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Posted: 7 years ago

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Heyy..

Interesting one..

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Interesting teaser...

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Here is the next update of this story..

Part -10




Mihika - kuch nhi appa wo Raman abhi kuch time phle hi London se pdhai complete krke aaya h

Appa - ohh that's great

Mihika - hmm ap log baitho hm kuch nasta laarey h saying both went from there..

After the iyer sister left for kitchen amma signal appa for talk with them which appa nodded..

Appa - to mihir beta tumne pdhayi kaha tak ki hai..

Mihir - ji uncle I have completed my MBA ..

Appa - ohh that's great ..

Mihir - ji thank you..

Appa - or aage ka kya plan h beta I mean about carrier..

Mihir - ji uncle mai apne papa ka business handle kr rha hu..

Appa - achha ye to achha hai ki tum apne papa ka kaam mein haath btate ho varna ajkl ke kafi bachhe to sirf apne aisho aaram ke baare mein sochte h listening him Raman start coughing..

Appa - arey beta what happened ?

Raman (still caughing) - kuch nhi uncle I think kuch phash gya ..

Appa - ohk have water you will feel better saying he gave him a glass water..

Raman (slowly)- bhai mujhe kyu lag rha h ki aisho aaram wali baat uncle mujhe bol rhe the kahi aapne to mere bare mein kuch nhi bola na..

Mihir - nahi yrr mai aaj khud first time mila how can I? They were still talking when Ishmi came with some refreshment & vada & upma and some other south Indian dishes..

Raman (makes faces)- ye kya h ..

Ishita - what do you mean by ye kya hai ? Ye nasta h vada & chatpata upma..


Raman - bhai ye SB kya hota h maine to naam tk nhi suna ...


Mihir - beta Jo mil rha h kha le chupchap..

Appa - kya hua beta tumhe psnd nhi kiya ye SB to hm kuch or bnwa dete h..listening this Raman smiles widely & he was about to say yes when ishita interrupted

Ishita - arey nahi appa he loves it you know jiju se specially phn krwake isne ye bnwane ki zidd ki thi saying she wink him..

Appa - achha you loved south Indian food..

Ishita - ha appa haina Mr.lrll only audible to Raman

Raman - hmm uncle she is right..

Appa - that's great to lo na mihku do naa ishe..

Mihika - ji appa saying she served in a plate & gave it to him & said sorry on ishita's behalf..

Amma - agr aap logo ka ho gya ho to kya mai kuch puch skti hu..

Appa - madhu..

Amma - kya vishwa mai nhi puch skti kya..

Mihir - kyun nhi amma puchiye Jo puchna h..

Amma - kya tumne apne or mihika ke relationship ke bare mein apni family ko btaya h..

Mihir - ji nhi..

Amma - what to KB btaoge or agr unhone mana kr diya to..

Mihir - nhi aunty ji aisa nhi hoga mai janta hu mere maa papa kbhi mana nhi krenge..

Amma - waise kis family se ho tum..

Mihir - ji mera papa ka naam Mr Om Prakash Bhalla hai listening the name amma & appa was totally shocked ..
Amma was so surprise & happy to bcoz she always want that her daughters will married with a rich & well settled ppl who fulfill her all wishes & dreams..

Amma - tum"The On Prakash Bhalla " ke bete ho Jo ek bhuttt bade business man h India ke..

Mihir (lil amused with her behavior)- ji aunty


Appa - bt beta hm itne bde logo ke sath rishta nhi kr skte kaha tum kahan..

Amma - arey aisa kyun bol rhe ho vishwa bde chote se kya hota hai..mujhe to ye rishta manjoor hai mujhe pta tha meri beti ki psnd achhi hogi..

IshMi was looking on amma totally shocked & surprise then each other.

Amma - arey beta tum logo ne kuch khaya nahi lo na saying she start serving him ..


Mihir - arey nahi nahi aunty bas bahut kha liya..

