Main ishq uska woh aashiqui hai meri,st 9 on pg 134 updt on Jan 29

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Hi everyone,here I am here again with an ts, for someone very special who celebrate her birthday today. Yes today is birthday of one of my loyal reader, and I want to wish her, so here is the special wish for her and she is Faria aka fari.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY FARIA
MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY
MAY GOD FULFILL ALL UR WISHES AND BLESS U WITH HIS CHOICE OF GIFT







A little gift from my side, hope u like it. A ts on our evergreen couple, Ishra.




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SHOT 1-BELOW









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SHOT 1

Raman entered the room only to see her sitting in the mid of his king size bed spreading her lehenga under the veil. He smiled seeing his bride and walked to her while she hugged her legs more into her sensing his presence.

He sat next to her and said -hey jaan, why r u nervous, it's me only. Ur raman.he said and removing her veil slowly. He look at her and raised her face by her chin. She was still looking down when he said -look at me ishita.

She raised her eyes slowly and both shared a serene smile.

Raman -so finally u r mine. Aakhir tumhe apna banaa hi liya Maine.

Ishita smiled hearing this and look down blushing.

Raman -u know, jab tu aise muskurati hai naa, toh duniya ki sabse sundar ladki lagti hai aur main sabse lucky ladka to have u in my life. He said and took her in tight hug. She just closed her eyes feeling his warmth while he start rubbing his lips on her neck making her shiver. She hold him tightly and he look into her eyes taking her permission to go ahead. She just look down blushing giving him permission .

He kissed her forehead making her close her eyes. He start kissing her softly yet passionately making her loose senses. He captured her lips again and start chewing it leisurely making her hug him tight. She too start responding to his raw touches and soon both were kissing each other hungrily, not leaving any space between them. They were breaking the kiss in need of air and again start kiss each other after catching some air. Like this they kissed for very long.

After a long and passionate kiss, Raman open the dori of her blouse and slide it little. He start kissing her shoulder, he was loving her as gently as he can cautious enough not to hurt her as it was their first time and she was bit nervous too. Ishita was also pulling him more into herself encouraging him. Soon he slide her blouse downwards making her semi nude. She hide herself in him while he start kneading her orbs over her undercloth.

She fell back giving him more access and he start dropping open mouth kisses on her neckline going down, soon he was in between her valley, loving her, kissing her deeply. Ishita was just caressing his hair inviting him more into her in pleasure and he was busy in covering her every curve. He open her undercloth and throw it apart making her bare infront of him. He make her lay down and start caressing her orbs making her loose herself completely to him. He was caressing her peaks while she was waiting for him to go ahead. He took her peaks in his mouth and start sucking it hungrily making her breath heavier, she was pulling him more into her poking her nails in his flesh. He start kissing her body more hungrily and after a long round of love making, he finally adjusted himself on her and entered into her slowly breaking her virginity. She hold him tight feeling esctatic and pain, both hold each other tightly and he waited till she felt fine, then they start rocking in sync. Both were going up and down in passion and finally he fell on her.he wrapped his arms around her and pecked in between her valley. She closed her eyes feeling loved and a tear fell off her eyes.

Both were hiding in each other hugging each other tight when he raised his head and asked -r u OK.

Ishita nodded in yes.

Raman -u must be tired naa, so jao.

Ishita smiled and snuggle into him. She kept her head on his chest and he started patting her forehead softly. Soon she was fast asleep hugging him tight while he pecked her temple and said -mera bachcha, kitna thak gaya tha, turant so gaya. He said and adjusted her head on the pillow and adjusted himself beside her. He was admiring her face while couldnot stop himself from going back to the time when they met for the first time.

Flashback

Twenty years ago, it was inter-school fancy dress competition organised by Kid's Pride school on independence day. Many kids from many schools have participated in it. Raman was a seven year old kid studying in class three. He was an all rounder, always win every competition. He dressed as raavan for the fancy dress and was sitting with his friends looking at the kids coming with their teachers. They were making fun of the kids who were poorly dressed and was teasing them. As the competition was just for lower kg, upper kg, one two and three class,so most of the kids were very small. And as raman and his friends belong to the school they were not leaving any chance to tease the kids coming from other school.

