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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Amazing update!
Loved Chakor's playful talk with her parents.
It was heartbreaking reading her grief when she saw their bodies.

So many questions
Was it an accident?
Was Suraj the selected groom?
Who is the young man who approached her uncle at the end? is it the groom?

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thank you so much buddy!

Happy that you loved this Chakor's nature! Hope it returns soon!

I also felt bad for her!

Well all your questions will get answers in less than 3 parts!

See you soon!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
Lovely update

Very nice to see Chakor being so friendly with her parents

felt very very sick it proceeded asking her to come immediately...

The groom is it going to be Suraj??/

questions questions???

felt sad though

but i know you will reveal everything in your own way!!!

so waiting waiting

Thank you dear!

Glad you find this update lovely!

Well I like when children are friendly with their parents, so just wanted to portray that here.

It's not really easy to take things and that's what happened when she was called to come!

Hehehe Thanks for the confidence you have on me.

I will just try to put the things in order, in my way!

Hope you all like it!

See you soon!

Thank you once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#93

Hello buddies!

Here is the next part!
You will have replies to few of your questions and you can get even more questions than before after reading this.
So I let you choose comments or tomatoes at the end then! ;-)

Link to the previous part: Part 5

Happy reading!

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Part 6

***** HER PAST CONTINUES *****

"Dad!" getting Chakor's uncle's attention, the young man continued what he came to say "Police are here to enquire!"
"Hmm" turning towards his son "I'm coming!"
Nodding his head he left from there as the old man neared Chakor and went on his knees.
Putting his hand on her head "Dear! Please try to be strong."
She raised her sorrowful eyes with brimming tears "Maaa Paaa" are the words she repeated again and again as she cleared her eyes with tears of losing her parents.

*** Dad! Mom! Why did you leave your lovely daughter alone in this world? Why did you leave your Chakor? She needs you! You both! Why did you send me to study in aboard? I would have stayed here with you and now you both would have been with me! We three would have been as happy as always! Why did you leave me? ***

Her question filled thought and sorrow filled heart stopped her own pity as she spotted 2 police officers leave the place.
Brushing the unwanted thoughts as she thought to ask her uncle later, she got up and went towards her parents to learn that she can't even see their faces, as she fall on the floor, near her parents bodies as tears started their work.

~~~~~

"Chakor dear! At least drink this milk! You need to be strong now! You need to be able to get along with what is presenting in front of you!"
Wiping her tears, she lifted her head from the pillow over her lap.
This is where she is since her parents got buried.
Alone! In the dark space!

"Police!" she said as she gained her composure.
"Police?" her uncle questioned.
"This morning! I saw them!" she said slowly in her low voice.
"Oh!" turning and putting the glass on the side table, he again faced her "They came to confirm us that the car brake failed and that the lorry which entered the car is on a not existing person. They couldn't catch the driver but the found half empty alcohol bottle in his place."
Her tears started to flow as soon as she started to imagine the scene.

*** Why is this world so cruel?
My parents didn't do any wrong to anyone!
Do you really exist god? Do you? ***

"No dear! Be strong!" he said patting her "Everything will be fine!" taking the glass and passing it to her "Drink this and take rest!" he said as he got up and left.

~~~~~

That night, she fell asleep rewinding her beautiful past.
As the time strike around 1 and as the sleep got replaced by thirst, she stirred in her sleep and got up to take water.

Getting up from her bed as no water was there in the bottle by her side table, she excited her room.

"But Papa, what if"
"Nothing will happen!" hearing the voice covered with alcohol through the tinny window on the side of the room she passed, her steps halted with her ear going more attentively after hearing her parents name "If only Kasturi accepted to convince that Bhuvan to get her daughter married to you!"
"Papa! What was the need to do that? I could have talked to Cha"

*** What are they talking about?
What did uncle wanted to do with me?
Why me marrying Vivaan?
What did Mom and Dad say? ***

Her head exploded with questions as she felt a bit dizzy, so held the flower vase stand by her side.

"No Vivaan!" a small break "When she comes to India, they were planning to make her meet that guy! He will also be back from his America project at that time."

*** What am I doing listening to uncle's conversation?
Should I?
May be I can know my parents last wish and do what they wanted to do! ***

"What does he has that I didn't Dad?" Vivaan questioned.
A laugh echoed in the room "Now he has nothing! That"

***** PRESENT *****

With the loud cry of the small kid in the room, Chakor came out of her past as she hurried her steps towards Ayan.
Taking in her hands, she settled on the bed, with his milk bottle that she kept in the bottle heating machine and started to cocoon her while the man who was listening to her story went back to his past.

***** HIS PAST *****

"Yeah Dad! Meeting finished and deal completed!" he announced over the conference call.
"Good job my son! I sometimes feel like you are my elder son and not your brother Adi!" giving a look to his elder son Adi who is widely smiling at him as Suraj shook his head as a pleasant smile crossed his lips.
"Dad! I will be coming to India next week as I have to attend my friend, Jake's wedding here."
"One more week! We wanted to discuss to you about our new collaboration with CB Group of companies!"
And Adi coughed glancing at his father with a 'I know everything!' look.

