New FF-Emotions of Avni Part 10 Page 7 - Page 3

Avni is still in her own web . She hasn't let her guards down even to family. The girl is so hard on herself . This is not a good sign

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Avni is still in her own web . She hasn't let her guards down even to family. The girl is so hard on herself . This is not a good sign

Why should Aman help Hasmukh ? Hasmukh was kind and good hearted person who helped Avni but why is she against him now . Aman knows about Neela ?_ How come Hasmukh n Aman are related

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Aman did not help Hasmukh.Hasmukh helped Aman...Aman did the accident but did not know that it was his step mother.Hasmukh recocnized her and ran to hide him as he is Ashish's son who in turn is his best friend.

Part 6
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Avni and Neil came back to hospital.While Avni had taken assurance from Commissioner that whenevevr he would find Aman he would call Avni.Neil was constantly trying to calm Avni but his wifey's temper was above anything today.Even Neil didnot knew that Avni held such temper.

Neil (calming her down)-Avni calm down please.Just listen to me atleast once.

Avni (Angrily)-No not today Neil.Everytime in any case or matter I listen to you and calm myself down but not today.Don't even try to talk to me about him.

Sweta -What happens ?? kuch pata chala ?? Did the persons do it. ?

Prakash-Ha beta batao na? Did he do it ?

Avni (Very angrily)-No papa he didnt do it infact he was protecting someone.

Sweta-Kaun ??

Avni-Mera bhai Aman Ashish Mehta.Usne kiya Neela ma ka accident.Puri tarah se bigaad ke rakh diya hai Mr Mehta ne use.

Prakash-Puttar tu gussa na ho.

Avni (angrily)-Kaise gussa na huo Papa.Woh underage hai,Indian license nahi hai,drunk tha aur accident kar ke bhag gaya.He needs to pay for what he has done.

Neil-Bhai hai woh tumhara !!

Avni (more angrily)-Maa hai woh meri Neil.Kuch ho jayega toh.Is that Mehta Familiy's brat going to take responsiblity.

Sweta-Calms down Avni.Par I am sures tumhara bhai akela toh aaya nahi hoga your fathers must have came with him calls him na !!

Avni (angrily and spitefully)-He is not picking up the call.That irresponsible and spineless man.Saari responsiblity hasmukh uncle par daal di.

Here Aman was caught and Commisioner had already called Neil and Avni.But they could not go and night as it was very late and they decided to go in the morning and spent the night in Avni's cabin.Neil was astonished seeing so many prizes and seriously felt a urge of hitting Ashish Mehta for not trusting her daughter before.He knew this was calm before the storm.

Sweta,Prakash and Neil were sitting in Avni's cabin while a man forced his way in and shouted loudly.

Ashish-WHere is the girl who filed a complain against Aman for accident ??

Neil-Mr Mehta woh Miss Parikh ki beti hai hai usne file ki hai complain because your son did Neela Parikh's accident.

Ashish-Neela was my ex-wife and she did not have any daughter the girl who filed complain is acting.It's wrong complain.Who is the girl.Mr ACP tell her to come forward.

Avni (calmly and in strong voice)-Saame kyu aao aapke piche hi toh kadhitoh Mr Mehta...!!!

Ashish turns and sees Avni's face he finds it familiar but cannot place it as to who is it.Sweta,Bebe & Prakash watch as to how a father cannot reconise his own daughter.

Ashish-WHo the hell do you think you are ? You are not Neela's daughter.How can you file the complain as Neela Parekh's daughter.

Avni (Laughing sarcastically)-Oh well technically I am not her daughter Mr Mehta but figurately I am her daughter.

Mera naam Avni Ayesha hai,Ayesha Haider ki beti aur Neela Parekh ki adoptive beti.So see I can file a complain on her behalf.

Ashish-Mr Khanna you told me it would take years to found lost child and yet you know her ??

Avni (Happily)-Yes he knows me and very well.He is my husband and I told him not to provide any information on my behalf.

