New FF-Emotions of Avni Part 10 Page 7

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Ok in My FF Ashish Mehta is not dead neither did Avni forgive him.This drama is set after Juhi drama and after 6months.Rest all are the same except Maddy bua and Kareena.
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Part 1
Neil's P.O.V

The sunlight just hit the eyes of Neil It was spoiling his sleep.He searched for the person he most loved .But she was not there.There was a voice in the washroom.She must taking a bath he thought.My best time to see her hair wet her face glowing with smile.He never thought he would see The Avni Ayesha with a smile.The one who always hated all the men and love today she was irrevocably in love with her husband so much so that she became Ananya Verma once again to save me from Juhi.She is absolutely Miss Ajooba.

Neil just heard the sound of door open and he opened his eyes to see his life and wife Avni.Small droplets of water were falling on Avni face and she looked just magnificent in pink color dress.

Neil (smiling)-Avni tum chali kyu jaati ho. you know that i can't wake without seeing your face..

Avni-I know but tum kafhi late aaye the rat ko so i thought not to disturb you.

Neil (Holding her hand )Now you have to sit with me.And you have to give me morning gift (with mischeivous smirk)

Avni-Neil dekho door khula hai Mishti ya koi aur aa jayega.We both have to go to office.(Trying to ignore it.

Neil-Nope I want my gift.

Avni smiling gives kiss to her husband who sometimes behaved like small child.But she loved him so much that she realsied when Juhi tried to pull a huge stunt.Vidhyut was dead while Juhi had benn thrown out of the house and the Court had given Mishti's custodt to Avni and Neil as the judge thought that Juhi was not fit to be mother

Avni-Ab bas khush mil gayi tumhe tumhari gift Mr Khanna ...

Neil-(Mischeiviously)-Nope Avni abhi poori gift kaha mili hai...

Avni-Neil tum na bahut beshram hoote jaa rahe ho.

Neil (Smiling) Accha mei beshram ...

A small little girl of 5 years knocked at the door of her Angel's room.Mishti loved her Angel.And Avni loved her too.Mishti had been through so much that the family had decided to just shower her with love the family didnot even mind when Neil and Avni mentioned of Mishti's adoption following Vidhyut's death.

Mishti-Angel Mumma ,Superman !

Avni (Opening the door)-Good morning meri sweet sweet Mishti (Hugging her)

Mishti-Gud Moring...

Neil (Smiling)-Moring nahi princess Morning...

Mishti-Angel mumma ,Superman chalo na sab bula rahe hai

Neil looked happy seeing Mishti smile but something broke in his heart.It had been six months she had called Avni her mother immediately but Neil would always remain her Superman.Was he not good to become her father.Did he do something wrong

Avni (Put hands on his arms and assured him)-Chalo Mishti.Neil tum jaldi neeche aao.Hum Mishti ke liye milk banyege. !!

Mishti-Eew !! ANgel Mumma mujhe milk bilkul pasand nahi nahi hai.Mai nai piyuge and ran away and Avni ran after her.

Neil stood there standing seeing Mishti and Avni..

Pre cap-Avni seeing news of Ashish Mehta...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting ... Continue sooon😊
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very interesting and u have beautifully written it pls update the next part soon😊
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Part 2

Avni was found running behind Mishti for milk.This was everyday routine for everybody in family.Mishti refusing milk and Avni and Neil running behind her.A lot had changed in these six months.Avni had joined back Parekh industries which she had kept on hold all these 2 years.Neil got to see completely new side of his "wifey".But the family had taught the lesson of not trusting anybody in instance.However Neil had been broken after Juhi fiasco as he repented of falling in love with her.

Avni-Bebe ye lijye aapki medicine.

Bebe-Puttar I dont like these medicines.Ye doctor kitni dawaiya khilata hai!!

Neil-Bebe filhall to lene padegi.

Prakash-Avni beta newspaper paas kar to

Avni-Jee Papa.

While giving the newspaper Avni accidently saw the headlines of the Movie section and felt a rise in her anger but controlled it in front of family.But Neil could see through the eyes of Avni.Something had happened.She had read something which she was hiding.

Neil-Kya Baat hai Avni.Anything special in movie section.

