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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: Golden.dust
UNRES😛

Its awesome maithu😃read the last two updates in one go!
This is how I expected sukor to develop feelings for each other,especially the eye lock was dreamy(14 A)
But vivaan and his dad escaped😲
Hope they get caught ASAP
Eagerly waiting for the next part😳

Just now saw the message

Glad you liked the way Sukor story went! And that eye lock made an impact

Hope they get caught soon dear!

Thank you once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#272

Hello buddies!

I know you all waited for a long time for this update!
And I'm really sorry and sorry for taking this much time!
To compensate it I have made it longer (4000 words approx).
Just to prepare you, please no expectations of seeing happiness, sadness or anything.
And Please no bad words if you want scold me!

Link to the previous part : Part 14 B

Happy reading!

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Part 15

"So what is the plan Dad?"
"Will let you know before we execute! For now we need to get a vehicle and get to our right hand Chagan's house! It will be the safest for us, for now."
"What if there wasn't this jail transfer? How would you have escaped?"
His father just smirked as they made their way towards their new place after stealing dresses.

Not telling anyone else about the turning of the events, the couple, their child and their loyal servant com brother got back to their mansion while Girija stayed there telling "This is place I have spent most of life until now. I will miss you dear" to Chakor "But I want to be here if it's okay with you all!" and with lot of hesitations, they all left her alone.

"Don't think a lot!" Suraj said as he got on bed with still side lamps on.
Facing him as she was having her eyes for ceilings previously "How can they escape with all the securities around?"
"It was during the transfer!" he said switching off the light "Don't think a lot!" adjusting their views in the dark.
"They have already killed ... What if they" silencing her with his finger.
"Nothing going to happen!" opening his arms for her "Come!"
And as a little kid, she scooped closer to him "Wish they exit from our life forever!"
"It will!" he said in an assuring tone before pressing his lips on her forehead to end their night.

"I think you will feel better to be with Ayan than at work!" he said to his wife as both were getting ready.
"Work will divert my mind."
"But you will be stressed for him!" he said point at the little one playing on their bed.
"Agree but then"
"Do as you wish!" he said as he buttoned his hand buttons "But you will be back home even before noon!"

Shrugging her shoulders, she got ready and left for work and he went on his way.

Checking her watch to find the time to be 11h37, she left the breath she was holding in her cabin as she was alone in there.

*** Did they found that Ayan is alone at home?
Should I have listened to him this morning?
Why am I feeling more frustrated than this morning?
Ouf I need to go! ***

Picking her bag, she left her office and her way to the mansion and by the time she reached there, it was almost 11h56.
Smiling at herself seeing her watch, she made up to kitchen to see that it was empty.

"Bhaiyaaa" getting from one room to other, she called for her brother and Ayan "Ayaaan! Shieku bhaiyaaa!" and the mansion was as calm as a dead body's breath.
And panic started to creep her as she climbed stairs to check the rooms there.
One by one, checking the room, she got stuck in their room as she saw a black box laying on their bed and a folded paper hidden under it, in a way we can see it from the room door itself.

Taking care of her steps, she approached it and picked the paper first with trembling hands.

*** Hope nothing happened to anyone! ***

Opening the letter, all the fear was replaced by anger than a smile adorned her lips and finally she ended shying away.

What is in the letter? That's what we are all asking I think! So here it is as she put it open on the bed and took place to re-read it again:
<< Boooh (Written in red)
Got scared Mrs. Rajvanshi! No need! It's your Mister who is writing for you!
I knew you would come home this soon, so prepared a small surprise for you!
To mention it clear, your first gift from me as you have gifted yourself for me as my first gift and I think this is nothing compared to what you gave: Trust!
You came to my life as a stranger when you were always destined to be mine.
And I happy that you are there for us (Me and Ayan).

