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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello buddies!

So here is the new story!

Hope you all like this story and support me as you supported my other stories.

Will be sending PMs to all those who like this post and are in my buddy list(if not yet, add me :-) OK!)

Zarir

A Urdu word with meaning:

A person of Intelligence

A person who is Easy to Love

Let the breeze pass through you to make you feel it.

Let the time pass with you to make you know it.

Let the love pass along you to make you understand it.

Let the life pass by you to make you hold it.

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Index

Sneak-Peak
Part 1
Part 2

Question Poll

Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8A
Part 8B
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12

Your opinions!
Part 13

Part 14 A
Part 14 B
Part 15

Thank you note

Epilogue - Jackpot

Thanks for reading.

See you!

Love you all!

- Maithili

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

Sneak-Peak

"How is she Doctor?"

"She is fine! Need rest and energy."

...

Holding the girl in his hands, he makes his way towards a room while his servant stands rooted to ground seeing a girl in his brother/chief's hands.

"Sheiku! Call our family doctor immediatly!"

...

"What's your name?"

"A...Anjali!"

"Hmmm" turning the page of the magazine he is reading "Where are you from? Where should I leave you?"

"I... An orphan!" and her hands started to tremble recalling those unlucky days.

...

Hearing the cry of the baby, she ran out of he kitchen and made her way towards the room.

With each approching step, the cry got louder and louder.

Opening the door, she stepped in to see a new lady in her late twenties, with a cute baby on her lap with a baby bottle in her right hand.

...

"Where is Ayan?" he ask her as he settles on the sofa.

"He stayed with Anjali ji, Chief."

"And what you are doing then?" he asked loosening his tie.

- Maithili

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Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting sneak peak

Waiting for next

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

Hi sis..

SP s Very different..

I m eagerly waiting for this story..

May I know one thing..is the story related to sukor or suraj with someone..Y i m asking means u r saying the name of the girl as anjali..😕

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nemo316

@nemo316

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Posted: 8 years ago

How intriguing!

Are the kids Suraj's?

What's the name of the second woman? Is she the nanny?

And more importantly, who IS Anjali?

Eagerly waiting for the first part!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting sneak peak
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear!

Happy that you find it interesting!

Hope the story is too!

See you soon!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Hi sis..
SP s Very different..
I m eagerly waiting for this story..
May I know one thing..is the story related to sukor or suraj with someone..Y i m asking means u r saying the name of the girl as anjali..😕

Hello dear!

Yeah dear! Tried a different way of presenting the story!

Will try to update on time!

Haha! I see that Anjali is getting the attention!

It's a Sukor story! That's all I can say!

Vote for the title dear!

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting sneak-peak Maithili...👍🏼

Hmm...a new girl???...lets see how it is going to shape up.🤓

And also a baby...I.guess you really like babies😛

The sp is so mysterious that I unable to make out anything.🤔

Tough to do the title selection,but still I will try😳

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh
How intriguing!
Are the kids Suraj's?
What's the name of the second woman? Is she the nanny?
And more importantly, who IS Anjali?

Eagerly waiting for the first part!

Thanks a lot dear!

Kids? I will not say anything now! ;-)

The second woman! May be you will like her here! No guarantee but just my feeling!

Anjali? Well I think I'm going to receive eggs and tomatoes(a wrong combination) when you will know her.

Have to wait dear!

Let's see!

By the way, can you vote for the title pls!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Eatifi
Interesting sneak-peak Maithili...👍🏼
Hmm...a new girl???...lets see how it is going to shape up.🤓

And also a baby...I.guess you really like babies😛

The sp is so mysterious that I unable to make out anything.🤔

Tough to do the title selection,but still I will try😳

Glad you find it interesting dear!

The new girl! Hmmm you will tell how she is after the second part!

I love babies! I mean in general! ;-)

And if you see I started my stories with lovers, then marriage and now babies!

I'm just growing with graph LOL

I think it's my luck that you didn't get anything out of it! LOL

Yup yaar!

I thought you would participate yesterday!

No pbm! Select one among the 2 proposed titles!

See you!