Avni-No nothing NeilJust a news of Ashish Mehta coming to Mumbai with his son Aman Mehta.

Everybody stopped eating except Mishti who was in her own world.They all knew how much she changed hearing her father's name.Neil got worried for Avni.He knew she had never forgiven the man and plus she had lost her brother to him as well.

Mishti-Angel mumma khilao na mujhe.

Avni-Arre waah aaj to fast finish kar diya.Dekho aap first aa gaye.Aap sab se jeet gaye.!!

Mishti (smiling) Yeh !!!! mei jeet gayi mumma ...yeh !!!

Shweta-Avni tu theek to hai na I means...

Avni-Mummyji mai bilkul theek hu.Mr Mehta ke liye mere dil me,meri zindagi meikoi jagah nahi hai.

Bebe-Par beta unke paas tera bhai Aman hai.Woh to tera hai na.

Avni-Nahi bebe mujh me aur Aman mei bahut farak hai.Woh Asahish Mehta ka beta hai aur mai Ayesha Haider ki beti hu wahi par sabse bada farak hai hamare beech.Bebe lunch me kya banana hai woh aap mujhe bata dijye.Aaj sunday hai toh...

Bebe-Woh mei bol dungi tu ja aapna kaam kar.

Avni-Ok

Bebe-Neil ye aisa kyu keh rahi hai beta.

Prakash-Ha neil aab toh 20saal hone ko aaye hai and still...

Neil-Guys ye koi mamuli baat nahi hai.Aab toh mujhe tension ho rahi hai.

Shweta-Oye tujhe kyu tension ho rahi hai.Avni tells na thats she is fine.

Bebe-Ha neil.

Neil-Bebe,Mom aapko jitna lagta hai itna simple nai hai uska aur Ashaishji ka relation.Mujhe toh bas chinta ye hai ki jab kabhi woh Asaish Mehta ka naam sunti hai naa Woh Avni Ayesha me se Ananya Verma ban jaati hai.Cold,Calculative,shrewd aur sab se zyada short tempered.

Maine use bahut mushkil se Avni Ayesha vapas banaya hai mai nahi chata ki Mr Mehta ki parchaye bhi pade us par.



Neil and Avni's room

Avni was really angry but did not show it to the family.She had hated the man like anything.And now after all these years his face,her brother.She was so angry that the glass broke of her hands and it started to bleed...

Neil (Panicking)-Avni are you ok !! Yeh kya kiya tumne.I will get the first aid box.Avni itna gussa kyu aa raha hai tumhe.I know that Mr Mehta still affects you but itna gussa.

Avni-Tum me se koi bhi woh feel nahi kar sakte joh mei karti thi neil.Bachpan se leke aaj tak I had nothing to call that it was rightfully mine until I met you and whenever Mr Mehta comes woh mera kuch na kuch to lete hi hai mujse.Pichli baar jab aaye the to meri mummy aur Aman ko le gaye aab pata nahi is baar kya...

Neil (Puts finger on her mouth)-Kuch nahi hone duga mai wifey ok.We all are with you.

Neil hugs Avni tightlly

Pre-cap:Bebe-Is ghar mei aajse Ashsih Mehta ki baat koi nahi karega.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So interesting...pls cont soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nicely written! It's great that you gave tweaked the story a bit. Look forward to reading more.
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What about Ayesha ? Is she alive too ?
Great start dear . Whenever I watch Misti and Avni I feel they are mother daughter . Misti too hates milk just like Neil 😆
Ab Ashish karne kya wala hai . If he hates Avni then Aman too will hate her .
Is Daya behind bars ?
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Nice Update...
Continue soon😃
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

What about Ayesha ? Is she alive too ?

Great start dear . Whenever I watch Misti and Avni I feel they are mother daughter . Misti too hates milk just like Neil 😆
Ab Ashish karne kya wala hai . If he hates Avni then Aman too will hate her .
Is Daya behind bars ?