For sure you found a black box!
Well open it (And she opened the box) and you will find a simple dress of my taste in your favorite color I hope! (Pulling out the dress, she smile widely and nodded her head) then you will find a simple jewel box that Ayan choose for his mom when we went to take air last week (and her mouth went OOO as she opened the little red box to find a pearl set.) and if you dig further, you will find a brown box (putting her dress and red box on bed, she pulled the brown box) There you will find a small piece of sandals that matches the dress.
Well, it's another story to get the size of your dress and sandal as a thief in our room but it was one experience that I will not forget. (She blushed once again)

I would like to see you in this dress, to see how this dress glows by your beauty.
Be ready by 5!
I love you! (*** Was he the one who wrote this? ***)
If you are thinking if I wrote this, well yes! It's me only and it's all because of you.
I'm waiting for my dear sweet wife in her house.
So get ready.
See you in few hours.

With love,
Yours! >>

Closing the letter, she put the brown box on the side.
"Ayan!" she said as her phone beeped.

Pulling out her phone from her bag, she saw a message from her husband and smiled.
"Have lunch! It's ready on the table.
Ayan and Shieku went to your house and by the time, you get there, they will be back here.
Around 1h30 a stylist and beautician will come.
And around 4h30 our car will be in front of our mansion, waiting for you.
See you!" smilingly she pressed the call icon but it went engaged.
Heaving a breath, she followed all the instructions.

On the other side of the city.
"You are going with Ram to Suraj's mansion and I'm going to ours!" the old man said to his son.
"You mean Chakor's!" Vivaan.
"Ours!" his father repeated with arrogance.
His son gulped and nodded.
"Be careful! When you get to see anyone of them, finish it off and call me!" the old man.
"Yes!"
Turning to the other man on the side "You better be a good one at this job Ram!"
"I am!" that man said.
"I think you can leave now!" the old man says checking his phone as he got the message saying "Suraj is out of office."

As his son was near the door "Get a vehicle on the way!" the old man added and his son disappeared.
"We are heading too! Get prepared!" he said to his other man by his side and right at the same time that man's phone rang.
"Oh! I'm coming! Take care!" he said and cut the call. Turning to his boss "My son had an accident Boss! I need to go!"
Nodding his head "Take a bus or something else. Give me the key!" the old man.
Hesitantly the man put his car key on the old man's open palm and left from there.

"It is so difficult to get a free taxi at this time!" Vivaan said as the 13th taxi passed by them with a passenger.
"I think we need to steal one!" the man along with him said as they walked on the side way "The door is open and no is there!" he said pointing at a car on the side, in front of a closed house, just 6-7 feet away from them.
As both went near the car, they grinned ear to ear seeing it having the key in the key hold.
Asking his worker to get on the driver seat, Vivaan climbed on the other side immediately before anyone could come.
"Quick!" he said as the engine roared and the car moved from there revealing a man from underneath.
"Ehh Ohh" the man in his mid-30 ran behind it but the car took speed "Stoppp" and seeing the car zoom out, the man sat on the road "Even this attempt of suicide dumped me!" he said putting his hand on his head as he remember cutting the break wire and doing all the necessary thing to reach his end with his car. But fate has again played its game for him and instead of him, two idiots will be reaching their end soon.

Suraj who reached Chakor's maternal house went inside to meet the lady there.
"Any help?" he asked as he saw Girija putting the plates on the table.
"I will do it son!" and with a smile on her face "Don't worry! I will not come and disturb you both outside! The man you have arranged will serve you on time!"
Passing his hand in his hair "It's me!" he said.
"Ohhh! That's why you wanted me too to be away!"
"It's not like that"
Smiling ear to ear "I'm so happy that you both are happy and Ayan too! Chakor is really lucky to get a husband who wants to get her mind diverted from stress!"
"I'm lucky to have her in our life. Mine and Ayan!" he said and both smiled.
"Carry on!" she said as she disappeared inside the kitchen to finish the last minutes preparation of Chakor's favorite dishes as asked by Suraj.

