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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Shar456
Ok maithu I understand ur concern.
Maithu wen u r putting the next update please make little long

Please

Thanks a lot dear for understanding!
I tried to write it longer dear but if I continue,it would be completed only on Friday!
That's why updating it today, even if it's of normal length!
See you!
Hope you understand!

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: taahir004
Fantastic Chapter

So Anjali is infact Chakor now that is simply awesome
obviously something had happened to her in past
Suraj giving her a 2nd chance was admiral of him but she failed again in his eyes
it seems like it will a very long time for him to truly forgive and give her another chance

Thanks a lot dear!
Happy that you enjoyed reading!
Her past is here in few minutes!
And hope he forgives her soon!
And I think it will depend on her past! ;-)
See you!
Thank you once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: taahir004
Sorry for always been so late
but I'm still be late in commenting until the 5th January
and thereafter I'll be back hopefully on IF

Oh dear! No need to be sorry!
Take your own time!
It's really my pleasure that you are taking tipme and reading my writings!
Thank you so much for letting me know!
Take care!
See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Hello!

Sorry for the late update!
As said earlier, I was a bit busy and I'm still but with the small effort I could, I wrote the next part.
Hope you all like!
You might be needing eggs and tomatoes in the end!
So be prepared ;-)

Link to the previous part: Part 4

Happy reading!

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Part 5

*** What am I going to do now? ***

Getting fully awake, she not only by her nightmare but also thanks to his presence.

- Can she be? No! I thought! -

His thoughts were all bit and pieces as her name rolled in his tongue making her freeze in her spot, conforming her of him knowing everything!

*** What all did I say?
Oh god! Please help me!
He will think I lied again while I didn't lied again but it's the half the lie I told in 1st place. ***

"Who are you?" he asked finding his voice.
"Huh?" her eyes searching something to hold on.
"I heard everything Miss. Chakor!"

And her head hung low as tears treated to get out.
"Answer me! Who are you?" he enquired
With tear brimming eyes, she choked her name "Chakor Bhuvan Lal"

- She is the one. I need to confirm it!
If she is then why was she running like a mad, in that state, no food?
Who could have kidnapped her? -

"I want to know everything! No more lies!" making himself strong, he demanded her.

"I was in London when my life changed without my knowledge." with tears sliding from her eyes, she turned her back to him as she neared the window as her past came in front of her.

***** HER PAST *****

"Ahaan Mommy! Everything is ready for my first day internship!"
"Oh my dear Kasturi! I'm here in London since 5 years and you are treating me as a small kid of 5 years!" Putting her free hand on her hips "And moreover, you and Mister Bhuvan has sent a body guard with me! So no tension please!" turned to her left as she heard footstep halting and lifting her head, her eyes met her body guard, her caretaker, her well-wisher, her Mausi(Aunt) that's what she call her. Standing there, smiling at this young girl calling their parents' names as if they are her kids and she is their mother.
"Don't worry my dear young Kasturi, I will call you with due respect as Mataji in front of your Son-in-law! Ohay?" marching towards her mausi "I will talk later! If you want to chit chat, talk with your dearie Girija! See you! Love you!" kissing on the phone, she handed the phone to her mausi, along with a peek on the cheek before running from there, taking her bag.

~~~~~

"Bhuvan! Tell your wife to behave! Else I will not talk with her!" folding her hands over her chest, facing her lappy as on the other side, a couple was sitting with man smiling widely at his daughter whereas his wife, turned to the side, making faces.
"You two are behaving like kids!"
"I'm not!" he hear from lappy and from his wife at the same time, making him laugh.
"Hate you Bhuvan!" Chakor
"Love you my dear!" her father
"Ask your wife to stop searching a way to send me out of home! Else I will cancel my next month flight ticket!"
"Ok Ok Cool down! I will talk with her. Last time we saw you was when you started working after finishing you internship! That too 7 months back! So you need to come here!" her father with affection visible in eyes and voice.
"He is a good match for her! Instead of supporting me, your wife, you are"
"I know what I'm doing!" Bhuvan cut in, assuring his wife.
"Mister Bhuvan! Do your romance out of this camera!" making her mother shy while his father was shaking his head "I'm going to sleep! See you!"
"See you!" both her parents
"And don't forget Mr. & Mrs. Lal that whoever that man is, if I see him step in our home in the name of marrying me, I will cut his throat there itself!" winking at her gaping parents, she cut the call to see an amused mausi there.

"You are still behaving like a teenager! Poor son-in-law!" Girija.
Getting out of her bed "Oh oh! Why are you all bent on to send me to that stranger's house?" hugging her.
"He is a good boy your parents told. And moreover he is your father's"
"Nope! No more words" closing her mausi's mouth "I don't want to hear anything about him!" removing her hand "I want to stay with you all for few more months and years and then let's see!"
"But dear"
"Please No!" closing her ears, she went back to her bed "Time to sleep!" pulling the quilt over her, she closed the outer world contact "Don't smile!" she said in a warning tone at her smiling mausi as she herself was smiling for an unknown reason.

