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Part 8
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Avni was already in the bed at 9 pm while Neil was still in shower.Avni was tired so tired of seeing him again.Arguing with him again.Seeing Ashish Mehta reminded of Aisha which were the worst memories of her life.Remembering Aisha's death was worst but she lived on but now seeing Neela in this condition made her seriously shiver.She didnt realize when Neil was already out of bath and besides her with his head on her lap.Their favraite time after dinner was talking with each other.Neil insisted on this so Avni would not bottle up again.

Neil (charmingly)-Lost in thoughts are you wifey ??

Avni-I frooze yesterday after seeing Neela Ma in this condition.

Neil (holding her hand tightly)-I know Avni.Anybody would freeze.

Avni-I am not anybody Neil.I have never freezed myself at any time.I carried Aisha Ma at age of 10.I fought with my monstrous grand mother at age of 10,I got shot at age of 10.

Neil (In concern)-Maybe you had too much.I seem to think maybe 10 is not your favraite year. (smiling)

Avni (returning smile)-Ofcourse it is not Neil.That is certainly not a question.I am tired Neil.

Neil-Ok than we will continue our little chat tomorrow.

Avni (Holding his hand)-No I am tired of fighting for everything.First I fought for my right,than my father,than my mother,than my revenge,than my self respect and lastly for you.It seems as if fighting is what I have always I have done in my life.And I have failed in everything.

Neil (calmly)-Who told you so ? Avni you got your self back up everyttime you fell.That is not a quality in everyone.You won against Mehta family.You have me right beside you.You didnt lose me (Kissing her hand).

Avni (tearing up)-I had promised Aisha Ma Neil that my brother would live up to her name.He has ruined everything.That man ruined everything in my life.He is the reason Aisha Ma is not alive today.
Alladin is crippled today.Neela ma is alone.He disappointed everyone

Neil (Hugging her)-Calm down.Everything will be fine wifey !! By the way you never told me you made a movie !! I had to get that information from elsewhere..You never mentioned Alladin . Who is he ??

Avni-He came as a stranger who used to sleep on our bench than became my producer and slowly my protector.He is a nut case basically.

Neil-He shot you ??

Avni (chuckled)-Alldin ?? No !!

Neil (seriously)-Ashish ??

Avni-Yes.But Alladin got hurt instead of me.Let's go to sleep.We will have long day.

The morning arose faster than Neil expected.WHen he woke up Avni was already getting ready.Neil forgot for a minute that they had to go the hospital.Avni was getting ready faster as she had that damm meeting with government company and that to at the time when she couldnot concentrate.This project was very important to her.and she was late for the meeting and Ali wanted to meet her and Neil at hospital and she was working on Sunday and Neil is going to be angry...

Neil (chuckling)-Is there a storm coming ???

Avni-No why do you ask ??

Neil-Why are you getting ready in haste ? I know we have to go to the hospital but...

Avni-I have a meeting !!

Neil-On a Sunday !! Avni I thought we had a deal.No working on Sunday

Avni-Sorry Neil.The clients can meet only today.It won't be long.The meeting is at hospital itself thanI will join you and Ali who is apparently raving about some surprise.

Neil-WHat surprise ??

Avni (kissing him on cheek)-Get ready and bye

Avni's meeting went good and they were inch near the contract.Avni would have to go for the inspection of the places soon.Avni knew Neil was angry but Avni knew she would make up for her husband's sweet anger.Avni till now knew how to make up to her husband.Now Avni rushed to Neela Ma's room,Ali,Neela ma and Neil were already waiting and stupid Ali's surprise.He would not tell her on the phone.

Avni (breathing fast)-I am here now Ali tell me about your surprise.

Ali-It's 10 minutes away.

Neela-Ok.Seems like hectic Sunday baccha.

Neil (faking anger)-Yes she is working despite promising not to work on SUnday !!

Avni-I said I am Sorry.

WHile Avni and Neil were bickering with each other Ali very quitely brought Alladin in the room without making any noise.EVen Neela didnot notice but when she did she was so happy.It was all sorts of reunion.

Neela (Happily)-Alladin

Avni heard the name and turned around to see the wonderful surprise which apprently Ali and Neil had planned for Neela and Avni.Both noticed how stressful Avni and Neela had been since the arrival of Ashish and Aman and they thought to organize it.Avni looked at Ali and Ali pointed her in direction of Neil.

Alladin-Neela yaar ye kya haal bana ke rakha !! I mean seriously hospital,tubes etc .šŸ˜†
BTW where is Avni ??? I am dying to meet her...