The car entered the premise as expected by the handsome man who was waiting for his wife, in his tuxedo, under the rising moon.
Opening the car for his wife, he extended his hand.
Flashing her teeth, putting her hand on his, she stepped out and followed his way, to the garden on the right side where lights were lit and a table was set.

*** I love him more and more with his this way of caring and conveying! ***

- Hope she likes the dinner. -

Nearing the table, Chakor's mouth went wide open as she saw the chat item she loves (Pani puri), turning to him with a shining eyes, she looked him as he was studying her moves "You liked?" he asked.
"I love!" she replied nodding her head as she sees him smiling ear to ear.
Pulling a chair for her, he made her sit and took the place of the server and did his work of enjoying and talking.
"Thank you so much!"
He just smiled in return as he sat on the chair next to her.
Pulling her chair next to his, she put her head on his shoulder as she took his left hand in hers and started to play with his fingers.
"Someone is learning to count I think!" he said in his thinking mode.
She in response just gave him a small punch with her elbow "Ouccchhh"he said rubbing that place.

"My Sherni(Lioness)" as he hugged her by putting his arm around her and her to himself "Hope my big boy grow up soon so that we could ask if he wants a sister or a brother!"
"Chiii!" she said and hid her face in his protective arms with her forehead pressed on his chest.
"What Chi! Cha! Chu!" getting his one hand free, he held her cheek and lifted her face to lock their eyes "Are you scared that if we will ignore Ayan once" and she closed his mouth with her palm and shook her head as his hand fell on her lap from her cheek.
Removing her hand from his mouth, he let her words to come out with flow "He will be always our first kid!" as she held his cheeks with both her hands "He needs to know who we are really when he grows so that he will feel to be at home with his parents."
"And his sibling!" he added as she shied, he just held once again her cheek and moved his head forward and kissed her forehead, making her close her eyes in bliss.

Removing his lips from her forehead, he went a little right and them down and kissed her closed eye and then moved to left and added a small peek on the other eye too. And slowly he moved towards her nose and kissed the tip as her hand found his neck while his went behind her back and nuke. With each kiss their heart created the rhythm of the universe.
Fanning her lips with his breath, his eyes fixed on her lips and eyes time to time, he slowly closed in and closed in and closed in and their lips touched sending current in his body as he closed his eyes and shiver in hers as she trembled in his arms.
The small touch soon turned to a full-fledged French kiss as both soon got involved in it.

CREEEK TUKKK

Both came out of their universe hearing the sound of something falling on the other side of the garden as their breath was not even thanks to their little moment which got broken.
"I will go and check!" he said as he got up adjusting his coat.
"Hmm" she said with a smile bending her head.
Bending himself he peeked her forehead making her blush more before he left the table setting.
He didn't even move few steps from there, a black cat with green eyes meowed and made them believe that it's the cat.

- It was a cat! -

So he turned and asked "Dinner?" as they just had the starter.
"Later!" she said.
"Okay!" he made back his way to his chair "Shall we continue what we were doing?" he asked with a smirk making her mouth go in 'O'
"You shameless!" she said as she hit him lightly on his shoulder and got and turned to go while he sat.
Getting her hand in his, he stopped her.
"Leave me!" still not facing him, pulling her hand to be free.
"Where to go?" holding stronger than before.
"Far away from you!" she said after thinking for few seconds.
In just a blink, she was on his lap, his index finger on her lips and his hand around her waist "Never repeat those words again! I can't once again lose my"
And she closed his mouth and shook her head and something pulled their thoughts together as they hugged each other tightly.

