RiKara SS - Catching Feelings Part 5 on Pg 16 (04/11) - Page 13

It's been amazing yar...wonderful output again...continue soon dear...what happened to other ff

So good to see you back after sooo long Genie !!! 😃

Loved the update dear

Awesome update!!

After such a long time...

Ginie, I love this. Om is lying for Gauri and its is not a big deal now for Satyavati Om aka Truth's boyfriend, wow she is shocked man. It is a bit sad to think that Om had never spoken to her in a polite and soft manner, before made her question him. Well Om is gonna prove to her soon and he is gonna make it up to her. Good decision by Rikara to clear all the misunderstanding. Waiting for next update.

Just read the whole story and its very beautiful...

So i was of the view that maybe I wldn't be able to unres but I have before you posted though ur being missed as i do need my rikara dosage.Glad u agree that this story needs to be told and is willing to push urself to write this because as a reader as much exciting,anticipating its gonna be to read this,its gonna be more difficult for you to write bcoz all these flawed characters demands an emotional investment to get the right chord.

The part of Omkie being hurt somewhere deep inside because she is always packed up or she is having a hard time believing he does what he does sincerely is so understandable and since the makers of the show have left it on us to grasp the nuances because they are just not interested in rikara is well quite expected.

But if we do see Omkara has always been attracted towards gauri,there is no denying there and he is very much physically aware of her and somewhere deep down he is very much that alpha male,a preview of which was shown in show during that confrontation scene.He doesn't give her the acceptance but the fact she is interested in someone else has the blood roaring and pounding that he goes on to behave that way.Not that it makes it justifiable,it absolitely doesnot but it just gives away what was t show that how
Deep he is in love with her.Somewhere along the fakemance and that pregnancy and playing fixers he has got so used to her that he can't fathom being without her.I do have an inkling that what was shown as clearance of misunderstanding by dandi was just somewhere his desperation to believe that about gauri being innocent and hat is why he is so quick in believing it.Though it dsnt make sense of him not being shown worried,anxious and crazily missing her.

Had I been I would have liked the story to turn this way like u have penned down ot perhaps make gauri leave seen how pinky taunted her.And then their journey but me and u r not writing it.

Omkara's love is visible if one clearly goes deep,marriage maybe wavy but partner he considers.That slight happiness of being as God shiv and Goddess parvati.So this story is my satisfaction and I am
All geard up to see how does the demons come out both of them.

I would call this story journey of you and i to being US.

Update soon and ignore the typos.