Due to time constraints last time, I was not able to properly express myself, but now, time is on my side...
When the first promos came out, we were introduced to a couple who after deciding to end their relationship, were still in one... And, this maturity and sensibility were the traits which attracted all of us...
I don't think that anyone was surprised when the initial break up happened, but what took us all by surprise, was the way it was handled... In my opinion, storyline was fine, till Dev ki Deewangi track but afterwards, the quick marriage and other events really, in many ways, ruined the characters...
The communication and trust that we wished to see between Dev and Sona during the first break up, we only got to see after Sona's proposal to Dev, this June... And, by that time, it was too little, too late..
The same goes for other characters... Ishwari was insecure, but she was not a bad person at heart, but again, her character could never truly come out of the infamy, until the last phases of season 1... Or, Mamaji, the only character who could observe everything that is happening around him, he could have been developed into such a well-balanced character, but in the end, he turned out to be a very weak character..
I guess, the list goes on...
And, probably, this is why your story excites me so much because through your episodes, we are able to see the 'what-if' the characters acted or developed in the manner we all wished for...
I don't think that I have to say anything about your writing style... You already know how good you are and I have full faith in your writing prowess to deliver some more exciting and gripping episodes in the future...
But, yes, I do wish to tell you... That, if you have an endpoint that you have envisioned in your head, regarding this wonderful story, then, please don't try to go beyond that point...
KRPKAB was supposed to end February of this year.. Leap was never planned but due to fan and TRPs demands, the show got an extension and while the post-leap had some amazing tracks and episodes, it was far too inconsistent to reach the standards set by its initial episodes...
And, season 2... You already know how it all went... All of us wished for the show to come back, but see, how it churned out...
So, please your story is such a beautiful one, and I do not wish to see your story having the same end as our much beloved show...
But, thank you so much for your quick updates and can't wait for your mail containing the link to episode 6...
- Suyash.