- You will be there for me forever! -

*** Forever! I will be there! ***

Inside the mansion, Girija who was alone in the hall felt like heavy food is not in her menu card for tonight.
So went to kitchen to make a simple vegetable soup.
She stopped in her track of cutting the needed vegetable as she heard some sounds coming from the back of the mansion.
With still the knife in her hand, she made up to the back door to see it unlocked and wide open.
Not getting how this happened, she closed the door and right at the moment she was going to lock it, she saw a shadow of a man on her left and shock took her breath as she came face to face with him.
The moment she was going to open her mouth, he closed her mouth with one hand and planted the sharp knife he was holding in his hand, on her chest, in a fraction of second, making her go down on the floor.
With her hands over that spot. In the pain that was shooting her, her mind however got alerted and did the deed she has never dreamt of.

"You can't harm my kids!" was the last word she said to him as he was going to move but got pulled down and the crime that he did returned to him in the form of his death in front of his eyes.

Outside the mansion.
"Dinner time!" he said as he was playing with her hair and she with his shirt buttons.
"I'm not feeling hungry!" she said.
"Me too but we need to" he said making her face him "get our energy you see!" and ended with a wink just to get a small punch by her.
"Okay time to serve!" he said making her sit on her chair and got up.
"I will help you!" she said as she got up along with him.

"Server will do his work" showing himself and "The guest will be enjoying!" he showed her in SRK style and turned to go.
"Guest will help her server with all the works!" she said and follows him.
"Everything?" he questioned stopping.
"Hmmm" she said.
"Okay okay!" he said smirking at her.
"Youuu" she pushed him "I hate you!"
"I love you too my dear wife!" he said laughing.
And both entered the mansion to find it calm and composed.
"I will go and check on Mausi if she had her dinner!" Chakor said.
"I think she is in the kitchen!" he said pointing at the kitchen as the lights were still on.
And she with a happy smile approached the kitchen to find the stove to be on and water boiling at high temperature and veggies half cut and no one in her sight.
"She is not there!" she said getting out "Mausi! Mausi!" putting her hand on her head "Girija! Where are you?"
And no reply was heard.
And the happy atmosphere slowly turned dark.
"Come with me!" he said as he took her hand in his as his thoughts started to run.

- Could something happened to her? Hope they are not here! -

Pulling out his phone, both started to see one place from another until the neared the back door.

"Ahhh" Chakor screamed pointing her finger at a direction and she fainted.
Keep his demor cool, seeing the situation, he took her in his arms and made her settle in the sofa before splashing water on her face and waking her up.
"Hello police station!" he said over his phone seeing his shocked wife having her eyes fixed on her Mausi lying lifelessly in the blood pool and alongside her, the man she hated the most was also in the same state but with a cut on his neck and several injuries on his chest and body.

Two days have passed since, police case was registered.
Suraj was informed of the deathly accident on the road and that the men in the car died in the spot itself.
That night, immediately after cleaning up the place, the couple left for their mansion in full quietness.
Once reached, Suraj took Chakor to their room and helped her to freshen up after checking on Ayan and Shieku.
It was once again the sleepless nights for both of them but this time, they had the support of each other. Morning came but nothing changed, he tried to get her out of shock but all he could was to be by her side and talk to her while his servant, her brother took care of the kid.
Finally after one day of that event, Chakor started to have food and just 2-3 words got exchanged but nothing more or less.
Like this 2 days have passed and no change happened in their life except the fact that Ayan started to say few more words and Suraj had asked his hard working personals to take care of the company.

"You can go Shieku!" Suraj said as he got up from the sofa in the hall.
"But"
"Your mother is in critical situation and I can take care of them." he said motioning at Chakor was on the other side of the sofa with Ayan playing on her laps but she still in a daze "Go and take care of her! Your brother needs you. I got through his voice. Everything will be fine." Suraj ended.
Not knowing what to say, the man just folded his hands, thanking his chief before getting to his room to get his things to go back to his brother's place where his mother is admitted in hospital. As he was going to quit the mansion, the man of the mansion stopped him and gave him some money by force to use it in time of need.
"I will be back soon!" Shieku said as he kissed Ayan and patted Chakor's head and nodded at Suraj before going away from there.

