The Eyes You Saw - Chapter 39 and 40 on Page 90 - Page 60

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Awesome chapters Sangeetha
The scene between Acharya Chanakya and Nandini was nice
The conversation between Acharya and Moore was wonderful

Dev and princess Nandini scene was so cute

I liked how Dev helped the Brahmin

The conversation between Dev and Chanakya was amazing

I liked Chanakya's planning

I am glad that Chanakya look at the matter in a different manner

I hate parvatak and Malay

The scene between Chandra and Nandini was so beautiful

I loved how Chandini were thinking about each other

The conversation between Chandra and acharya was Amazing

Finally Chanakya realised his calculations were right

I am happy that Chandra witnessed that Nandini kept the fast for him and also broke her fast by sending her fruits

I hated how durdhara treated Sujan like a mere servant

I liked how You described the struggle between Chandra's heart and brainl

I loved how Chandra abducted Nandini and challenged nand

I hate how parvatak and Malay were talking about Nandini like she is a thing

I can't believe how selfish Nand is

The scenes between Chandini were fantastic

Badal and Bijli love story was cute

I liked how Chandra and Nandini were thinking about each other

The conversation between Chandini was just unbelievable

Chandini scenes are awesome

I liked how Chandra was jealous of his own self

I loved their conversation about how many times their marriage has happened

Chandini parting scene was nice

The conversation between Acharya and Chandra was wonderful

Chandra's thoughts about Nandini were so thoughtful

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome chapters Sangeetha
The scene between Acharya Chanakya and Nandini was nice
The conversation between Acharya and Moore was wonderful

Dev and princess Nandini scene was so cute

I liked how Dev helped the Brahmin

The conversation between Dev and Chanakya was amazing

I liked Chanakya's planning

I am glad that Chanakya look at the matter in a different manner

I hate parvatak and Malay

Hi Nonie,

I left writing the story after I saw that nobody was reading / responding. After reading your feedback, i feel a bit better now.

@BOLD part - I guess you caught on with the story after a long time. So, I couldn't make out what you mean by those statements of Chanakya, Malay and Parvatak in the BOLD part.

The scene between Chandra and Nandini was so beautiful

I loved how Chandini were thinking about each other

The conversation between Chandra and acharya was Amazing

Finally Chanakya realised his calculations were right

Yes, I wanted to bring out the fact that even Chanakya could make mistakes in his youth (like his miscalculations of horoscope) and he also corrected himself... A teacher who practiced what he preached...

I am happy that Chandra witnessed that Nandini kept the fast for him and also broke her fast by sending her fruits

I hated how durdhara treated Sujan like a mere servant

I liked how You described the struggle between Chandra's heart and brainl

@BOLD - I enjoyed writing Chandra's dilemma and how his heart skips everytime when he is with Nandini 😛

I loved how Chandra abducted Nandini and challenged nand

I hate how parvatak and Malay were talking about Nandini like she is a thing

I can't believe how selfish Nand is

@BOLD - Not just selfish. Cruel. More on this later.

The scenes between Chandini were fantastic

Badal and Bijli love story was cute

@BOLD - I wanted to expand the love story bit between Sujan, Durdhara, Badal and Bijli a bit more, but seeing the response I curtailed it.

I liked how Chandra and Nandini were thinking about each other

The conversation between Chandini was just unbelievable

Chandini scenes are awesome

I liked how Chandra was jealous of his own self

I loved their conversation about how many times their marriage has happened

Chandini parting scene was nice

The conversation between Acharya and Chandra was wonderful

Chandra's thoughts about Nandini were so thoughtful

@BOLD - I wanted to bring it to the table that not every man thinks of a woman as a toy. There are / were decent men who looked at women with respect too. So, we have cruel minded men like Parvatak and Nand, lechers like Malay, pious men like Chanakya, there are decent chivalrous men like Chandra too, who would not touch a woman even when she is at his disposal / mercy and would treat women with utmost respect.

Originally posted by: FrankPunch

Thanks for writing in, Nonie... I was dead beat with the flat silence of this thread.

Well well well CN relation is progressing so well

This is such an amazingly written story... You are exceedingly talented! Thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter... Do keep writing!

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-

This is such an amazingly written story... You are exceedingly talented! Thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter... Do keep writing!

Fantastic chapter Sangeetha😊

Originally posted by: Riddhimaa...

Loved it very much