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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: taahir004
Chapter 13

Awesome Chapter

Suraj have planned the arrest of Chakor's uncle and Vivan thats just great
they should get the toughest punishment
Chakor and Suraj's moments were just beautiful

Thanks a lot

Yup! He indeed planned everything before hand

Happy you liked their moment

Thank you

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: taahir004
Chapter 14 A

Fantastic Chapter

Oh Chakor and Suraj awkwardness mixed with a little romance made for a cute scene
Argh !!! Shieku did come at the wrong time
but I loved how Suraj had brought all her parents valuables to her that is respectful and yet so comforting too

Thank you so much

Happy you find their scene cute

Hahahaha wrong timing is something that comes along with romance LOL

Thank you so much for the beautiful words once again dear

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: taahir004
Superb Chapter

Chapter 14 B

Oh Ayan is so cute especially when Suraj talks to him
Girija and Chakor bond was actually lovely and both Chakor and Suraj romance
was beautiful it does seem they are now comfortable with each other
oh so the culprits has escaped will this cause any probles to Chakor and Suraj

Thank you Thank you

Thank you

Happy you enjoyed reading it and especially Girija and Chakor's bonding and Ayan's cuteness

Hope you like the remaining part too

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: taahir004
Extremely Fabulous Chapter

Thanks a ton buddy😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#295

Hello!

Well!

I didn't think about doing an epilogue for this one but as I started to write the epilogue of Orenda last week, my evil mind said : Why to write two stories when you mingle everything in one!

Then I asked myself how come a student-teacher story mingled with a business profile story?

And there I got the answer that even in Zarir, our hero was teaching and guiding his love, his wife and she in her turn will guide and teach others. So there I got the idea of making it one!

Hope you all like it!

Here is the link : Epilogue - Jackpot

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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