Avni's smile vanished into anger-You can't recocnize me crackpot ??You are seriously a crackpot !!

Alladin (Looking at Neela)-ARe you serious Neela,she is Avni...

Neela-Yes she is Avni. just grown up if you notice.

Alladin-Sorry Avni yaar pata nahi chala mujhe.Abhi sorry bol raha hu na.Neela ye toh baat hi nahi sun rhi.Tum kaise sambhal ti ho ise ??

Neela-I have retired from the job.That job has been given given to Neil Khanna (pointing at him)

Neela saw Alldin didnt understood do explained to him.

Neela-Alladin Neil is Avni 's husband.

Alladin-WHAT !!!
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Loved the update...
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Part 9
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Alladin was very much shocked when he the little Avni had married though the little Avni was not little anymore but for Alladin she was still little one.Alladin was still trying to digest a grown up Avni and here Neela threw another.Yes he would have wanted Avni to get married but this was shock.

Avni waving hand in front of his eyes)-Alladin !!

Alladin-Hu what ??

Avni-Where are you lost ??

Alladin-17 years back.When I saw you the last time.I never thought I would see you again in this lifetime.I seriously thought I was going to die but than Hemant uncle saved my life and took care of me.I tried to find you and Neela but you guys were vanished.Where were you ??

Neil-Yes actually that question has been bugging me as well.Neela ma how well did you hide Avni that no one from Mehta family or police could find her ??

Avni (explaining)-We were actually in U.S.A. but we were also in Berlin,London,Paris,budapest.It was exactly the same thing which I did when I was in Goa.

Neil-Wow Neela ma genius.

Alladin-You could have told me Neela.I could have helped you.

Neela-Well it was her fault Alladin.She didnot want anyone to die for her anymore.So I told baba to keep you safe there and tell you that Avni was dead.

Alladin-I was shocked when Neil and Ali told me that Avni was alive and well.

Neil received the phone call from Commissioner stating that he was going to file the charge sheet unless Avni wanted to take back the complaint.Neil looked at Avni but she was not really responding to which Neil told Commissioner to wait he would talk to his wife and call him fast.

Neil-Avni are you sure about this ? The Commissioner is ready to file the chargesheet.

Avni (firmly)-I told you Neil,my decision is final.No backsies.And why are you second guessing me on this.I thought you would support me on this.

Neil (explaining)-I am not second guessing you but right now you are overwhelmed with emotions of Neela ma getting hurt and that is the reason you want Aman to go behind he bars but after your emotions get normal and you realise that you don't want him to go nothing can be done at that time.Please explain her somebody !!

Alladin-Avni Neil is right.If you dont want Aman in your life than tell him to get lost.But dont to anything that you will regret.

Ali-Are you sure you will handle it Avni ??

Neela (authoritatively)-Neil let the Commissioner file the complain.Avni Aman ko sudharna chati hai to let her do it and as it is Ashish deserves it.For what he has done with Avni and Aishaji.

Avni-And you,and Alladin and Hemant Nanu.The list is quiet long.

Alldin-Ashish is here ??

Neil-Yes he was thrown out of the house today morning itself.

Alladin-Well who threw him out ??

Neil-Me.He is really heache.Avni how do you handle him ??

Avni-I like to shout on him.Neil we need to get going.Mishti will be waiting for us.Alladin I will see you tomorrow.

Alldin-Since when did you start calling me Alladin ?? It was always crackpot for you.

Avni-Bye Crackpot

After Neil and Avni go

Alladin-Avni has really changed.

Neela- Neil has changed her.SHe used to be full of hatred for Mehtas and Ashish.Neil took out all the poison.Can you believe she di not want to be married and neither did Neil ? and now look at them.

Alladin-Love happens suddenely Neela.Who is Mishti ??

Neela-Neil and Avni's daughter.

Alladin-They donot look like they have been married too long.

Neela-Adopted.Mishti was in similar condition like Avni and so in the end Neil and Avni with consent of their family members adopted her.She is so sweet.

Alladin-How is Neil's family ?? Did they accept her knowing her parents...

Neela-It was difficult at first but they love her more than Neil.Neil's support ensured all this.

Alladin-No wonder he doesnot like Ashish.I will not leave Ashish if he even goes near Avni.

Neela-Donot worry Avni will not leave Ashish if Ashish goes near Avni...

Meanwhile Neil was in pretty romantic mood and seeing Avni relaxed he felt even more relaxed too and something clicked in his mind.Avni looked at Neil in the car and knew that something was cooking in his mind.Mishti jumped onto Neil as soon as they entered the house.Seeing Mishti with Neil made Avni always happy as she dint have what Mishti had right now.Neil and Avni had their dinner and went to their respective bedrooms.While Avni was planning to spent some time with Neil as she had been too busy from some time.