As the trio settled on the bed after dinner, with a film running on TV, Ayan moved from Suraj to Chakor and sat on her lap.
"MaaaMaaa Youuu" he said as he pinched her cheek in the same way people pinches his cheeks when he goes out "Waatterrr" and his father got him water as he sat close to Chakor while serving water to the little one.
"Chakor!"
"Hmmm" with her eyes fixed on the film but her concentrations were nowhere.
"Chakor!" he said taking her chin and making her face him "We can't stay in past!"
"Past is here!" she simply said without any expression.
"We need to move on!" with his hands on both of her cheeks which got pulled by Ayan as he put his hands on his mother's cheeks repeating his father's action making Suraj smile at the little one before facing Chakor once again "Move on for Ayan! He needs his mother!"
And she saw the little kid looking at her with admiration and she just hugged him tightly surprising the kid as finally the tears of loss made their appearance. He who finally saw her react hugged her along with Ayan who just copied his parents action as he threw his hands around his mother's neck and father's head making Suraj smile and Chakor chuckle with tears flowing down her cheeks.

Breaking the hug, Suraj pushed away her tears "No more tears of sadness!"
And Ayan just repeated "Noo" with a gap "Taarrs" he said as he wiped the water on his face making Chakor to kiss his cheek making him giggle and his parents to smile.
"Always smile like this!" he said to his wife.
"Hmm" she hummed and nodded.
Hearing a song playing on TV, Ayan turned on her lap and concentrated on the Man there who was saying few words along with his music on screen.
Suraj with his eyes for his wife said "I missed you!"
"I love you!" she answered as she put her head on his shoulder as the music got louder on screen with Ayan laying happily on his mother's lap when the film ended with the beautiful lines of magic.
<< Let the breeze pass through you to make you feel it.
Let the time pass with you to make you know it.
Let the love pass along you to make you understand it.
Let the life pass by you to make you hold it. >>

And in the end, the title flashed with a powerful voice saying it, attracting Ayan as he repeated it in his own way as sleep over took him "Zaavvviiirrr"

THE END !

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Thank you so much for reading!
Finally this story has ended!
Hope it wasn't all of a sudden and you could enjoy the progress of the story.
Let me know all your thoughts and question and whatever you have to tell me in the COMMENT section!
If in any moment of the time you smiled reading a things then LIKE button is there!
Please buddies no asking for Epilogue or Season 2 as I feel this is the apt ending for this trio.
Finally time to move on to Roman Candles, Under the Sun and ...
See you all on Monday with next part of HK!
Thank you once again.

- Maithili

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#273

Amazing yr...all are very talented here...👏

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Shar456

@Shar456

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#274

Hello maithu ,its was an amazing story n I will miss this story a lot but maithu I don't mind for season 2 as the concept was excellent nl👏👏

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#275

Beautiful ending, no words for it🤗

Will miss this story

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#276

Beautiful ending sis..

Suraj care for chakor was awesome..

Ayan was so cute..u now sis my cousin son name s also ayan..when i see him it remembers me tis ayan..

Girija was such a amazing lady who gave her life for her children..

I just loved tis story alot like ur every stories sis..

Going to miss tis story very much..

Eagerly waiting 4 RC and ur further stories sis..

Luv u..tc

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#277

Maithu

first my thanks as my smile never weaned all through your story.

True what a soul is Girija true to the fact many a times our loyal workers turn our unknown bodyguards ... she is indeed the guardian angel of sukoran (well I added ayan to sukor 😉)

lovely Maithu felt so contended that they had the gruesome death.

Was the ending rushed??? no not at all as it was very very subtle, slow, lovely and steady and they have to be left in their privacy (Well I don't mind when you write about the making of the sibling when Ayan ask for 😆😆) but I would be missing Ayan's LOBBUUU, TAAARRS... awwh cho chweet ...

Hope he asks about it early (sumi na can never be satisfied with any amount of your stories.)

thanks Buddy

keep going girl