No Ayesha is not alive.Yes Mishti and Avni and Neil look like family unit.No Asish had come to know that his daughter was innocent but the problem being Avni had vanished with Neela. And as for Aman you will enjoy what I will write.
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Part 3
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While Neil and Avni were talking there was somebody who was hearing about that particular conversation...It was none other than Bebe.She was so affected by it.Her mind had been continuously running thinking how much her Avni had suffered and how stone hearted this Ashish Mehta can be.Bebe took a decision and thought to convey it to the family members.She gathered all family memebers down just Sweta,Prakash and Neil.Avni was busy making Mishti do homework.

Sweta-Bebe is all okies ??

Neil (worriedly)-Ha bebe aise achank..

Prakash-bolo na bebe..

Bebe-Neil maine tumhari aur Avni ki baatein sun li thi.It was not intentional but maine ye decide kiya hai ki aaj se ghar mei Ashish Mehta ka naam koi nahi lega.Us aadmi ka is ghar mei ya Avni par saaya bhi nahi padna chaiye.

Sweta-I agrees bebe

Neil-I agree with you.But we need to Neela ma as well.

Prakash-Aap ka faisla bilkul sahi hai.

Avni-What are you planning to tell Neela ma Neil..???

Neil (fumbling)-uh woh woh actually...

Bebe-Woh avni mai Neela ko Thank You bol na chahti thi us hamara is musibat mei saath diya isliye.

Avni (smiling)Bebe ma abhi yaha aa hi rahi hai.She wants talk about something important.Par aise koi thank you kehta hai kya Bebe ...We are one family aap thank you kyu keh rahi hai.

Sweta looked at Avni.There was a time when she wanted to take revenge from Avni for stealing his son but today she was proud that this is the same Avni who hold her son's heart.Avni might have been deprived of her mother's love but from today onwards she will provide that mother's love to her.

Neela (Smiling)Hi Swetaji

Neela-Neelaji kaise hai aap.Abhi aapko hi yaad kar rahe humsab.

Neela-Really.WHat's the ocassion ??

Bebe (causiously)-Avni puttar dekh na meine apni davayi andar mere room mei rakhi hai leke aana puttar.

Avni-Ji bebe..

Bebe (Passing the newspaper)Neela aaj ka newspaper dekha tune ??

Neela-Nahi bebe mujhe kuch zarrori kaam tha N.G.O ka isiliye maine nahi padha.Kya baat hai aap sab kafi nervous dikh rahe hai.

Neil (showing her the newspaper)Here Neela maa

Neela(flabergasted)Oh god,Avni ne dekha Neil ?? I am sure she must have been very upset.

Neil-Yes she saw she was very angryBut she is keeping rest of it to herself.

Neela (angrily)-Mujhe samajh nahi aata ki mai use Ashish se kaise bachau ya protect karu ya dur rakhu.That man doesn't desrve to be a father.

Sweta (happily)Neelaji aab ye sab aapko akele karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.We are all Avni's family and we will supports you in this.

Bebe-Pehli baar kuch dhang ki baat ki Madam Madonna tune.Neela tu bilkul chinta mat kar.Oye mai bhi Dekhti hui ye aadmi meri bahu ke paas keise aata hai.

Neela-Bebe hum chah kar bhi use nahi rok sakte hai.Woh baap hai uska maybe not legally but woh Dayawanti Mehta ka beta hai he will find some way and plus Avni will be very angry to see him Neil he tried to shoot her while she was takling Aman away but instead Alladin got shot and dies.He protected her.

Neil(shocked)-Who was Alladin ??

Neela-The directer of the film which she made.

Neil,Sweta,Prakash and Bebe---What ????

Neil-Avni made film.Are you serious ??She never told me this.

Neela-It was a live movie Neil.And Avni could make films like very easily after alll she is the daughter of one of the finest directors in India.

Neil-Can I get the copy ??

Neela-Yep sure.Any way I haave to talk to Avni where is she ??

Avni(smiling)-I am here.Bolye Neela ma what happened ??

Neela-Avni mai 2 days ke liye Delhi ja rahi hu office tum sambhal lena.Maine meri meetings cancel kar di hai.But you have a important meeting witth that government company.

Avni-Achnak Delhi ??

Neela-Dont worry i will be fine.

pre-cap--Ashish Mehta enters and tries to take info about his daughter Avni but Neil blocks everything.


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