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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: sumsukor
thats so nice Maithu
but at the base I felt a bit heavy for both... may be both lost their dear ones...

though they are getting together soon for Ayan hope they soon realise their selves for each other..

loved the way Suraj has set his goal to give her all her parents had...

just loving Ayan and her bonding and also Sheiku (but please pardon after reading her KING nowadays I start laughing myself he he he)

Maithuuu you stopped and the Night falls honestly no GM but i want their life to blossom platonically please.

just loved it...

keep it up girl you amaze always me with your flow of stories yaar.

Thank you so much Sumi!

I can feel what you say dear! Because that was the what I felt writing the bedroom scene!

They will realise it soon dear! For sure!

Heee Shieku! Well he is getting more and more scene space I think, so giving him leave in HK for few parts LOL

For now there is no space for GM dear as this Sukor is completely not yet fully attached, and I don't like when things happen without full interest!

So all in time! ;-)

Glad you loved it dear!

Well the thing is luckily I'm on Zarir and HK only for now, it will be difficult when I take back TTW which I think to do soon!

Hope it will go well! :-)

Thank you once again dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#182

Hello buddies!

How are you all?
Hope you all like this part with few momentums in it!

Link to the previous part : Part 10

Happy reading!

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Part 11

"I will take care of Ayan tonight!" Her brother told her as they were in kitchen.
"Huh?" he turned to face him.
"I said I will take care of Ayan tonight!"
"But"
"No but and not! If you really take me as your brother, listen to me!"
Not getting what her brother is talking to her, she just nodded her head.

"All set!" she said as she set the table.
"I'm not feeling hungry! You too have dinner!" her brother said as he excused himself right at the moment when Suraj entered the scene.
"Where is he going?" he questioned as he took his seat.
"He is behaving strange since this evening!" she said as she served him.
"Strange?"
"Hmm!" serving herself "Telling me he will take care of Ayan, asking me to serve you, lying he is not hungry when he didn't have anything since the time he came back from temple." she said as she settled herself.

And he started to laugh hearing her tale.

*** Why is he laughing now? ***

"Yo...you di...didn't get!" he asked in between his laugh.

*** What didn't I get?
By the way he looks good when he laugh! ***

- She is really so cute with this not so understanding face. -

"He wanted us to have our own privacy!" he said after his laugh died.
Hearing his comment, her cheeks turned red.

*** What was the need to tell it now! I'm feeling strange being here now! ***

- I thought her being from foreign -

"I'm not feeling hungry!" trying to get up, collecting her plate.
"Hey! Is it because of what I said?"
"No! Not like that!"
"In that case! Finish what you have in your plate!"
"But"
"You have to!"
Putting the plate on the table, folding her hands over her chest "You can't order me beacuse I'm your wife. When I was working for you, it was okay but not now!" she said.
"In that case, the privacy is indeed needed between you and me!"
"Aren't you ashamed to"
"You have your dinner or let's use the privacy we have!"

*** Oh My God! Is he really serious? ***

"You can't talk to me like this?"
"Sooo To whom should I talk like this?"
"No one!"
"How"
"Can you please keep quiet?" she asked as she couldn't talk to him all these things.
"Dinne"
"If you keep quiet!"
He shrugged his shoulders in response and continued to have his dinner, glancing at her time to time.

*** Is it so easy for him to talk like this? ***

- What can she be thinking of me now? -

*** Where will I sleep then if he behaves as he talks? ***

"Lights will be on in our room! Come when you feel like!" he said breaking her out of her thoughtful sphere as he got up to place the plate in the kitchen.

*** Our room? ***

She gulped hearing him.
He laughed internally "See you soon!" and he left from there.

- She is so worked up! -

"You no need to knock the door now!" he said as he put the book he was reading on the side table, to see her changed to a simple saree.
"it has become an habit!"
"Change it then!"

*** He can't again order me! ***

"What if I enter the room when you w" and bit her lip to stop the flow of words that is happening due to her habitual self "Nothing!"
"I see!" he said amused of her act "By the way, do you read books?" he asked wanting to make her comfortable as she was fidgeting with her saree end.
"Hmmm"
"What kind of books?"
"What all seems to interesting!"
"Ahaan!" with a smile "I'm going to continue this book, if you want, you can choose one of your interesting kind of book there!" pointing to the shelves behind the door, making her breath in relief.

*** So! All good! ***

Getting a book of thriller, she checked the room to find a place to settle.
"You can have a place there!" he said pointing at the other end of bed.
"Hmm!"

With their books in hand, and having the awkwardness of sharing the room, they passed more than 1 hour in their respective books before he yawned.
"You sleep if you want!" she told him.
"It's not!"
"Hmmm Can I bring Ayan here?" she asked finally the question she wanted to ask since 1 hour.
"Sure!" he said feeling the awkwardness to reduce between them while she went to get Ayan after replying to 1000s of questions from Shieku.

And the night ended with the newly married couple sharing same bed with Ayan in-between.

