Deadly Sins (ft. ShiVika, RiKara, RuVya) - Page 3

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Rohini

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is absolutely amazing...

Each of the character, has been described beautifully with a trait. Loved the way those are described...

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PenguinBaby

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Posted: 8 years ago

Lovely story! How you captured the seven sins so beautifully!

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frustrated12233

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Posted: 8 years ago

Aww! This was such a nice one!!

U write so well dear! U should write more!

Please do write more of RiKara

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nayanarose

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Posted: 8 years ago

do u watch fullmetal alchemist ??? nd ya the story is gre8👏👏👏

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Kripa Shankar

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Posted: 8 years ago

Loved this whole concept!!!!

You captured the sins and weaved it into the story in a rather brilliant manner!!

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

Fabulous work

Awesome description of each character

And the lustful part 1

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