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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#341

It is so sweet to see Chandra Badal bonding

Hahaha her own advice from the previous day comes back to her

Loved to see this possessive jealous side to her

There is nothing more adorable than a king in love with his queen

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#342

Of course he is totally convinced

He has seen and heard everything possible

And that was enough for him to come to his conclusion

Yes such an understanding partner is so rare

I will love seeing Chandra annoy Nand

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#343

Wow I have not gone to your WP account yet

But she is really like Rapunzel without the long hair

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NONIE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#344

Nice chapter Sangeetha 😃
The scene between Chandra and Nandini was beautiful

Edited by Nonie12345 - 8 years ago

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AshtaVasus

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Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Nice chapter Sangeetha 😃
The scene between Chandra and Nandini was beautiful

Thank you girlie 😳

I know... romance package after long time, right?

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#346

Sangeetha, You always weave magic through words. 👏

But more than that I am astonished of how well you are scripting the story interlinking events each which have a depth of its own. Every update of yours is a thorough reading experience which always longs for the next one. Waiting for the next update.

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AshtaVasus

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Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: alanta
Sangeetha, You always weave magic through words. 👏
No magic yar, i am only writing simple english 😊 The truth is, half the time, i end up searching for words.. i mean, i visualise the scene perfectly but struggle to put it in words perfectly. Someone in my place, like Aishwarya, could have put the emotions of each character much more beautifully.

But more than that I am astonished of how well you are scripting the story interlinking events each which have a depth of its own.

Aww, you noticed ! Yes, HP's Rowling is my inspiration when i started writing this story. I started with many open loops. Thats why i dint want to leave this story incomplete.

Every update of yours is a thorough reading experience which always longs for the next one. Waiting for the next update.

Thank You 🤗 I am trying to make it weekly updates. Please bear with me.

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#348

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good.

Thank you 😊

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Mansi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#350

Fantastic update 👏I loved the way u gave a detailed description of how Avantika the young Queen became a Tyrant Queen unwilling...Now I understood why she was so fearing about Nand...That Nand is really very cheap...Now how much cheapness he will show 😡But what about Sunanda n Nandini?What happened to Moora n her unborn child n Chandra?Now she got to know Chandra being her own blood n the rightful heir to the kingdom