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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved all the parts. Good job 👍🏼 loved prem heer scenes please update next last part soon
Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: preciousrose26

Loved all the parts. Good job 👍🏼 loved prem heer scenes please update next last part soon

Thank, i am glad that you liked all the parts of this os.
I will probably update today or tomorrow.
Posted: 7 years ago
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I will never leave you

Epilogue

Prem along with Heer came to downstairs with packed bags. Preet, Meher, and Lalit were also ready for to travel with them.

"Beta tum kaha jaha raha ho aur aap sob log bhi kaha jaha rahae Prem ke sath. Gayetri asked them in low voice.

"Main jaha raha ho iss ghar ko chodke hamesha ka liye apne Heer ka sath. Jis ghar me apno ki bitch barosha nahi hain, jis ghar me apno ki khilaf saajish hota ho, jis ghar main sage aur sautela ka baat chalti ho, uss ghar me main nahi rahe sakta. Aur aap ghabriye maat bauji, Preet aur Meher mere sath sirf do dino ko liye ja raha hain mere saath , u log iske baat laut ayenge. Prem replied in a bitter tone. He did not want to talk with Gayetri as her previously spoken words were still hurting him very much.

"Beta please, maat jao apni maa ko chodke. Gayetri requested him in a sad voice.

"Maa, main to kabhi bhi aaj ke pehele aapse alag hone ki bade me socha nahin. Lekin, maa apne khud hamara rishta ka dagha ko tod diya, apne mujh se ye ehasas dila di ki main aapki saga beta nahin ho. Main nahi janta ho ki aab hamare bitch koi rishta ka bujod hain aur nahin. Prem told her in a sad voice.

"Heer please, mujhe maaf kardo main tumhare saath insaf nahi ki, please, Prem ko roko. Gayetri requested Heer.

"Maa aap janti jab meri maa-bauji ka maut ho gayi thi tab main apne aap ko bahut ekela mahossos karne lagi thi, jab main aapse mili tab maine aap me meri maa ko dekhi. Main aaj bhi aapko maa ki tarah samman karti ho, is liye ek beti hone ka natee aapka mere liye kisi bhi baat ki bura nahi manti ho, lekin main sab se pahele aapni Prem ki patni ho . Apne jo darad meri pati ko diya, usse jis tara tode diya uske liye ek patni aapko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti. Heer replied in a determined voice.

Gayetri realized that, it was too late to repair the damage and nothing could be changed now. Prem on the other hand, shifted his focus to Veera and gave her divorce paper.

"Divorce paper Nihal ka sign ke saath. Veera uttered.

"Bhaiya kya aapko nahin lagta aap log jaldbaji kar rahi hain. Harman tried to protest in low voice.

"Oh ab tujhe ye sab jaldbaji lag raha hain. Jab tumne Nihal ki kihalaf aapna faisala shuna diya tha usse kutch shune bina, kya wo jaldbaji nahi tha. Veera ne hamesha Nihal ka acchayi ka fayda uthayi. Aur aaj to wo sarde hade par kar di apni harkato se.

Veera ko to sirf paise aur staus se matlab hain. Usne ek acche insane ki zindegi kharap kar di. Aap mujhe lagta hain divorce ke bina aur koi option nahin hain. Aur Harman agar tu aur Veera chahe to court me ja sakte ho lekin ye yaad rakhna sare sabud hamare pas hain is liye court Nihal ka yi saat dega. Main ye divorce paper yaha rakh ke jata hu agar Veera chahe to isme sign kar sakti hain. Agar nahi kiya to agli mulakat court me hoga mera tum logo ke saath.

Prem left the house with Heer, Maher, Preet and Lalit after saying that. Heer was feeling sad after they left the house. She was feeling bad for both herself and Prem. That house gave her some happy moment which would be cherish by her in rest of her life. However, she was also ready to support her Prem in their next steps in the life.

Nihal was already waiting for them at outside of the house. Soon they left the Juneja mansion in two cars. Nihal,Preet,Meher and Lalit were travelling together in one car in order to give some alone time to Prem and Heer.

"Prem hum sab kaha jaha raha he? Heer asked Prem in a sweet voice. She was sitting beside Prem, her fingers were intertwined with Prems finger. She was trying to convey her support for him through that gesture.

"Ambala.Prem quickly replied to her.

Heer was obviously surprised by Prem's answer.
" Hum uha kyun ja raha hain . Heer asked her husband in a curious voice.

"Uha pei tumhe surprise dunga main. Prem smirked.

After one and half hours of journey, they all reached to Ambala. Heer was feeling very happy after coming to Ambala.

Then Lalit told all of them to go the Shiv Mandir. Heer was happy to hear that, as she always came to Shiv Mandir whenever she felt that, she lost direction in her life. It was also the same place from where she met with her soul mate for the first time in her life.

Heer was really surprised after reaching the Shiv Mandir. She could see a mandap was already prepared there. Heer could also see a pandit was waiting there.

