Imaginary Krpkab.. new episode part 10B updated on 17 dec link at pg1 - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: taahir004

<font color="#660099" size="3">Spectacular Chapter</font>

<font color="#660099" size="3">This chapter if only the CV's had thought this way it would have been much more interesting</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">the breakup that on its own shown such immaturity , I couldn't understand why a person like Dev could not first talk to Sonakshi but here you offer this solid maturity and understanding that lacked big time in DevAkshi , it was only they got back together for the second time did they at least have some understanding</font>



Agree with your words with a longing sigh 😃 . Something messed up with our well started beautiful love story of our beloved Devakshi 😭 ..
And thank you so much for your wonderful comments. Your words are really Encouraging
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Gauri.0109

Woah...what an awesome update👏I loved how you are presenting Ishwari's character here. She was an inherently good person and loved her nutrition very much. They gave a very bad character arc to her in the serial. Looking forward to how you take this forward!


Ishwari's character was the one CVS messed up 'the most'.. Sometimes showed her as Mahan. . Sometimes as immature confused lady sometimes good hearted. . Sometimes obsessed one. . Oh what to say.. .

Thank you so much for your appreciation.. Hope I will make up to your expectations..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART - 5

"Radharani.. I warn you. You must stay in your limit. Ishwari and Dev knew how to handle the situations." mamaji said angrily.

"Arey what have I done... After retirement why can't you join in some old men's club and do your social service outside of the house? Always behind me and my laadla" radharani shouted in her high pitch voice.

"I'm not sitting idle in the house. I have applied for part-time accountant job in a company. They offered me the job already. But Dev asked me to be with ishwari after the incident . And do you know what does that mean?. He wants me to stop you from filling his maa's ears with unwanted things " said mamaji in sarcasm and annoyance loaded tone.

"Hawww you and your accountant job. Our kicchu also gets more salary than you. And Dev loves me a lot. Whatever I am doing is for his happiness and good future " finishing the whole cup of roasted nuts radharani revealed her "save Dev" plans..

"Oh really? You better go and take care of your "nalaayak" son. I heard when You are giving ishwari ideas to check Dev's mobile to find out whether he is still in touch with sonakshi or not.. Are you not ashamed? "

"It's elders duty to check children's contact" RR replied curtly..

"For God's sake Dev is not some 10 years old. He is the CEO of Delhi's renown communication company. " maamiji just wants to smack something hard on his "pea-brained" wife's head..

"Whatever the bengalan is out of Dev's life now. And we want her never to step into his life again. She is nothing but a misfortune to de..."

"Kitchu bhaiyaaa" a thundering voice came from the front door and radharani stopped his "Gyan baasha" in fear.



She jumped in terror and saw Dev throwing his overcoat in full anger on the sofa..

Kitchu came running towards him "Ji Dev bhai. I am checking the provisions and and... "
Dev cut his reply and said in a loud voice "I don't have time to hear your Blabbering.. I hate people badmouthing and wasting their time in unnecessary talking do you understand? " his eyes were on his maami

Kitchu nodded his head . Even he knew the words of his beloved Dev bhai were not aimed at him..

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She has no complaints in her life. Being an upper middle class mother her main concern in her whole life is their children- their education -their future security.she always worried about her son saurabh but her sona never gave her a reason to worry..

When she knew the budding love between Dev &sona - Asha first time started to worry about her 'middle class ' status and about sona.

She didn't want a prince for her sona she wanted an ordinary man who would treat her child as a princess.

That's only
That's all she wanted..

In the time of sona's accident she was stunned by the care and concern Dev has for sona. She confused why her daughter used to call him "Obhodro" because in none of the angles he looked like the one.

She knew Dev has a soft corner towards sona. But the vast status difference and Dixits' family's custom and traits - kind of created a permanent fear in her mind.

She was not the mother who would suspect every decision of their children and intrude in all of them. But the depth of sona's feeling towards Dev made her took this step. So she asked Dev to come and meet them .

Uff it was a long day.. And she has to instruct many things to her 'angry young man' bijoy before dev's arrival. Pouring the newly prepared tea in cups Asha came out of her kitchen and probably out of her thoughts too.
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Maamaji entered Dev's room and saw him speaking to kitchu.

"Kitchu bhaiyaa I'm sorry you have to face my anger. I'm not intend to hurt you or never find faults in your work and sincerity. Please forgive me"

"No Dev bhai " kitchu hurriedly cut his apology. "I know you are not pointing me. I am ok. You don't worry. " he said it with a smile and exited with the coffee mug.

Maamaji 's heart swelled in pride of his nephew.

