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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update. 👏
Ayan is not suraj's child, how is he connected to him😲
Anjali is not orphan, she is hiding something😲
So many questions still
Ayan is getting attached to anjali
What was there in the paper
Waiting for next

Thank you so much!

Well as said in his thoughts, Ayan is his brother's son!

I think too that she is hiding something!

Well if I give replies to all the questions in one part, the rest will not be interesting and my evil will not be satisfied LOL

The files contained cotations and details about companies, and Suraj was studying it and Anjali continued it. Let's see in the next part what happens!

Thank you once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Wow..it was superb sis..
Some suspenses r revealed tat the child s suraj's brother child and ragini s a worker..
Ayan calls anjali as maa and suraj as paa so is there any hidden motive sis..lol
Is chakor really had any hidden motive after knowing abt rajvanshi?
Is rajvanshi did anything to anjali's family?
Hope some answers i ll get in next update..sis
Overall i loved tis part a lot..
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Thank you so much dear!

Well the hidden motive behind calling Maa & Paa will be revealed at the same time when Chakor comes in screen!

Well! For now no Chakor, so what has Anjali in her mind is not yet clear, let's wait and read ;-)

I hope I can give useful infos in next update dear!

Glad you loved this part!

Thank you once again!

See you soon with the next part!

Louve you dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Great update!
Love the bond between Anjali and Ayan.

It seems Suraj feels guilty because he caused the accident that killed Ayan's parents. Did Ayan's parents live with Suraj?

So it seems Rajvanshi group took over Anjali's father company, was everything legal or were there dirty tricks? Who was in charge then? Was it Suraj?

Are Anjali's parents still alive?

So many questions.

I think Anjali has experience in business and Suraj will find this out.

Anjali has brought stability to Suraj's life, and it has shown in his work too, he's facing fewer problems and things are starting to run smoothly. Soon she'll be indispensable for Suraj and Ayan.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks a lot buddy!

Glad you loved the bond of ChAya(if there are any Malayalis, sorry it's not Tea Hehehe)

Well for your question about Ayan parents, it will be out only when Chakor comes dear!

And I can't confirm if Rajvanshi group took over Anajali's father's company or not!

All your questions stated here will have Answers along with the name Chakor!

;-)

Like your line about Suraj's stability and Ajali's presence in the life of SurYan

Will try my level best to be on time to update next ;-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Hey buddies!

How are you all?
Here is the next part of Zarir!
Well, last part was 2000+ as I took a lot of time to writ but now I'm back to normal schedules, so normal parts! 1200+ words
Hope you all like it!

Link to previous part: Part 3

Happy reading!

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Part 4

*** How can I forget that? ***

- Who could it be? -

He checked what all was written on those papers with his scanning eyes while his mind relays on who can it be.

- Ragini wasn't here to do it!
Shie No No He is not even capable to say one line in English.
Then? -

*** What will he say? ***

"Mooaooa" Ayan playing with her making one person to see the kid with other one turning on his heels, fixing his eyes on her while the last one stood there not getting what is happening "Paaa"

Without turning his gaze "Shieku! Take care of Ayan! You!" his eyes catching hers as she faced him "In study room!"

With all the papers, he left to his room.

"What happened?"
"Sorry Bhaiya!" she said silently as she gave Ayan to him with pounding hearts as her future is blur for now.

*** I should have told him truth!
No! In that case he would have asked to work in his company and I might get caught.
But now also you are in problem!
But this less than what could happen if I get back in those insane people's hands.
So truth?
Kind of! ***

"Come in!" he said as he heard her knock on the door.

Shooting his eyes in her direction, he turned his chair towards her.

"Listening!" he said trying to be calm.

- I let you stay here with the small trust you gained by showing love on Ayan! But now? -

*** How can I say the truth? ***

"You are not here to steal anything! In that case you had plenty of time to do it! Why are you here? Who are you?" he questioned as he didn't get anything from her on her own.
"I... I got scared that you would ask me to work in your company!"
"So you lied?"
Bending her head "Hmm" that's all she could say.
"Why so?"
"Kid...Kidnappers!"

- Is she still scared of them or finding a reason to justify her lie? -

"What are your qualifications?"

- She must have really had a good knowledge in business! -

"I did a course in business analytics and Father helped for training!"

- Father! -

"Where?"
"Mumbai" with still her head bent as tears started to form remembering her father.
"Are you telling the truth or are all these a lie too?"

- She can't be send by opponent as in that case she would have joined office to gather information or blackmailed with Ayan. So why those lies? Is she saying truth? -

Blinking her eyes, putting all her emotions at bay, she lifted her head to face him with a strong demur "Sorry for lying to you before. Whatever I said now are truth. I didn't lie to gain sympathy but to be in a safe place as I feel I'm still in danger if I go out of this street." in her low tone.
"How can I trust you now with Ayan?"
"Same trust you had on me before Chief!"
"Giving you a second chance here! Hope you won't deceive me!" seeing her nod "You can go!"
"Thank you!" and she left from there.