Heer quickly realized that, it was only she who was feeling shocked after seeing all of these; other family members were not shocked as if they already knew about all of this.

"Prem ye sab. Heer asked her husband, as she was confused after seeing all of these. However, she felt further shocked after she saw Prem was kneeling down in front of her.

"Heer yahi wo jagha he jisse hamara prem kahani shuru hua tha. Issi Shiv mandir hum ne ek dosre ko paheli bar ke liye dekha tha. Aaj se hum hamari zindegi noyi tara se suru kar raho ho. Aur mera zindegi adhura hain tumhara saat ke bina. Main nahin janta hamare zindegi me aghe kya hoga par ya jaroor janta hu agar tum mere saat dogi to main duniya ka kisi bhi mushkialyat se lad sakta hu.

Heer jab hamari shadi hui thi tab main sari rasam nibha nahi saka tumhara saat. Aaj main chata ko iss pavitra mandir me bhagwan ko shakshi manke hum shadi ki sare rasam nibhay, bolo Heer kya tum mere iss naye safar main humsafar bonogi , kya tum mujhse phir se shadi karogi? Prem passionately proposed his lover. He always wanted to all the wedding customs with his Heer. Now, when he was starting a new journey in his life, he wanted to marry his soul mate once again and that time after completing all the wedding customs.

While Prem was lovingly waiting for an answer from his Heer, Heer on the other hand, felt speechless for few moments. She was shocked after realizing what Prem's actual surprise was for her. She always dreamt about doing all the wedding customs with her Prem. She was touched deeply in her heart after hearing the loving proposal from her husband. Heer knew that, what she wanted to say. There was no doubt in her mind that, she would always support Prem. They would face all the problems in their life together; they would act as a shield for each other. Heer knew that, she only belonged to Prem just like Prem only belonged to her.

She bend down to reach at Prem's level and made him to stand up. She cupped his face lovingly. Prem also cupped her face by using his friends. Two lovers were looking at each other with all the love they had for each other in their heart.

"Haa Prem, main phir se shaddi karongi tumse. Jis tarah tum meri bina adhoora ho usi tara main bhi adhoora ho tumhara bina. Zindegi ki aage ki safar jitni hi mushkil kyun na ho , hum dono ek dusre ka humsafar banke usse par karenge. Jab tak hum dono ki dil dhatakengi hum ek dusre ka sahara banenge. Mere bas aabhi yehi chahat hain ki hum humesha ek dosre ki saat nibhay. Heer replied passionately to Prem's proposal.

After hearing, her passionate reply Prem quickly hug his Heer tightly. His one hand was rubbing Heer's back lovingly and his other hand was busy in playing with her's hair. Heer also returned the hug with same passion. Two lovers found themselves lost in each other's loving arms. They closed their eyes to feel each other more closely.

"Bhaiya, bhabi control karo apne apko, hum bhi to hain yeah, jo bhi karna room ki andar karna. Preet teased them.

After hearing, his comments both Prem and Heer came back to reality from their loving world. Both blushed deeply. They separate themselves from each other's arms slowly.

Both came forward to take the blessing from Lalit and touched his feet. After seeing them in so much love and happy, Lalit found himself getting emotional.

"Jite raho beta. Main shukar gujar hu uparwala ka jisne tum dono ki ye Jodi banaya. Aap ,mera sirf unse ek hain gujarish hain ki oh tum dono ki Jodi ko yasi banay rakhe hamesha ka liye. Lalit hugged his son and daughter in law after blessing them.

Nihal, Preet and Meher congratulated the loving couple on their remarriage with each other.

Prem and Heer came to the shadi ki mandap . Prem and Heer exchanged garlands. They followed Pandit's instruction to complete various customs of marriage. While they were completing those ritual they were also looking loving at each other. Nihal came forward to do kanyadan .

After some times Pandit instructed both Prem and Heer to stand up and complete saat phere around holy fire.

The two lovers were happily taking their phere around the holy fire, while reaffirming their commitment, respect, and love for each other.

" Aaj main Heer Juneja iss pavitra agni ko shakshi manke Prem tumse ye bachan deti hu, ki main humesha aapni pati ki roop main tumhe samman karongi, tumhare liye mere payar kabhi kam nahi honge. Sukh me, dukh me har halat main tumhara saat dangui. Zindegi main chahe jo bhi ho main tumhari kabhi saat nahi chorungi.

Main tumhara sath sirf saat zindegi ke liye nahi nibhaongi, agar uske baad bhi koi zindegi hain to main un zindigio me bhi tumhe aapne jeveen sathi ki roop main changogi. Main sirf tumharai hu Prem . Aaj bhagwan ki iss pavitra mandir main phir se tumhe apni pati ki roop main sikar karti hun. Heer vowed to Prem . She meant every word she said in her vow to Prem. In her mind her body, heart, and soul only belonged to her Prem.

