New Prem Heer OS: I will never leave you (Epilogue on page 8) - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Loved it
Happy ending
Will wait for ur next story
Posted: 7 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: AASUS

Hi Shuridh 🤗

Wow this is indeed a surprise - I had no idea you have planned to turn the story here.
It's very sweet. Dialogues were wonderful- very meaningful.
Yay party time 🥳 for PH [:D/]

It's more meaningful as people who care about Ph are around to celebrate with them 😃
It's truly a very ideal scene situation you've created ⭐️
Love happy stories woohoo 😃

Looking forward to read more of your creative pieces.
It's we the fans who need to thank for the tremendous effort you have put in to keep rest of fans in happy mode. Besides Fatima_Q you're the other writer in our forum at the present time.
There were others who write time to time but very irregular and are not committed as you two are.
We truly appreciate all that you have done in such a short span of time 👏

Excited for next creation from you and I must mention all your topics always make me think as if it's new - and it's refreshing to discuss about a show we care about.
Keep rocking this place and love you loads.

Wow you give a very long review.
I hate tragic ending, so all of my ff will have happy ending, and Prem-Heer deserved to be happy.
Thanks for your appriciation sis, it make me feel very happy.
However,it was comments, likes from all of you that truly inspired me to write more on Prem Heer and open new topics on them.
I am very grateful to all of you for the love you showed to this os, I hope you will continue to this love for my next stories.
I was member of various forums but this forum is one of the best till now for me.
This forum have no negativity and the bonding between members are good . The way you all people welcomed me in this forum really touched my heart.
I will start my next story soon you all can expect Prologue and character sketch on 9 or 10 November.
Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sadiaharshiti

Loved it
Happy ending
Will wait for ur next story

At first thanks for sending me buddy request, I accepted it.
Thanks for your review and you can expect my next story on November 9 or 10.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
super amazing ending
its too short wish it was long
but happy the way u write the story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
Amazing ending
Just love the story...
Wish u could continue bt it gt over so no problem... Bt waiting for new story on premeer
... U r amazing writer
Edited by Trisha510 - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: sana.harshiti

super amazing ending

its too short wish it was long
but happy the way u write the story

Thanks, i hope I will get you as a reader for my next story.
Posted: 7 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Trisha510

Amazing ending
Just love the story...
Wish u could continue bt it gt over so no problem... Bt waiting for new story on premeer
... U r amazing writer

Thanks. You will get next Prem Heer story soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
Finally read part 2 😳
Wow..very emotional...poor Prem...loving Gaytri as his own mother and then for her to turn on him...😭

Now I want to know what surprise Prem wants to show Heer. 😊 Does it have to do with his real mother?

Will comment again after reading next part
Posted: 7 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q

Finally read part 2 😳

Wow..very emotional...poor Prem...loving Gaytri as his own mother and then for her to turn on him...😭

Now I want to know what surprise Prem wants to show Heer. 😊 Does it have to do with his real mother?

Will comment again after reading next part

Yes,Gayetri's comments definitely hurt Prem's feelings.
I will early wait for your comments on next part.
Today I may post Prologue and Character sketch of my next Prem Heer ff.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
Finally got to reading part 3 😳
Very nicely done. You reworked the entire Veera-Nihal scenario a hundred time better than the original one put out by the CVs...👏

I especially liked the proofs Prem presented Gaytri and the family.
Loved the tiny but cute Meet part near the end.

Thanks for sharing your writing talent with us.

Now I have to find time to read your FF 😆
Edited by Fatima_Q - 7 years ago

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