- Second chance is what life has given me!
Given me to breath!
Given me to take care of Ayan!
Given me to see life in a new angle!
Let's see how she uses her second chance. -

*** I didn't lie!
I did special course of Business Analytics! And it's my Father who helped me to train myself in our London Company!
I didn't lie! And I'm not guilt!
I said the truth!
And truth only even if it's half of what happened. ***

"Shieku! Bring Ayan to my room in 5 mins!" through interphone as he got up to go to his room.

Days started to pass as he got involved in his business and she in mingling with Ayan and the other one in taking care of the mansion.

"Ayannn!" he called as he made the little boy sit on his lap "Papa is going to miss you a lot these 2 days! Be a good boy!"
"Heee"
Smiling at his replies "I will be back soon!"
Pulling his tee "Baaa"
"After that, we will got out together! Okay?"
"Oookkhh" leaving Suraj to have a small laugh at this cute boy's antics as both laid on the bed to reach their own dreams.

"Take care of Ayan!" he said as kissed Ayan's cheek before making him go to Anjali's hand.
"Hmm" she hummed as Ayan smiled his toothy smile at her.
"Keep me informing!" he directed towards Shieku before leaving for his business trip.

Time moved in jet speed making 2 days feel like 2 minutes as everyone were engaged in their own business.

"Luckily I had a spare key, else I would have woke everyone at this time!" as he checked his watch to find it to be 1 AM.

Opening the door, he entered his calm mansion.
As he approached the steps to get to his room silently, something falling in Anjali's room alerted him as it was accompanied with a cry.
Getting back down, he approached her room and opened it to question her as the sound of the crying got stronger.
Opening the door, he saw Ayan sleeping peacefully in his cradle while Anjali was on her place, agitated with closed eyes, turning and moving with her hands pushing thing nonexistent something on the air as her muffles got replaced by words.

"Dad! Mom! Why did you leave your lovely daughter alone in this cruel world?" long breath "Why did you leave your Chakor? She is suffering! She needs you! You both! Why did you send me to study in aboard? I would have stayed here with you and now you both would have been with me!" her hands untying something which is not existing "We would have done business together Dad after my MBA! And Mom I would have learnt cooking with you directly instead of sending a cook along with me to London!" she turned briskly in her sleep "And we three would have been as happy as always! Fate is cruel!" her legs started to move "Fate is insane! Ehheuuu" she sat uprightly on the bed suddenly leaving Suraj in shock, opening her eyes wide in the dark room.

*** When will I forget those unlucky days? When will I get peace? ***

Putting her unlucky thoughts at bay, feeling dry, she checked the water bottle by her side table to be empty.
Taking the bottle in her hand, pushing away the tears in her eyes, she got down of the bed, adjusting her eyes, switching on the light, she turned and stopped in her track.

- She is not Anjali! She is not! She lied! Again! -

*** He? What is he doing here? Did he heard ***

"Chakor?" Suraj.

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Thanks for reading buddies!
How was it?
So finally our heroine is here!
I mean her name is here, so what next? Her past? Link between Rajvanshi and her family? Or ...

If you enjoyed reading it, hit the LIKE & COMMENT your views!

As you all can see, we have got the answer of whom she can be! I mean Anjali!
So the result of the poll is out and the winners are :

Katheriene
Sania_suraj
taahir004
pershial
sumsukor

And I will say everyone is a winner here as all of you wanted the girl to be Chakor!
So all is good! ;-)

See you all with next part: Part 5

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Hi sis..

Awesome update..

Suraj gave her a 2nd chance bt she failed in tat too..

Something horrible happened to chakor..poor chakor she lost her parents..

Is suraj forgive her for lying to him?

Yahoo..i won😊 coz my inner feelings insists tat tis anjali s our chakor..

Nowadays missing ur story very much sis..

Y r u not updating regularly sis..

Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Love u..tc

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Interesting update👏

So anjali is chakor

What happened to chakor's parents😲

Suraj gave her second chance, but she failed😊

Waiting for next

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Interesting update!

So Anjali is Chakor.

Suraj found out her truth, I hope no misunderstanding will happen between them.

Poor Chakor, she suffered at the hand of her kidnappers? I wonder who they are and why did they hold her captive?

Are her parents dead?

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Shar456

@Shar456

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Hi maithu,its an interesting story n dis part was quite interesting unable to wait till 27th nov mon

Maithu please try to update by Tom please unable to wait for 4 days 😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Hi sis..
Awesome update..
Suraj gave her a 2nd chance bt she failed in tat too..
Something horrible happened to chakor..poor chakor she lost her parents..
Is suraj forgive her for lying to him?
Yahoo..i won😊 coz my inner feelings insists tat tis anjali s our chakor..
Nowadays missing ur story very much sis..
Y r u not updating regularly sis..
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..
Love u..tc

Hey dear!

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you liked and enjoyed reading this part!

Hope it continues!

Yeah! Poor Anjali/Chakor she failed in his 2nd chance too!

Let's see what he is going to do now!

Hehehe dear! Yup you won and your inner voice won ;-)

I'm too missing writing!

That's why gave a small cyclone last week but then got busy at work!

Hope to get back to usual timings!

See you soon dear!

Take care!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
So anjali is chakor
What happened to chakor's parents😲
Suraj gave her second chance, but she failed😊
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you found this part interesting!

We will know the past of Chakor soon!

Well let's what Suraj does now with her!

Hope the best happens ;-)

Will try to be back soon dear!