" Aaj main Prem Juneja tumse ek bar phir ye bachan deta hu ki main hamesha tumhe aapna patni ki roop main samman karunga, mera payar tumhare liye mera akheri sass tak kam nahi hoga. Main hamesha tumse wafadar rahunga Heer. Kyunki main tan,man, dil aur athamao se sirf tumhara hu.

Zindegi ki har raho main tumhe apna humsafar roop main chahata hain. Tumhari payar mere liye jine ka wajah hain Heer. Iss likye mere bhagwan se sirf ek hi mannat ki woh har janam me hum dono ko saat rakhe. Tumhari liye mere dil main jo payar hain woh saat janam main to kiya shaw janam main bhi khatam nahi hoga. Aaj main tumhe phir se iss pavitra agni ko shakshi manke tumhe apna patni ki roop me shikar karta hu. Prem vowed to Heer and just like Heer he also meant every word of his vow. Prem Juenja was only created for his soul mate Heer Juneja.

" Aab kanya ki mang me sindoor bhariye. Pandit instructed Prem to fill Heer's mang with sindoor.

Prem slowly filled Heer's mang with sindoor. At that moment, Heer closed her eyes in happiness. She would cherish the moment when she once again became wife of her Prem.

"Vivah sampan hua, aaj se aap dono pati aur patni hue, aap jake bodo ki aashiwarbad le sakta hain. Pandit finally declared them as husband and wife.

Prem and Heer share a happy smile between them. They were happy for marrying each other once again.

Prem and Heer once again touched the feet of Lailit.

" Sadha suhagan raho beti, bhagwan tum duno ki jodio ko bass yasi banay rakhe hamesha. Aaj agar Ballu aur parjayi ji zinda hote to who bhi bahut kush hote. Lalit wished newly remarried couple while also remembering about his late friend and his Teji bhabi.

Nihal, Preet and Meher also wished the newly remarried couple. They were also feeling Happy after seeing the happy faces of Prem and Heer.

After that, Prem and Heer once again looked at each other with love. Life had already taken many testes of their love. However, they never lost their faith on each other. Every test of life just increased the love they felt for each other. Now, they were opening new chapter of their life. They once again reaffirmed their love and faith for each other in front of god.

Prem and Heer once again found themselves in each other loving arms. As expected, they found haven for themselves there. Prem slowly lowered his lips to capture his Heer's beautiful lips with his lips.Heer was also trying to kiss her Prem. The lips of two lovers found each other at mid way and that way they once again sealed their wedding vowsto each other.

End of OS.

I really like the fact that, you people give so much love to my OS. Considering that it was my first attempt to write a ff, your appreciation for each chapters inspire to write on Prem & Heer.

This OS is ending here. However, I will soon write a ff on Prem and Heer. Where Heer will be older than Prem .

At the end I just want to say a big thank you to all my sweet sisters who liked and commented on this OS.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Beautiful ending for a beautiful story. The best surprise he can ever give. Kaash..show mein bhi aisa hoti..
Im gona to miss this story :(
Posted: 7 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Alina...

Beautiful ending for a beautiful story. The best surprise he can ever give. Kaash..show mein bhi aisa hoti..

Im gona to miss this story :(

Thanks for your kind remarks.
I will write a gf on Prem and Heer soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
Lovely update. PremHeer scene are beautifully written.
I love prem surprise for heer💔. Keep up the great work👍🏼
Waiting for your next story. Heer older then prem sound interesting.
Posted: 7 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: preciousrose26

Lovely update. PremHeer scene are beautifully written.

I love prem surprise for heer💔. Keep up the great work👍🏼
Waiting for your next story. Heer older then prem sound interesting.

Thanks for your review.
I think older Heer is an interesting story idea. You can explore so many things under this storyline.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58
amazing ending with premeer remarriage. <3 thats so sweet. i'm glad prem left house.wish this happened in the show.
looking forward to see your next story.
Posted: 7 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Indu_

amazing ending with premeer remarriage. <3 thats so sweet. i'm glad prem left house.wish this happened in the show.

looking forward to see your next story.

Thanks for liking the ending of the os.
I also think that, it would have been better if Prem did not have such blind trust on his mother .
I am hoping that, you will like my next story.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#60
Hi Shuridh 🤗

Wow this is indeed a surprise - I had no idea you have planned to turn the story here.
It's very sweet. Dialogues were wonderful- very meaningful.
Yay party time 🥳 for PH [:D/]

It's more meaningful as people who care about Ph are around to celebrate with them 😃
It's truly a very ideal scene situation you've created ⭐️
Love happy stories woohoo 😃

Looking forward to read more of your creative pieces.
It's we the fans who need to thank for the tremendous effort you have put in to keep rest of fans in happy mode. Besides Fatima_Q you're the other writer in our forum at the present time.
There were others who write time to time but very irregular and are not committed as you two are.
We truly appreciate all that you have done in such a short span of time 👏

Excited for next creation from you and I must mention all your topics always make me think as if it's new - and it's refreshing to discuss about a show we care about.
Keep rocking this place and love you loads.

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