Avni-Neil kya hua ? Is your shoulder paining ??

Neil-Yes.It's fine I will manage.I will take painkiller.

Avni-Shut Up !!! I will massage your shoulder sit down.I know we donot have much of our time lately.I am sorry Neil.

Neil (holding her hand)-There is no need for sorry.Now will i get the massage ??

Avni-Sure !!

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Romantic moments of Avni and Neil and Avni faints due to stress of Ashish Mehta and Ashish faces Neil's fury
Edited by olsen_124 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it...
Waiting for next chapter..
Update Soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Update soon. Really like your story.
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Will update soon.Trying to sync all into one.
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Part 10
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Avni was taking a hot water bath in the bath tub.Hot bath relieved her stress.She had put Mishti to sleep and instantly bath tub called for her šŸ˜†.Yes it was silly line but seeing him had increased her stress not just for her but for entire family especially with Neela Ma's accident.Avni thought she would lose it if she didnt have Neil with her in that moment.Neil she cant think sanely whenever she is not with her husband,he brought back Avni hidden within Ananya Verma.Coming out of her thoughts Avni came out of her bath tub and after drying herself up she wore her bathrobe and came outside.

Neil was sitting on bed desperately waiting for Avni.He had realised that he was sunken boat without his wife.She brought him ashore otherwise he would have drowned in Juhi's memories and thank god he didnt drown turns out Juhi did not deserve Neil's love.Before Neil could think something else Avni occupied his mind.He saw her coming out of bathroom with her marron silky bathrobe with wet hair from which droplets were falling onto her face.Avni made his mind stop working.

Avni (seeing Neil)-Neil why are you coming towards me like that ?

Neil came so close to Avni as if he could hear her heart beats increase.Avni went stepping back and finally hit the wall.Avni deeply looked into her husband's eyes and all she could see was love for her.Neil placed the strands of Avni's hair on the back of ear so that they donot disturb his view.He slowly kissed each of the water drops which were on Avni's cheeks.He slammed his lips against hers, in no time, she was holding him for support, the intensity of him claiming her like a man long starved, making her drown in a pool of desire.


And so she parted her lips, letting his tongue slide in and explore the sweet corners of her mouth, devour her like no one else ever had before, while she wrapped her arms around his neck, pulling him as close as she humanly could , and he wrapped his hands around her waist.Slowly he started kissing her neck and the soft spots ,she moaned.Slowly her hands started moving under Neil's shirt and Neil removed the shirt and reached for Avni's bathrobe belt.


Next morning

The morning brought new dramas into Avni and Neil's life but at that moment they were just into each other's arms and that was enough.Neil was the first one to wake up and saw his little angel sleeping with head on his chest.He thanked god everyday for sending Avni Ayesha into his life.He saw Avni stir a little.


Neil(kissing her on forehead)-Good Morning Sweet Heart !!


Avni (trying to get up)-Good Morning.

Neil (pulling her back again)-Dont go Avni please.

Avni-Neil it's already 7 we have to go to settlement and than at work so can you move your hand.I have to go to bath.

Neil(smiling)-You know we both can go to bath.. together..

Avni (hitiing on his arm)-Beshram !! ACP Khanna you have became to beshram..

Neil(with sly smile)-I didnt hear that word last night Avni...

Avni-I am going to take a bath.

After getting ready and having breakfast Avni and Neil went towards the settlement conference whereas Bebe,Sweta went to hospital to see Neela.Avni was stressed about the settlement.She wanted to have complete control over the situation so she asked her lawyer and Neil for suggestion and the best suggestion came from the Commissioner who advised Avni to give her brother community service.Avni liked that suggestion better.But she told her lawyer that the community service and where to do it would be her choice and not Mr Mehta.

Lawyer-Good Morning Mr and Mrs Khanna.

Avni-Good Morning.Adv Gauri are they not here yet ??

Gauri-Here they are...

Neil-So should we start.

Ashish-Sure.

Avni's lawyer-Ok Mr Bhandari (Ashish's lawyer) these are the terms for Mr Aman Mehta's release.

Mr Bhandari-Terms of Mrs Khanna in community Service I think it is supposed to be police.

Neil-Well it is but in this case the complainant has put conditions stating that if she is allowed community service only than she would bail him out.

Ashish-Is this true Avni ??

Avni-You need to talk to my lawyer Mr Mehta and not me.

Ashish-Ok I agree to the conditions.

Mr Bhandari-Mr Mehta what are you saying ??