Ashish-But why champ.I know you are innocent.I had been trying to find you for years.I am your father.

Avni (laughing)-I am sure you are joking Mr Mehta because I have no father.My father died the day you tried to save your mother,the day you deserted my both the mothers.

Now lets settle the matter of your son Aman.He will go to jail.The Commissioner has assured me of that.

Ashish (trying to reason)-He is your brother.You wanted to protect him from his grand mother and now you are sending him to jail.

Avni (angrily)-He was drunk,without license,hit and run and than refused to surrender.Just Pray Mr Mehta because if something happens to my mother than I will not spare the guy you did this.

pre cap-Ashish-She has changed Neela

Neela-you abondened her

Part 7
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Avni stormed off from her cabin to Neela's room leaving Neil,Praksh,Bebe and Sweta with Ashish.Ashish could not identify if it was her daughter who loved him like he was her superhero and idol but this Avni was different plus married with someone.Ashish could not ever imagine his daughter with another guy.

Ashish (confused)-She is different.

Neil-How ? More spiteful,more angrier,more strongrer.

Ashish-No she had always been strong protected her mother from me,from my mother.I was not allowed to visit her in prison.I want to see my mother and tell her as what she has made my daughter.

Neil-Dayawanti Mehta is dead.She lastly tried to sell MY WIFE into prostitution and hence was killed in encounter.

Ashish (surprised)-You know everything about her ?? Yet you accepted her ??

Neil-WHy is there anything due to which I should not have accepted her.SHe is beautiful,intelligent,caring,loving,strong girl.

Ashish (stammering)-She is ille...

Bebe (angrily)-Meri bahu ko khabardaar aisa kuch bola hai toh.Logo ki soch aisi hoti hai bache nahi Mr Mehta.

Sweta (angrily)-Woh hamari beti hai donot call her that.She is not your daughters Mr Mehta,she is my and Prakashji's daughters and Aishji & Neelaji's daughter.

Ashish-Is Neela awake.Can I talk to her ??

Neil (strongly)-If you want to talk about case than you cannot but if about something else tham maybe but onle if Avni is not there.If she is there than you can go straight go out of hospital.She is very angry on you,on Aman infact your whole family who are frankly a bunch of criminals.

Ashish left the cabin and went to straight Neela's room where he saw she was awake but not in good condition.Avni was not there so he decided to give it a try.

Ashish-Neela !!

Neela-Look who finally appeared!! Why are you here Ashish ? Because Avni has filed a complaint against Amaan.You want me to take back the complain.My answer is no.Avni told me everything.

Ashish-No No I am not here for case.I have told not to talk about it.Neela she has changed.Taller,beautiful,intelligent,she was happy Neela.I have never seen her like that.

Neela-You dissappeared Ashish !! How she grew up you have no idea.She used to so broken.All she had in brain was poison against you,against your mother,your family.It was Neil's love who changed her.She has not forgiven you Ashish.SO you better go from here.

Ashish-I wanted to search her Neela,I tried but I couldnt find her.

Neela-You need to go Ashish.You have no idea of her temper and she is already angry.

Avni was just coming out from cabin of doctor for condition of Neela.She was so happy that she was fine.She could not express.And here came Avni and Ashish face to face again.

Avni (angrily)-WHat are you doing near my mother ?? Last time you went near my mother you ensured her death.Please spare me this time.

Ashish (trying to hug her)-Champ,mera superstar I was just trying to ask her health that's it.

Avni (Showing him her hand)-That's your limit Mr Mehta.Not a foot near me again.You can hug your son all you want.

Pre-cap-NOT A INCH NEAR MY WIFE.DO YOU GET IT !! YOU HAVE DONE ENOUGH.

Part 7
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Ashish was trying to see from the gates to the garden of the house.He saw his daughter with Neil's grandmother smiling talking to each other.His daughter's smile was something she had not seen in 17 years.He felt a prick in his heart.Ashish saw a car from far and Mumbai Police sticker on it and knew that it was Neil Khanna before Neil could see him somebody pulled him iin an alley.It was his dear friend Hasmukh .