Dev knew if maamaji came to talk him then it must be on a important topic. He was nervous already very nervous on Asha ji's invitation. Now mamaji at his doorstep. Did he got offend on the way I reacted to mamiji's words. But her accusations were...

"I came here not to talk about radharani" mamaji announced.

Dev chuckled at mamaji's words. Whom I was thinking about - the man who stood with me as a father as a guardian as a mentor and as a friend in all my ups and downs . Reading my face was as easy as reading an open book for him. -he thought..

"I met sonakshi " he said..

Dev raised his eyebrow. Yeah kab hua????

"I know you love your mother more than anyone and you would go to any extreme for her happiness. But that small girl .. What is her mistake in all that..? "

Dev felt a sudden warmth inside him. "Loving someone is a nice feeling..
Someone loving your loved one -is indeed a Great feeling"

Maamaji intrupt in his thought process-
"I assured her that me and you would solve all these mess"

"Oh" that's what all Dev could say..

"I astonished to see her trust on you. She was confident and strong that you will take care of everything. She enquired about You,Ishwari, Neha, Nikki, Riya, even about radharani.. How pure and innocent she is!..
I will never forgive you if u hurt her even a bit. She is like my girl no she is of course my daughter "

"And she requested me to convey you that she is waiting for your calls. How much love she has for you. But u didn't call her even once.. That's not fair Dev. I didn't expect this from you" maamaji stormed out of his room saying this..

Whattt?

Dev saw his phone's dial history.
16 calls
25 messages exchanged between Dev and mishti sona from morning 8a.m to afternoon 1. 00pm

Then what is that?
That little naughty minx lied deliberately about me..
Innocent.. Hmmm
Miss. Bose I will not leave you for this..
Wait for me and my punishment..

"Dev Dixit on the way to Bose House" he said with a devilish smile on his face...

Precap: -

Dev-boses face off

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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
Another beautiful part.. Waiting for the next one 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
Thank goodness, your version of Mamaji is actually willing to act on his own words. And I love your Dev and Sona too. Liking Sona's naughty side. You go, girl, complain all you want to Mamaji and keep Dev on his toes 😉. This kind of harmless fun is what they shld have showed, it wud have made things so pleasant in the show. Since Dev is actually talking sense to her and being open, Sona can also trust him fully. Very nicely done. Do keep the updates coming.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
It was another heart warming chapter! 👏Loved it! I am loving your mature way of handling the story more after reading every part!!👏👏
Kudos to you!
Enjoying mamaji's actions very much!He has always been very supportive towards Devakshi!And can't wait to see how Dev handles naughty Sona! 😉
Please update asap!
Thank you for the pms!😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
Nice one.
A sensible mamaji is always treat to read.
Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
Lovely update. Eagerly waiting for next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89
beautiful amazing
keep writting👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
Due to time constraints last time, I was not able to properly express myself, but now, time is on my side...

When the first promos came out, we were introduced to a couple who after deciding to end their relationship, were still in one... And, this maturity and sensibility were the traits which attracted all of us...

I don't think that anyone was surprised when the initial break up happened, but what took us all by surprise, was the way it was handled... In my opinion, storyline was fine, till Dev ki Deewangi track but afterwards, the quick marriage and other events really, in many ways, ruined the characters...

The communication and trust that we wished to see between Dev and Sona during the first break up, we only got to see after Sona's proposal to Dev, this June... And, by that time, it was too little, too late..

The same goes for other characters... Ishwari was insecure, but she was not a bad person at heart, but again, her character could never truly come out of the infamy, until the last phases of season 1... Or, Mamaji, the only character who could observe everything that is happening around him, he could have been developed into such a well-balanced character, but in the end, he turned out to be a very weak character..

I guess, the list goes on...

And, probably, this is why your story excites me so much because through your episodes, we are able to see the 'what-if' the characters acted or developed in the manner we all wished for...

I don't think that I have to say anything about your writing style... You already know how good you are and I have full faith in your writing prowess to deliver some more exciting and gripping episodes in the future...

But, yes, I do wish to tell you... That, if you have an endpoint that you have envisioned in your head, regarding this wonderful story, then, please don't try to go beyond that point...

KRPKAB was supposed to end February of this year.. Leap was never planned but due to fan and TRPs demands, the show got an extension and while the post-leap had some amazing tracks and episodes, it was far too inconsistent to reach the standards set by its initial episodes...

And, season 2... You already know how it all went... All of us wished for the show to come back, but see, how it churned out...

So, please your story is such a beautiful one, and I do not wish to see your story having the same end as our much beloved show...

But, thank you so much for your quick updates and can't wait for your mail containing the link to episode 6...

- Suyash.
Edited by Harryfan011 - 7 years ago

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