RiKara SS - Catching Feelings Part 5 on Pg 16 (04/11) - Page 11

This is lovely! Wish the IB CVs would take some notes from your story - just one simple conversation for Om to see what he had become! I did not watch DBO but I really am getting to like RiKara, especially your version of them!😆

awesome update yar

Ahh how was I waiting for the update!.U dnt know how glad I am that you hve finally got the muse back for this SS because this tale deserves to be told.The main issue with indian telly is that couples hardly talk where all the moments are yes pleasing to eyes but communication is the key and seeing you peek a boo into this beautiful flawed man's heart and mind and reading it is such a treat.

Forgot to say earlier,loved that how Om connected the dots regarding buamaa and how he knows that he has always been comfortable when it comes to physical proximity of a relationship.I have been catching up on parts that has rikara in IB before and if one notices its shown that even when they are being fixers there is no hesitancy with regards to holding each other abd its always subconscious.Like its so natural to touch each other's arms or shoulders bcoz its so natural between them and I absolutely adore this fact.

Even though sometimes the actions of a character are questionable,we have to take it with a pinch of salt because writers a lot of times write BS bcoz they just are on a high or forget the inital character they carved.And somewhere I have never got the word redemption in regards to ny earlier show as well.And i an a believer that true apology is changed behaviour and making sure u give ur partner that respect they deserve.Which You have done so beautifully in this story's sequel my friend.

Now I just want to see them talk,Omkara feeling how much he had changed and she was the only one to bring such extreme reactions out of him is the verdict of him being affected from the word go.Let them talk,shout,say whatever that has been in the deepest reccesses of their heart and start the journey of being true soulmates.

And as much as gauri deserves to know how Om turned this way,she does need to know that sometimes the end does not justify the means with in regards to her pregnancy lie as I believe in equality.So lets see where you take it from here.

PS - Ill be waiting to read ur earlier work so do pm and P&P,Mr Darcy was indeed that first fictional
Character who was special because he wasn't perfect either.

PPS - Can you add the page no of various chaps on fist page so it makes rereading easier.Waiting for more.Ignore the typos.

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

loved the new update

now Om finally knows how gauri feels in terms of his behavior towards her

loved how you portrayed it simply

his soft/gentle tone made her insecure and showed him that he had to change that

CANT wait to see what happens next

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Awesome update!!

Loved it.

Very beautifully written.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks for d pm:)

Originally posted by: Ishqfeel

Totally loved it... was checking my inbox and here it comes from you... Very nice Yaar...

Please update the next part soon... how will Om handles the conversation..I am excited to know about this

Originally posted by: Naina280599

This is amazing, Genie! Loved how you made Om think of his behavior with Gauri, how he started getting angry at himself for treating her in a way that she's scared of his reactions. I wanted to see something like this in DBO specially after that almost slap scene. Anyway, I loved reading this, specially our cute chirraiya being shocked that he lied, just because he wanted to talk to her. Too anxious to know what happens next. Post soonish! Much love ❤️

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

hehehe gauri reaction on OM lie was hilarious can so imagine shrenu expressing this

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Wonderful update loved it so much.

Originally posted by: Aarathi85

Wow amazing...gauri is surprise to know omkara said a lie..waiting for next one