Originally posted by: rasikasarisha
Hi chitra me Rasika. I m new to the forum so don't know much about FF SS or OS ( frankly even don't know full forms). I have read 2 3 FF on IPK ( not in d forum but on Wattpad) but must tell few point about ur FF ( u might be knowing about it but as reader I felt like sharing with u)
Here I go.
1. I used to read ur post after every episode and let me tell u used to love it but never commented on it.
2. I found ur FF to be very well placed eg. Well describe Disclaimer n prologue ( Never seen such in ny FF which ever I read)
3. Well defined characters.
Eg. I really like this Advay than d original one coz he is a true to statement of Barun which he said in his IV that Advay is " he does what he understands". He is ruthless guy with kind heart
Even Chandni's character is well defined as she knows that about present means she knows her mom hates her.
I really like that u have not shown masked indrani means u have shown her real from very first intro that She is greedy n having 0 % empathy towards chandni.
U have not shown murli as someone as his subordinate but as someone who can advice him. U have shown him very dignified person.
I like ur background description.
Interaction scene between Advay slum children was d most loved scene.
Thx waiting for next update.
Hello Rasika my lovely, thank u for such a sweet comment, really flattered by all ur kind words,
HAHA TBH even I didn't know the meaning of all these abbreviations, initially but now i have learnte them
FF is fan fiction, which in my understanding its, a fans interpretation of the story, however which way they like. I would like to believe that a FF has to be around the main plot of teh story, tho there are FF that are totally away from teh concept. liek they cud shoe Chandini studying in USA or Advay and Chandini as college friends, etc, But my FF;s are always around the original plot line with my own twist to it,
SS are short stories, yet again it cud b around the plot or a total new story
OS are other stories, which is usually a scene from teh show that played in a certain way, but a Fan felt that it cud have played differently, so that becomes OS ... for eg, In my story ... Hmm.. the scene where Advay meets Chanini is very similar to how he meets in the show, he meets her before teh Maha aarti and in the temple...now if had jsut posted Chapter 2 by itself, we cud have called it a OS , i have taken a smilier plot and given it my twist. .. so tahts the diff IMO tho i cud be wrong...
coming to my FF, Thank you so much for liking my disclaimer and prologue, tho i am not sure i wrote a lengthy prologue, its meshed with teh chapter... but WRT story Disclaimer was necessary as some bits may not sit well as the story progresses, ... but thanks a lot for mentioning it, part of the disclaimer is also courtesy to teh suggestions of few of my readers.. Anita @ mangothyme. who asksd me to include copyright ... Juhi@ amortentia who TOLD ME TO WRITE A DISCLAIMER 😆!! as this was a 18+ story adn MEHVISH @ neverlandspirit...who took the time out to make teh cover for me, of her own accord out of her love for me and for this story...so i have to be grateful to all of them and this is a joint enterprise therefore.
thansk for liking my Advay more than the one in the show 😳, that really means a lot to me. TBH the one in teh show shud have been allowed to play to his potential but ALAS teh makers made a mess😡
WRT Chandini teh one in teh show was a shambles ...they didnt know what to do with her character...
YES Indrani ,... I wanted to keep her dark from the word go, as what is the point in beating around the bushes, she plays the good woman card with Chandini, but with Advay ... well Aday knows her true colors, so no point in beating around the bushes IMO
WRT Murli i wanted him to be a man of stature, who can advise Advay..becaue in this story we are not going to get a NAni Maasi malarkey track ..so we need someone to show advay the light and hence why Murli will do that job, also to show how Murli is willing to serve Advay ...to show what a good man Advay is that someone of Murlis;s stature is willing to put his career and business on hold to come look after Advay.
Thank a lot for liking the slum scene, as i said that it was from my own personal experience, SO i am deeply touched that a lot of my readers were touched by something that deeply moved me. You have read this and felt so deeply touched, i saw it with my own eyes and stood helpless when these kids sold the divas in rishikesh and bawled my eyes out ...it is the harsh reality of human life... and the govt has to do something about eradicating poverty. So i am glad a lot of you have appreciated my humble attempt at writing something that deeply affected me as a person.
Thanks again Rasika for liking my story n my style of writing , hope you continue reading and continue liking my future update...
as of me i would say WELCOME TO THE FORUM !!! We have some amazing people here... hope u have a great tiem with us 🤗
❤️ Chitra
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