Many kids have came with their parents too. Soon the competition started and all kids started coming and doing their performance one by one. Raman and his friends were enjoying the competition when a small girl came wearing the dress of jhansi ki rani but got stuck with the mic wire and fell down, all started laughing for her when a lady came running to her and said -i told u naa ishita, wear ur spects. She said and make her wear her spects. The lady took the little girl to the stage and was about to say something when all the kids started laughing saying -chasme wali jhansi ki rani.

Principal got up and scold all the kids to be silent but no-one stopped. All were laughing and ishita ran out of the stage crying. The lady went behind ishita while raman's name was called next. He was walking to the stage but ishita was standing on the way crying. He pushed her and went showing his tongue saying -chashmish.

He went and preformed his act well. All clapped for him. After completing the act, he was going back when he saw the little girl was crying bitterly sitting alone. He thought of teasing her again. He took out a fake cockroach which he had in his pocket and walked to her slowly.she was lost in crying while he ties her shoe laces. Then he throw the cockroach on her and shouted -chashmish tere upar cockroach.

Ishita got startled hearing this,she looked around and saw cockroach on her. She got up in a jiffy all scared to run but poor girl fell off due to her tied shoe laces .she started sobbing again when he sat beside her and said -tu kaisi jkr hai, sirf roti rehti hai, aur woh bhi silent mode mein.bina awaaz ke gungi hai kya. He said and start laughing only to get slapped by someone. He got shocked and look at the person. She was ishita's teacher.

Teacher -how dare u play such stupid trick with her. Tumhe dikh nahi rahi woh kitni choti hai, she is just three. Bechari bachchi, kitni mehnat karke main isse yahan laayi thi to boost her confidence but people like u, kabhi kisi ko chain se nahi jeene dete. Yes she is dumb, bol rahi sakti. Phir bhi yahan aayi thi, just to make some friends but u know what, tum jaise bachche kisi ke dost banne ke kaabil nahi. She said and picked little ishita in her arms. She wiped ishita's tears and said -dont cry baby. I am taking u back. She said giving her water and chocolate.

Ishita took the chocolate and had the water. Her teacher went back taking ishita telling her colleague to take care of other kids while Raman was shocked hearing this. He was feeling guilty for troubling the little kid who is already in so much trouble and pain. He knows how important it to speak to express it feelings and the poor kid is dumb and he was just go on troubling her.

He went and got settled in his place. Soon the competition got over and as usual he got the first position. He went and took the prize, all were clapping for her but he was just too sad .all he can think was ishita and her crying bitterly because of him.

He went home all gloomy while his mother has made gaajar ka halwa for him. She served it to him but he wasn't able to enjoy it. All he wanted was to say sorry to the little girl. He ditched his lunch feeling guilty and went to sleep.

Later in evening, he was sitting in the playground while his friends were playing when a truck came ang stopped in their society campus. All kids ran to see what in it while Raman wasn't interested in that, he was still thinking way to say sorry to the little girl when a car came and stopped near him. He saw a couple came out with ishita. He got happy seeing her and appa said to amma -u wait here with ishita while I just go and show the flat to the workers so that they can organise the house.

Amma nodded and sat on the bench, little ishita was just hiding in her mother. Amma was rocking her while she was crying.

Amma -chup ho jaa kanna, very soon we will go to our house, then J will feed u something, bhookh lagi hai naa. She asked to which ishita just nodded. Amma hugged her tight trying to make her sleep while ishita was just sobbing silently.

Sometime passed, appa came to amma and she asked about bringing something for ishita.

Appa -abhi main chala gaya toh yeh log sab gadbad kar denge. Wait for sometime, soon we will be in our house.

Amma -pata nahi kya hua hai jab se school se aayi hai ro rahi hai. Chot bhi lagi hui hai, just trying to make her sleep but yeh so hi nahi rahi. She was saying while Raman felt guilty hearing this as he knows well he is the reason behind her continuous cries. He thought to do something for her and went to appa -amma and said -uncle ,mera ghar yahin hai. If u want u can come to my house, maa will surely feed her something.