Amma - achha beta ab tum jldi se apni family mein baat krlo phr hm rishta lekr aate hai ..

Mihir was lil upset with her sudden behavior so he only nodded & after greeting than he went out of the house raman follows him..IshMi also feels something fishy..
After they went aap said

Appa - madhu ye kya behavior tha achanak se tum agree ho gyi shaadi ke liye..

Amma - ye sahi h agr mai mana kiya to buri or ab maan gyi to bhi..


Ishita - nhi amma bt your behavior changed when jiju told about his status & family..

Mihika - kya bol rhi h ishu amma to bas khush h mere liye..

Amma - or nhi to kya ha ye sahi h ki uski family ke bare sunkr raji hui qki mai hmesha se chahti thi ki meri beti ek aise ghr mein jaye jahan unki sari khwahisein poori ho unhe kisi bhi baat ke liye sochna naa pdey qki mai nhi chahti jis tarah tum log yahan pe ek choti choti khwayish ko dabaya hai wo aage bhi ho..saying she wiped her tears IshMi & appa also having tears in their eyes IshMi hugged amma tight & called appa too ..

Ishmi - no amma aap dono ne kbhi hmari koi nhi khwahish ko mana nhi kiya you both are best parents in this world we are very lucky to have you..


Amma - we also love both of you..bt kanna kahin mihir or uske bhai ko bhi to ye nhi LGA hoga na ki maine unke status ko dekhne agree kiya aiyoo murugan I think mujhe unse maafi maangni chahiye or baat krna chahiye..

Mihika - arey nhi amma wo aisa kuch nhi sochegen..

Amma - bt phr bhi

Mihika - u don't worry amma mai baat kr lungi wo aisa nhi h

Amma - OK


On the other side raman was asking mihir

Raman - kya hua bhai y r u looking upset? Apko to khush hona chahiye ki finally Bhabhi ki family ne apka rishta accept kr liya ab bs papa maa se baat then chat mangni & patt byah woww raman Teri Hindi ab bhi achhi hai saying he appreciate himself..

Mihir - I know raman its really a big happy news for me bt I don't know mujhe khushi nhi ho rhi h..

Raman - bt why bhai?

Mihir - I don't know tune notice kiya ya nhi bt mujhe mihku ki amma ka sudden behavior thoda ajeeb lava I mean phle she was not agree for our relationship bt when she come to know about my status & papa she agreed wholeheartedly so that means she only agree with my status not with me Jo mai hu..

Raman - arey nahi bhai aap jyada soch rhe ho I mean I agreed that she was became happy when she know about our family bt its so common bhai har parents yahi chahte h ki wo apne bachon ke liye aisa life partner chahte who can fulfill their needs ..

Mihir - I can understand bt phr bhi he was saying when his phn start ringing..

Raman - bhabhi ka hoga utha lo mai jata hu..saying he went from there

Mihir - hello

Mihika - hello mihir m so happy finally SB kuch achha ho rha h amma appa to maan gye ab tumhre papa or maa bhi agree ho jaye bs...

Mihir - hmm mihku..

Mihika -what happen mihir? Koi baat hai kya..

Mihir - listen mihika don't get me wrong..

Mihika - ha Kya hua bolo to u r scaring me..

Mihir - mihku I don't know Jo mai soch rha hu wo sahi hai ya nhi bt mujhe lgta h tumhari amma ish rishte ke liye isliye agree hui h qki unhe ab pta h ki mai kis family se belong krta hu


Mihika - what do you mean mihir ? tum kehna chahte ho ki meri amma lalchi hai wo tmhri status se impressed hui..


Mihir - mihika tum angry kyu ho rhi hu jo mujhe LGA wo maine bola mera WO mtlb nhi tha..

Mihika - mai achhi tarah se smjh rhi hu tmhra kya mtlb tha so agr the aisa lgta to I think tumhe ek baar soch Lena chahiye ish relationship ke bare mein


Mihir - ab tum jyada bol rhi ho mihika agr tumhe itni prblm hai to tum bhi soch lo saying both disconnected the call..unknown to them their siblings was heard all their talk..


