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diya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#521

Fabulous update again👏

Didn't expect the twist that moora was listening to the nandini-chanakya conversation. While reading nandini replies I can well imagine her face and the respect she has for chanakya. Another heartbreak awaits nandini when she get to know her past. But chandra is with her to handle her :)

Can't wait for the scenes between nandini and chandra. I am super curious to know how nandini reacts when she sees chandra's face for the first time.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: FrankPunch
i swear Bellatrix and Tommy boy would make the wierdest couple around... both cruel..
he always ignoring her.. and she always going My Lord My Lord like Avantika...

Malay would be Malfoy !

Yes she was always so eager to please him

I even thought she was a proper submissive to Voldy

Malay will be a good Malfoy

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#523

Originally posted by: diyak
Fabulous update again👏
Didn't expect the twist that moora was listening to the nandini-chanakya conversation. While reading nandini replies I can well imagine her face and the respect she has for chanakya.

Royal members keep check on their adversaries in a very clandestine manner. Here, Moora fears extremely for her Magadh people and her two sons. She got convinced with Chandra's story. But she convinces herself about Nandini, in person, when the School Principal and Minister of the State and Chandra's Guardian questions her.
Even upto 1970s and 80s, when joint families existed, when a prospective girl is chosen and fixed for marriage - somebody from the groom's town whose son/daughter is residing in the girl's neighbourhood will come and question the girl like this , in a very strict manner - to check her patience, her obedience to elders, her temper, her skills, etc - guage her knowledge and intelligence, and judge her suitability in the new home.

Another heartbreak awaits nandini when she get to know her past. But chandra is with her to handle her :)
Not just another... her pseudo world is gonna crash down like a pack of cards. But YESSS, our Chandu will be there to handle her 😊

Can't wait for the scenes between nandini and chandra. I am super curious to know how nandini reacts when she sees chandra's face for the first time.
I hope I can satisfy the die-hard romantic fans, without tainting the purity of the love that Chandu-Nandu have for each other.

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

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NIAMAJEN

@NIAMAJEN

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Posted: 7 years ago

#525

Just caught up on the last few chapters. I loved Nandni's conversation with Chanakya, and I'm glad Moora got to know Nandni's true nature, that's at least one less person standing in their way. Yesss so the much awaited first meeting flashback had finally come upon us. I was honoured that you were inspired by my early questions about the story to write this flashback sequence. Honestly this chapter was beautiful. Even as a child it seemed like Chandra truly saw Nandni for who she is, and they have a soul to soul connection. So wonderful that he would be the one to see that she has her first taste of tamarind, risking punishment to do so. Also that he would challenge her behaviour too, and called for her to stand up for others. Hope there are more sequences like this time come 😊

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#527

Chapter 17

Nandini replied to all the questions so politely and courteously

it showed what a well mannered lady she is now

she respects every one and knows her limits too

Acharya tried to test her in as many possible ways as he knew

but she passed them all with flying colors

Of course normally what elders ask us to do is for our welfare

but of course there are exceptions like Nand Avantika

In a short time she also has understood Chandra Acharya bond so well

she is always so eager to know if she has made any mistakes

and is ever ready to correct her mistakes at the earliest chance

this is another sign of a queen for the people

I think sweet talking comes to her by nature it is not a conscious act of her

she needs to learn though that some people can't be managed by sweet talks

in fact they try to take advantage of her sweet talks and in those cases she needs to use other ways

she is a very eager compliant and earnest student

Wow I am impressed that she knows that just any one can't impress Chandra

she has that trust faith and confidence on him - a really good sign

Acharya wants her to explain in detail about her idea of royal blood and birth

she explains it so well and pleases him with her answer

Of course a person is known by his karma and not by birth or blood

How well she described Chandra there - I just loved that part

I feel if given a chance she can keep on speaking on Chandra for hours

when she speaks of him she has such a dreamy look in her eyes

Of course she meant she belongs to him heart mind and soul

but then she clarified when Acharya asked about it specifically

she also knows he will always be bound to his people

so she can't have him for herself ever and she accepts it so easily

I am sure she will be his strength and not his weakness

she just needs to learn some people skills that is all

Just like in JA just before their consummation scene

Jalal had told Jodha that his heart will always belong to her

and their names will be always taken together

I think CN case is very similar ; their names also will be taken together always

I love how Acharya blessed her after this and she was so happy

she will really be a great DIL too as she understand her MIL so well

she knows Moora may be a bit apprehensive about her initially

I am sure she will go out of her way to resolve all their differences

She wont ever let Chandra feel sandwiched between her and Moora

she will give her 200 % in this relation it is so clear

she wont ever let any differences creep up between her and Moora

I know when she will know of what all Nand Avantika did to Moora and her family

she may have a total breakdown and then Chandra will have to handle her

it will be very hard for her to face him and his family after knowing the truth

she will die in her mind under the burden of guilt and shame

But she will keep the family intact at any cost now

She already trusts him now and she just has to maintain it

at times it becomes difficult for a girl to trust her partner more than her parents

but in this case she already had a glimpse of the real face of her parents

so it will be easier for her and Chandra will really want the best for her

She wont ever break his heart as then she too will break

Acharya should have sent her the Vaid ji

we could have got some more nok jhok and khatta meetha moments

Poor girl she does not know Acharya knows who the Vaid ji was

If she knew she would have been tomato red I am sure

Nandini was going through the age old potential test by her would be MIL

here she again passed eith flying colors and won over her

with Moora on her side her battle is half won I think

at times I feel she is like Hermione as she has the answer to everything always

Now Acharya's words about the near future are scaring me

I assume he is talking of the conspiracy Nand made against Chandra ?

Or is it something else ? I hope CN emerge winners again after this problem

It's not something to do with Nandini twin sister right ?

I loved Chanakya saying about one more day

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#528

Sorry for the late review

I am trying to put my review in 1 single chunk now

I hope you wont mind😳

chapter 18 and 19 I will do by this week itself

Edited by 2filmy - 7 years ago

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Sorry for the late review
I am trying to put my review in 1 single chunk now
I hope you wont mind😳
chapter 18 and 19 I will do by this week itself

I know you are busy with the year end work completion now.

It's good that you are putting full review in one single chunk now. You get to keep your pink color... It suits you. Personally I liked the previous one which went well with thumbulina 😛

But, when you are posting long reviews like this, India Forum sometimes goes off... it's frustrating to see the system prompts an error, after you click on Update Post button, and your whole work goes in vain.

To avoid that, do Select All + Copy BEFORE you click on Update Post button. Alternatively, you type all reviews in Notepad or Word and then paste.

Take your time. Meanwhile I will post more of chandu Nandu scenes

Edited by FrankPunch - 7 years ago