Appa smiled hearing this and said -thats so sweet of u kanna, but it's really not needed. Ishu abhi chup ho jayegi. Aap jaa kar khelo.

Raman -nahi uncle, please chaliye naa. He was saying when they heard, bachcha itna keh raha hai toh chaliye naa.

They turned and saw a man standing there. He walked to them and raman said -papa, yeh ro rahi hai .she is hungry, tell uncle -aunty to come to our house.

Mr bhalla smirked and said -he is my son raman, itna keh raha hai toh chaliye naa. We will be happy. He said and appa-amma couldn't deny them. They all went to Raman's flat while ishita was just looking at Raman every now and then crying and wiping her tears. Raman was feeling so bad for her as she can't even share her pain with others .

Mr bhalla too them home and Toshiji welcomed them. She went to make tea for iyers when raman told his mother to give gaajar ka halwa to ishita. Everyone smiled and Toshiji give halwa to ishita. She looked around and amma start feeding her. Ishita was eating silently when Toshiji said -badi pyaari bachchi hai, kya naam hai puttar.

Ishita looked at Toshiji and then hide in her mother.

Amma -ishita naam hai.

Toshiji -bada changa naam hai puttar, humse baat nahi karogi ishita puttar.

Appa -woh bol nahi sakti, janam se gungi hai. He said sadly while Mr and Mrs bhalla got shocked hearing this.

Toshiji -hey matarani, yeh kaisa jurm hai, Itni pyaari bachchi aisi bezubaan.

Amma eyes got welled hearing this and said -wahin toh bhabhi ji, Murugan ne pata nahi kis galti ki saza di hai meri bachchi ko. Bol hi nahi sakti. Itni choti hai ki sign language bhi nahi jaanti, apni takleef bhi nahi bata paati hume. Subah se ro rahi hai,pata nahi kya ho gaya hai. Chot bhi lagi gayi hai. Teacher ne bataya kisi bachche ne mazaak udaya iska, pata nahi bachche bhi kaise itne heartless hote hai. Meri phool si bachchi murjha gayi. She said saying caressing ishita's hair softly while she slept hugging amma tight.

Raman felt bad for her and wanted to apologise but stopped hearing his mother's words -aise bachchon ko toh naa maar kar thik Karna chahiye. Itni choti bachchi ko bhi tang karna nahi chodte.

Raman got scared and said getting up-maa, main padhne jaa raha hoon.

Toshiji -ok go. She said and raman went inside while their parents continued talking.

Raman was talking to and fro and was thinking what to do, to tell them the truth or not.

Raman -woh toh kisi ko bata bhi nahi payegi, mujhe bhi kisi ko nahi batana chahiye, but nahi bataunga toh woh roti rahegi kyunki mujhe punishment nahi mili naa and I will go on feeling guilty. Bata deta hoon, do chaar thappad padenge but I will be guilt free. He thought and went to their parents.

They were talking when Mr bhalla said-what happened Raman, kuch chahiye.

Raman nodded in no and said -kuch batana hai.

Mr bhalla -bolo.

Raman -maine ishita ko giraya tha, I teased her, I made her cry. he said looking down feeling guilty making everyone's expression changed.

That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

Ps-160+ likes with long comments for next updt.

Edited by cutieruhi - 7 years ago
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Updated something, have a look .
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Congrats for new story Di
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Awesome shot Di
Poor Ishitha
Update soon Di
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome shot Di

Poor Ishitha
Update soon Di


Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Happy Birthday Fari..
Have a great day.
Awesome Update.
Loved it.
In present Ishra got married.
FB was nyc but painful for Ishita
She's dumb 😲
Waiting to know more about their journey.
Continue soon.
Thanks for pm.
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Happy birthday Fari
Lovely update dii
Amazing concept
Ishu is dumb😭
Feel so bad for her
Waiting for ishra to become friends
Continue soon
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Wow Fabulous start
Awesome
She iscdumb
Thats sad
Don't know sign language too😭
She cried a lot
He confessed his doings thats great👏

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