And the most awaited day by Suraj came and the evening came even sooner than expected as everyone was busy in their works.
One by one the guests started to appear and as the time Suraj was waiting for came, he got on to the stage that was set outside, in the garden, took the mike and started his speech.

"Hello everyone! Thank you so much for making this event bright with your presence. This party was initially organized for my birthday and the fund event. Now it has one more celebration to add in the list." he turned to his left to find Chakor standing along with Shieku, holding the child "Let me call the special guest of the evening. Mrs. Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi!" making her gape at him and his guests to talk over the news.
Stilling his eyes on, he motioned Shieku to take the baby from her hand, making her to step on the tiles.

"Here she is!" he said as everyone clapped for the young couple "Sorry for not inviting you all! It all happened suddenly. Thank you for understanding!"
"Wait wait wait!" someone from the crowd came in front, as he got on the stage.
"Happy married life Champ!" he said as he pulled Suraj for a hug.
"Thanks uncle!"
"Happy married life dear!" he wished Chakor as she took his blessing, seeing him to be elder in age, may be around the age of her deceased father.
"He is Uncle Arjun Khanna"
"Family friend!" Mr. Khanna completed "As you didn't invite us for a grand wedding, we would like to witness a memorable moment to be happy. Do you all agree?" he asked turning towards the people as he heard YES to echo in the place "As it is YES from all of us. Why don't you both inaugurate the dance floor with your dance."

*** Dance! With him! In front of everyone! No! ***

"Uncle!" Suraj started as his wife was shaking her head at the old man in front of her "We"
"No excuses! You have to!" Uncle said and everyone clapped to make the couple accept it as Suraj extended his hand for his wife to put hers.

As Suraj took Chakor for the dance floor "Romantic song please!" the uncle said making Chakor's heart to beat faster in anticipation of the future.

*** Please someone help me! ***

"Sorry he said!" as they stood face to face with his right hand taking slowly its place, behind her back while his left hand held her right one "Please!" he said, making her to place her left hand on his shoulder.

As the music begin slowly, the two bodies started to move in sync.

At the same time, two men in their well suited coat entered the mansion and mingled in the party.

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Thank you for reading!
Let me know if there is any mistake in the flow or something as I didn't re-read it!
Leave your COMMENTS and LIKES
See you all soon!

Next part : Part 12

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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Golden.dust

@Golden.dust

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#183

Fantastic update maithu🤗

Loved how SR was teasing his lady😆

Guess the villains will enter in the next update😲

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Shar456

@Shar456

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#184

Thanks maithu for d long update

N today was an awesome update

Waiting eagerly for next update as those two men are come in d party

Want to see Suraj reaction , chakor reaction.

n those two men reaction to see sukor together n married

Story is becoming interesting more now.

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#185

Amazing update👏

Chakor was not to able to understand Shikhu's intentions😆

Loved the way Suraj teased Chakor😆

Sukor's room part was awkward for both😆

So the vilians entered😲

Waiting for next

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#186

Wow..it was a superb update sis..

Oh my poor chakor she s very innocent tat she doesn't understand wat shieku is saying..

But tis suraj na..his laugh melts everyone's heart..

Awkwardness btw them was so cute sis..

Atlast ayan made their nights beautiful..

This party dance was a nice idea for making them as a couple..lol

Is the two mystery mens r chakor's uncle and his son na sis..

Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Luv u..tc

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#187

Amazing update!

Shieku trynig to give the newly weds some privacy 😉.

Chakor is so innocent, loved their conversation at the dinning table, love Suraj in teasing mode.

Chakor's too shy to dance with Suraj, can't wait for their dance.

Did the villains come for Suraj or Chakor?

Eagerly waiting for next.

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#188

Maithu just loved it

I really felt happy that he took that decision to make her his! I respect him

Loved the innocence of Chakor yes she indeed needs that to be loved and devoured by SR.

ha ha ah loved the dude who is just living his moments with that humour and lightness and making her go red... thats indeed cute... let him break the ice slowly...

enjoying the sis-bro medley...

Ayan chweet heart aawwwh he must be happy between but sooner he should be beside their bed in the cradle😉

the dance hmmm waiting and why Maithu you too like the makers 😡 please allow me to enjoy their dance na why to bring those morons now itself... ok atleast let them be away from my adories eyes for sometime please...

oopss what am I doing analysing arey sorry dear

just love your story...

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Golden.dust
Fantastic update maithu🤗
Loved how SR was teasing his lady😆

Guess the villains will enter in the next update😲

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you liked the teasing part!

They entered but the impact will be in next part!

See you

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: Shar456
Thanks maithu for d long update
N today was an awesome update

Waiting eagerly for next update as those two men are come in d party

Want to see Suraj reaction , chakor reaction.

n those two men reaction to see sukor together n married

Story is becoming interesting more now.

Thank you for reading and liking dear!

Pleasure is all mine that you enjoy reading it!

Next update will be on time hopefully!

Let's see!

Well! You will get to see the interactions and actions soon!

Thank you once again!