~~~~~

"Hello!"
"How are you dear?"
"Uncle!" closing her work post, getting up "I'm good uncle! How are you? Why is your voice so low?"
Adjusting his voice "Nothing dear! It's just you need to come immediately to India. I have got our private jet ready! Your superior is aware of your need here, so all you need to do is"
"Uncle!" She cut in "What happened uncle?"
"Nothing dear!" taking a break "Your Girija mausi is needed to go to her son's place in Dubai. So she has already left after transferring your needed things to our jet."
"Oh" is all she could say.

*** Why didn't she even give me a call?
Might be really urgent.
Hope all is good with her! ***

"And! You need to get out of your work now, so that you can be here on time!"
"But uncle, Dad and Mom"
"You will see them here!"
"But"
BEEP BEEP BEEP

*** Why this sudden changing? I have 2 more weeks! Dad! ***

Entering her father's name on her phone and pressing the call button, all she got is phone switched off message and the same repeated on her mother's number.
Redialing her uncle's number, she got the call to be engaged before her network got low, point by point.

*** I need to go! May be something No NO Need to think positive and positive only. ***

~~~~~

"Where are Mom and Dad, uncle?" she asked restlessly for n-th time since she got out of her private jet.
"Please wait Chakor!" is all she got in reply since then.

As they approached her gigantesque mansion, her eyes scanned all around her to find lot of people with sadness visible in their eyes.

*** Something! God! Please say something! Say all is good! ***

As the car stopped, she hurriedly got out of the car and ran to the entrance of her home to see her happy family to be bundled in white sheets.
All her hopes got crushed as she slid holding the main door to the ground as her uncle saw her helplessly when a young man approached him.

*******

Thank you so much buddies!
Do you think you all need the prepared eggs and tomatoes to launch on me or not?
Let me know it through your COMMENTS and if you liked it, hit the LIKE button!
Sorry for the short update and making you all hang on there with her past.
It will finish in the next part soon.

Next part on: Part 6

Thank you!

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Interesting update👏

Loved the bonding of chakor with her parents & aunt😊

Chakor's parents are dead, what happened to them😲

You left on suspense

Waiting for next

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Shar456

@Shar456

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Awesome update n same time feeling sorry for chakor parents

I think d boy which her parents choose for chakor to get her married n who was going to come to see her is none other Suraj dats y wen chakor told her full name Suraj said is it she only

Thanks maithu story is getting interesting

Waiting for the next update as ap😆👏

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Amazing update!

Loved Chakor's playful talk with her parents.

It was heartbreaking reading her grief when she saw their bodies.

So many questions

Was it an accident?

Was Suraj the selected groom?

Who is the young man who approached her uncle at the end? is it the groom?

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Maithu

Lovely update

Very nice to see Chakor being so friendly with her parents

felt very very sick it proceeded asking her to come immediately...

The groom is it going to be Suraj??/

questions questions???

felt sad though

but i know you will reveal everything in your own way!!!

so waiting waiting

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Loved the bonding of chakor with her parents & aunt😊
Chakor's parents are dead, what happened to them😲
You left on suspense
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you loved the bonding of LAL family!

I know I know!

Well I will try my best to get back to you all with the next update soon!

Thank you once again!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Shar456
Awesome update n same time feeling sorry for chakor parents
I think d boy which her parents choose for chakor to get her married n who was going to come to see her is none other Suraj dats y wen chakor told her full name Suraj said is it she only

Thanks maithu story is getting interesting
Waiting for the next update as ap😆👏

Thank you for reading dear!

Me too feeling bad for Chakor!

Well your guess seems interesting! Let's see! ;-)

Aww it's my pleasure dear that you are liking it!

See you soon!