmm so villian is Vivaan... always eyeing for power.

am really enjoying Chakhi very much. poor girl is yearning for being to be treated as normal next door girl... love the bonding.

Chakor and foodie ha ha ha imagined the way she would gulped her cake.

So the prince is melancholic... that lovely, i always wanted Suraj to be the one who is a musician or to play instrument as one who plays instrument is considered to be subtle always.

for a change dude is not with his rifle hhahah... sorry I keep referring to the show na!

nice one waiting for the meeting!

Hey Sumi!
Thank you for taking your time and reading it in a busy schedule!
Happy you enjoyed reading it!
Hahahaha Vivaan! Well someone will also join the club of villain soon!
Glad you liked the bonding! Yes dear! Pakhi is expecting everyone to reat her normally! :-|

Well this Prince has that talent too! Shooting! LOL

And no need to say sorry dear!
The thing is when I write I don't see the link with the real story, so it's interesting to know!

Soon soon! See you!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update!

Loved Chakor-Pakhi bond.
Vivaan cares too much about titles and power. It seems he isn't on good terms with his cousins.
Chakor has started to like Suraj.
Suraj the musician, that's a surprise.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank you so much buddy!
Happy you loved Chakhi moment
Yup dear! He is not so liked by SuKhi
Chakor liking Suraj! Kind of yes Heee
Well a lot of surprises are waiting!
See you soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
Part 10 (Previous part : Part 9 )


Getting her phone out of her pocket, putting on both the mask of being Chakor and Miss. Rosella, she started to film him playing piano as she entered the room.
"You have talents!" she says, immediately hiding her phone behind her back as she saw him stop playing and turning towards the door.
"I thought it was Mother!" he said what he thought when he heard footsteps as he got up "My father made me take lessons!"
She simply smiled in reply.

And the Prince continued "He used to say that music is the best way to connect with our soul!"
"I agree!" she said "He was different! Unique King! And I think no one can replace him!" she said thinking.
Taking one step forward "He is replaceable!" he said.
"I didn't mean that!" putting on step forward, seeing him in his eyes as he looked at her "You are eligible to take his place if I can say."
He smiled at her as he took another step towards her.

And there she puts her question "But I heard you are planning to abdicate! Is it true?"
"And to do what?" he turned her question.
"May be girls, wine and parties!" she said with an unknown smile.
"This is what you think about me or what you heard from the outside world?" he questioned her not taking her remark on him as serious as they were just 2 steps away from each other.
"Then why don't you take the power?"
"It's not that easy!"
"Then?"
"I need to go!" checking his watch "Mother called for me minutes back!"
"But" and he already left her alone in that room.

***

Evening arrived and place transformed in to fairy one with the decoration and lightings to start the Christmas time.
10 to 15 people were present in a room, including the Queen, Miss. Rosella, Pakhi, Miss. Girija and Vivaan.
And right at the moment, Suraj entered the room while Miss. Girija brought a big box near the half decorated Christmas tree.

"King made this things himself."
As Vivaan was close to it, he took out an object "And he used to say that this is an elephant when it looks mostly like a bear!" he said in a not so happy to be here tone.
"Every year, he makes gifts with his hands to give and it is so precious to us." Queen.
"Elephant or bear, the warmth and love are important in being a family." Suraj said nearing his mother.
As Vivaan put that object on the tree and moved, Queen continued "It's always a special day for you to see all close members, family and friends from long time." she said as she took a box from the table in front of her.
"And new friend too!" Princess said seeing Miss. Rosella who returned the smile, not only to her but to her brother who was seeing them with a smile.

"Here it is! A special gift that he must have hid last year before" as she tried to open "Before going"
"Let me help you Mother!" and he opened the box for her "Where did you find it?"
"He never knows to hide things from me! I always get to see it wherever he hides!" she said taking back the opened box to pull out a handmade big hazelnut object to add beauty to the tree.
"It's beautiful!" Queen said as everyone agreed "Can you please place it for me?" queen
"Sure Mother!" Suraj said as he took it and turned to place it on the Christmas tree.

Right at that moment "Hello everyone!" A young lady in her sophisticated attire entered the room with a box in hand.

*******


Thank you so much buddies for reading and liking my writings!
So happy that you could enjoy it!
See you all tomorrow with a new part and for this evening, I will try my best to be back with Zarir!


Next part : Part 11


- Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
Interesting update👏
Loved Sukor conversation, loving the suspense around the throne👏
The Christmas party part was emotional😭
Who is the girl😲
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Wonderful update sis..
Chakor is going to break their trust towards her..coz the lil one is very much attached to her..
Vivan is very much jealous of them..
Who s tat new lady?is she realated to suraj?
I have one lady in my mind..lets check whether my guess s right or wrong..
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
Amazing update
Loved Sukor conversation, Suraj is very nice he wasn't annoyed by Chakor's probing questions.
Christmas party was emotional, Vivaan was insensitive.
Will the sophisticated lady be Chakor's rival for Suraj?

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Loved Sukor conversation, loving the suspense around the throne👏
The Christmas party part was emotional😭
Who is the girl😲
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!
Glad you loved the Sukor convo and the throne matter!
Well a lot more to come when it is for the party!
Well the girl will be revealed today! ;-)
See you!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Wonderful update sis..

Chakor is going to break their trust towards her..coz the lil one is very much attached to her..
Vivan is very much jealous of them..
Who s tat new lady?is she realated to suraj?
I have one lady in my mind..lets check whether my guess s right or wrong..
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Thank you so much sister!
Happy you liked this part too!
For sure their trust will be broken! :-|
Yup dear! Vivaan jealousy will make things go further! ;-)
Well! That lady is soon to be introduced :-)
Soon soon dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update

Loved Sukor conversation, Suraj is very nice he wasn't annoyed by Chakor's probing questions.
Christmas party was emotional, Vivaan was insensitive.
Will the sophisticated lady be Chakor's rival for Suraj?

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank you so much buddy!
Happy you loved SC moments!
You will know more about vivaan soon! ;-)
Hehehe Lady? Let's see!
Update in few hours dear!

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