Raman - ye kya kiya bhai apne Maine bola tha phr bhi

Mihir - mujhe Jo LGA wo hi maine bola bt usse kuch jyada hi bura maan liya so its not my prblm..


Ishita - akka ye kya kiya aapne

Mihika - to kya krti wo aisa bolta rehta or mai sun leti no its never happen..

Raman - bhai ek baar unka POV bhi to smjho

Mihir - mai kyun smjhu usne smjha tha..


Ishita - akka jiju ki tarah phle maine bhi to socha tha na amma ke bare mein ..

Mihika - ha. to tu meri bhn h bol skti h bt how dare he..


Raman - mujhe kuch nhi smjhna mai bhabhi ko phn kr rha hu aap baat kroge or SB solve kroge okk saying he dialled mihika number from mihir's phn


Mihir - mai nhi baat krunga phle wo kregi saying he went out of room..


Raman - shit ab kya kru maine to phn dial kr diya ab AGR cut kiya to or matter kharab ho jayega koi nhi mai baat kr lunga bhabhi se..


On other side mihika's phn start ringing

Ishita - akka see jiju ka phn aa rha h take it & solve the misunderstanding


Mihika - mujhe usse koi baat nhi krni saying she went from there

Ishita - ab kya kru agr phn nhi uthaya to jiju bura maan jyenge koi nhi mai hi baat kr leti hu..

IshRa- hello tum


Raman - ha mai pr tune kyun phn uthaya bhabhi ka

Ishita - or tumne kyun jiju ke phn se phn kiya..

Raman - arey yrr jhalli ish time I think hme fight nhi karna chahiye


Ishita - hmm I think u r right Mr Lrll


Raman - waise yhan ka temperature bhut high hai or wahan ka


Ishita - same here


Ishra- I think hme kuch krna chahiye both said together ..

Raman - done we will make them together again.

Ishita - hmm done


Raman - OK so can we meet tomorrow..

Ishita - for what?

Raman - arey for planning to make MiMi together again.


Ishita(in confusing tone) -ye MiMi kya hai?

Raman - arey jhalli its mihika & mihir Maine dono ka naam sath Jodh diya ajkl ka fashion h ..



Ishita - ohh


Raman - hmm so kl ki meeting fix


Ishita - OK evng mein sunshine restaurant..


Raman - done bye jhalli..

Ishita - bye Mr lrll..saying both disconnected the call..


PS: what do you thinks guys ?
Will ishra came closer by this Mimi mission 😉


That's all for now frnds I hope u all liked it so hit like button do comments also..

Thank you & Love u all..
Harshita
Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Updated next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update...Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update...
Appa was talking with Mihir about his studies and carrier...
IshMi came there with south indian dishes..
Raman made faces seeing it...
Ishita cleverly made him eat the same..
Amma asked Mihir about his family..
Amma agreed for marriage after hearing about family...
Mihir and Ishita felt her behavior weird...
Amma cleared Appa and IshMi's misunderstanding... ..
Mihir told Raman about Amma's behavior...
Raman answered him sensibly for the first time..
Mihir and Mihika fought with each other over this issue...
IshRa were trying to bring them back together...
Plz update soon...
Thank u...
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Posted: 7 years ago
So ishra on MiMi mission.. nice Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous updt di..
Loved the way when raman made faces seeing South Indian dishes..
Ishu tells appa he loves south indian food very much..appa ask mihir about studies and work..
Amma heard his family status and say yes for the marriage..
But mihir feels wierd towards her behavior.. amma clears the misunderstanding..
Mihir and mihika fought over the ammas weird behaviour..
Ishra are planning to unite Mimi..hope in this time Ishra will come close and wants to know each other..
Thanx for the pm
Plz updt soon

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