"Dad! Bro is there naa! You can manage!"
"Okay son! Enjoy your one week! Then you have to be here on time as you have a surprise for you!"
"Haan bro! Lal"
"You come first! We will talk later!" his father cut his brother's word.

- What is going on there?
What does Lal uncle have to do with it?
He is real a good man. Met him only once as I was staying aboard and doing projects outside of India.
But that one meeting with him was so fruitful.
And what surprise Dad is talking about?
Anyways! There is one whole week to enjoy!
Then I can know! -

"Ok Dad! Okay bro! See you!"

~~~~~

"Yeah Maa! Packed bags and everything!"
"Okay my Sweety!"
"Maa! How many time need I to remind you that I'm grown up now and Sweety makes me feel like a girl." Suraj said making a face.
"Grown up but don't want to marry! Responsible but not ready to take responsibilities. Hard working but only when it comes to business! You are something my Sweety!" a lady voice.
"Oh no bhabi(sister-in-law)! You are my friend first then dil of that house!"
"Nope! I'm first this beautiful family's daughter and then your friend Tina!" she smiled.

"Okay son! We need to leave now! We are going to meet Bhuvan bhai(brother) and Kasturi behen(sister)!"
"Okay Maa! Carry on! I will be landing tomorrow by this time."
"Okay Sweety!" his mother.
"Okay dear brother-in-law! Come soon! A lot to talk and Ayan is also missing you!"
"By the way where is Ayan?" he questioned.
"He is sleeping and having fever, so Ragini is taking care of him. We will be back soon, so no worries!"
"You also going?" he question Tina.
"Ahaan woh hmm"
"Kasturi behen wanted to have a family dinner, so we are all going. If you were here, you would also join us!" his mother filled him with information.
"Shall we go?" he heard his father's voice.
"Ahaan we are coming!" his mother replied "Okay Sweety! Bye!"
"See you Maa!"
"See you!" his SIL.

- How I wish to be there now? -

He thought as he cut the call, picking his bag, he quit his flat to reach airport.

***** PRESENT *****

"He slept!" she said putting the young little boy in his place and at the same time bringing the man out of his old place, old thoughts even before he could come up to the saddest part of his life.

Clearing his throat "Who was the person you were going to marry?"
"I don't know!"
"Didn't you hear any name from them?"
"Hmmhmm" she shook her head.
"Then what did you hear?"
"That..that.." her hands giving massage to each other, her face sweating.
"That?"
"They killed them!" falling on the floor as tears broke the barriers "They killed all of them!" pulling her legs together, hiding her faces "They killed my parents!" in between her sobs "They killed his parents!" and her cries hid her words "They killed his family too!" making him alert on her words.
"When did it happen?" he asked.
She was in her own world of sorrows so he repeated his question until he got to know what he wanted.

The date when his life changed.
The date where all went out of reach.
The date which changed his world and words.

Her words changed his demur.
Her words changed his view.
Her words are changing his life.

*******

Thank you buddies for reading!
Let me have your COMMENTS and hit the LIKE if this part deserves it!
Thank you!
Well I will update the next part by the end of this week!
See you all soon!

Next part : Part 7

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#94

Interesting update👏

So Chakor's family & suraj's family were killed by chakor's uncle😡

They deserves the worst punishment😡😡

Sukor's family were so nice

Feeling sad for sukor😭😭

Chakor doesn't know about suraj being the choice of his parents

Waiting for the mystery to unfold

Waiting for next

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vidhi.universe

@vidhi.universe

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#95

Amazing update👏 with too much suspense , I m so early waiting for next update😳 how will chakor know about Suraj.😉

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#96

Maithu what a build up of suspense

Felt very very sad to know that two innocent families had been targeted and killed brutally!!

interesting

Hope Sukor realise their match soon

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Shar456

@Shar456

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#97

Awesome update

Sad for sukor as they lost their parents

N dat evil Uncle did the accident becoz he wanted his son to marry chakor

I hope chakor comes to know dat Suraj was d boy who her parents hv choosen for her

Waiting patiently for the next update

maithu love u a lot

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Golden.dust

@Golden.dust

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#98

Interesting update maithu 😃

So her uncle is behind chakor's parents death and I guess for suraj's family too😲

Hope sukor team up against that evil uncle and send him behind the bars

Waiting for the next update!

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#99

Amazing update!

So Suraj was the intended groom.

It's very sad that they both lost their loved ones in the same accident. Both were left lonely.

Will Suraj tell her that those were his family?

What will Suraj do now that he knows who's behind the murder of his family?

Was Chakor escaping her uncle's goons?

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
So Chakor's family & suraj's family were killed by chakor's uncle😡
They deserves the worst punishment😡😡
Sukor's family were so nice
Feeling sad for sukor😭😭
Chakor doesn't know about suraj being the choice of his parents
Waiting for the mystery to unfold
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!
Glad you found this part interesting!
I hope they get the worst punishment.

Poor dudes, lost their happy family!
Will try my best to come up with a good punishment!
See you soon!

Thank you once again!

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