Bhoot Aaya S#3/Note/pg64/12 jan

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Bhoot aaya😆



maan why we come here
dekho na yaha puchte puchte raat ho gyi hai
aur sb kitna scary hai

Maan : geet it's just little far from road
nothing more

geet : maan aap na sch mein pagal ho gye ho

she want to stop him but entered in haveli already

Geet : maan why you take me inside
Maan : tum khud mere sath aayi ho
don't tell tum apni bak-bak mein itni kho gyi ho
tumhe hosh hi nhi rha
geet : you 
mein bak-bak krti hu

HAR AURAT KRTI HAI BAK BAK

Maan aapne abhi kya bola

maan : meri kaha mazal hai
mein kuch bolu tumhare aange

geet : itni der se kya aap ka bhoot bol rha hai

Maan : geet
Geet :  Maannn

CHUP KRO TUM DONO
PHLE ISNE MUJHE JEENE NHI DIYA
AB TUM DONO YAHA AA GYE

Geet : maan aapne suna
koi bola
Maan : kaun hai yaha

MEIN BHOOT HU
CHALE JAAYO YAHA SE
MUJHE SHANTI CHAIYE

maan held geet hand tightly and run outside and from front someone also coming and banged...


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Index

Series 1
Prologue - above post

Part 1 on page 3

part 2 on page 6

last part on page 8
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Series 2

part 1 on page 13

Part 2 on page 15

Part 3 on page 17

last part on page 19

Epilogue on page 24 & Imp Note
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Series 3

prologue on page 28
Character Sketch on page 31 & CS 2 on page 35

part 1 on page 31

part 2 on page 36

part 3 on page 42

Part 4 on page 47

part 5 on page 52

part 6 on page 58

part 7 on page 61

series 3 moved to Teri meri kahani 
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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is sort story of two-three parts , you can take as SS or OS

KHUSHBOO dear now happy 

but ek twist hai yaha 
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check following pages


i updated link of stories

for reading OS - see this two stories

Dastaan - e-Mohabbat - link

Tere Nishaan - Link

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For SS

Wo ek din - link (29 parts + Epilogue)

Wo Lamhe - Link  (17 parts + Epilogue)

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For FF 

you have all link from page 16 to 18 (already mentioned above )

ongoing list - link
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Thanks buddy 😃
Awesome start ...⭐️
Lol bhoot bola ki usko shanti chahiye hehe 😆😆😆
ye saamne se koun aaya 
cont soon buddy 😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely start...
Bhoot humari geet se chat karrahi hai
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lo ji ab bhoot bhi taunt marne lage 😆
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Congos for new story 😃
Hahaha ye kaisa bhoot hai looks very funny 😆
Continue soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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lol 🤣
nice one haha
rofl on the name