Hasmukh-Are you mad Ashish ? kya kar raha hai ?? He is the DCP.And she is his wife.They are Khanna Business family.She is the daughter-in-law of very influential business family and that too a DCP.

Ashsish-It's just that I have never seen her so happy.I just want to keep looking at the smile of my daughter's face.It gives me satisfaction.And anyways I have to get things from the house hopefully my room is still intact.

Hasmukh-I will see you at the lawyers.Try and persuade Avni as well.

Ashiish entered the house.The house which previously belonged to his mother who eventually lost all of it in madness.Avni's hatred made him weak.His heart broke seeing her affection,respect towards Neela but never him.

Ashish-Excuse me !! Mrs Khanna ?

Bebe-Yes Mr Mehta what can I do for you ?

Ashish-I just need my luggage which is my preivous room.If the room is still intact.

Bebe-Jee kyu nahi !! Bheema Bheema !!

Bheema-Ji bebe.

Bebe-Bheema Avni ko bol wo Mr Mehta aapna saaman lene aaye hai to unhe de de.

Bheema-Par bhabhi toh abhi Mishti baby ke saath busy hai bebe Sweta madam ko kahu.

Bebe-Ha theek hai.

Ashsish walked towards the old room.The interior of the house had completely changed.It was more vibrant rather the colors represented more happiness and prosperity in the house and as family they seemed different.Sweta ji arrived at the same point and asked Bheema to continue with her work.

Sweta-Ye lijiye Mr Mehta aapka purana kamra.Jo ha aapka le jayiye.

Ashish-Thank You Mrs Khanna !!

Sweta-Kitni ajeeb baat hai na Ashish ji bachpan mei jo Avni iss ghar mei reh kar aapni normal family chahti thi usi ghar ki malkin ha woh aaj aur jis ne usse is ghar se nikala tha us ka kuch nahi bacha aaj.God has strange methods.

Ashish-Indeed god has strange methods.I wanted to see her grown up,see her get married but I got to see none of those things instead Neela her step mother who was nothing to Avni got this opportunity and do her Kanyadaan.

Avni (angrily)-Watch your mouth Mr Mehta.Neela ma is my everything.She maybe my step mother but she is more than biological.What are you doing here anyway ?

Ashish-Just taking my luggage superstar.

Avni (angrily pulling his hand)-Don't call me that !! Don't call me superstar. Your superstar is dead.Avni Mehta is dead right it is Avni Ayesha Khanna you hates you,despises you,cannot breathe in the same airspace.SO COLLECT YOUR THINGS AND GET DAMM OUT OF MY DAMM HOUSE.

Neil heard his wife's voice.It was good Mishti was not here and was with Bebe and her grand father in park.Neil ran towards where voice was heard.He saw Ashish Mehta and knew the source of his wifey's anger.Sweta signed him to handle Ashish Mehta.

Neil (calmly)-Avni calm down.Tum Mishti ke paas jao Mom ke saath she is calling you

Avni stromed off with Sweta and now Ashish knew it was man to man talk.He had to ensure Neil that he was here for Avni and Aman both.

Ashish-Neil...

Neil (angrily)-NOT ANYWHERE NEAR MY WIFE !! After 17 years she has something that she can call hers-her family,her house,her mother,her husband,her daughter.Why are you here ? To take the luggage or infurate Avni more so that she takes away the case instead.Do you think I am a fool or Avni is a fool.SHe has already seen through you.She is more smart than anybody else in this room combined.

Ashish-Neil I love my daughter !!

Neil-You should have thought this before deseting her,before shooting at her,before calling her a mistake and illegitimate.You are the worst father I have ever seen.Next time i see you near her and that would be end for you in this state.Remember that.

Ashish took his luggage and went out of the house where is saw Avni playing with a child presumably her and Neil's daughter.Menaing his gran daughter.He was so happy.But saw Neil's glaring eyes and returned to the car.

Pre-cap Avni and Neil conversation.
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