Ashish-She is his big sister.She could have raised him better probably.Will you make her your mother's son ??

Avni (angrily)-He is your responsibility.He is your son not mine.And plus I have a job,a husband,a family and also a daughter.These are my responsibilities...

Neil-We are talking about settlements here right Adv Gauri ??

Gauri-Absolutely.

Avni-Should I understand your yes Mr Mehta ??

Ashish-Yes

Avni-Than this conversation is over.

Avni stormed out of the office with Neil and Ashish kept looking at her wondering when exactly find his daughter back.Avni reached office and started to look through work.There were lot of files of projects to be read and contracts to be signed.Avni had been handling the hospital administration as well as Parekh Industries.She enjoyed business but when it became her passion was something she dint understand.She was looking after hospital as long as Neela Ma wasnt back after coming back Neela Ma would look over itOh the schedule was going to be so hectic and on top of it she had her mind occupied with Ashish Mehta and Aman as well.

During the first half of the office evryhting went fine but suddenely she started feeling dizzy and her memories from childhood started coming up along with Ashish Mehta's recent entry and she suddenely fainted.She woke up in the emergency room of the hospital.She saw Alladin near her along with Ali.

Alladin-Are you ok Avni ??

Avni (holding her head)-I am fine Alladin.How did I come here ??

Alladin-Your office called Neela and she told me to bring you here.

Avni-Please tell me you didnt call Neil.

Ali-Kyu ??

Avni-He had urgent meeting with his seniors which is going to take him first half of day.

Ali-No I didnt call him but Bebe might have

Avni-Bebe is here !!

Bebe-Ha Bebe is here.Why is your blood preasure so high and what about stress ??Aur agar hai bhi toh tu hame kyu nahi batati.Tu aur Neil hume kuch bhi nahi batate.Neil lunch break mei aa raha hai.

Neil-Avni !! What happened to you ??

Bebe-Oye ye sab ou Ashish Mehta ki wajah se hua hai.Stress hai Neil aur blood preasure bhi high hai.

Avni-It's ok Neil.Donot worry.

Neil-I am not going to leave him.(Neil leaves)

Avni-Neil !! Alladin stop him woh gusse mei...

Alladin-Better I will go with him.

Avni (grabbing her head)-Oh god.
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Pre-cap----Neil-You are worthy of being a man let alone be a father !! You almost destroyed her life.





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Part 11
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Neil in anger stomped right outside the hospital room and was about to sit in his car but Alladin stopped him.He knew that Avni must have sent him.But everything was above Neil's head.The man was seriously getting on everybody's nerve.But their could be nothing that could be done of him after all he was her father.But he had seen Avni getting frustrated and it was getting to him as well.He had to get the solution of this.He had to talk to Neela Ma and Alladin as well.Avni considered him in high respect.

Neil (angrily)-Alladin please donot stop me the man is getting on all of our nerves.

Alladin (calming him down)-Dude he has been doing this since past 17 years.He always got on Avni's nerves.But right now Avni is calling you.She has freaked out about about something she is not telling all of us.

Neil rushed back inside in Avni's room who was sitting panicked and happy at the same time.Neil became confused seeing her expression but he came inside and closed the door and sat down besides Avni and held her very closely to him.

Neil (getting scared)-What is it Avni ?? Why are you scared and happy at the same moment ??

Avni (happily but at the same time scared)-Neil I am pregnant...

Neil (confused)-Wh...What ?? What do you mean !!

Avni (hitting Neil on arm)-ACP Neil Khanna you are going to be a father.What else would the term "pregnant" mean.

Neil (took Avni in her arms)-I am so happy wifey !! I cannot tell you in words...

Avni-Down Down.Keep me down.Neil what if I am terrible mother after all I am a terrible daughter and sister.

Neil (hold her hands closely )-No never think about that Mrs Avni Ayesha Khanna because you have been a wonderful daughter and sister had Aman been given to you.But how can you be a horrible mother you are already a mother to Mishti.She adores you so much.She cant live without you.Her eyes always searches for her Angel mumma.The new baby will be the same way.But this one will be on my team ok !! Because you already have Mishti.

Avni-We have to tell everyone.I have not told them yet.
(SOMEBODY KNOCKING)

Neil (opening the door)-Alladin is everything ok ?

Alladin-You tell us is everything Ok ??

Neil-Yes we will tell everyone when we reach home.Is that ok ??
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Oh my freakin goddd.this is so amazing..Avni is pregnant šŸ˜ƒšŸ‘Update soon
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Awesome. New member is arriving in avnis perfect family.,.

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