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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: hira2010
Read and comment n blog last part ka pm nahi mila

ya i get know

i check later

sorry dear 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: solaceMG
Pw plz

please comment previous parts dear

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: anu5
Nice update dear !!
Liked it!!
It was Maan's dream about the ghost . He imagined Manisha as ghost and Manisha's endurance and affection for him scared the hell out of him that poor Maan had to dreamt Manisha as ghost. Nice twist and ending dear .
Thanks for the pm !
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thanks dear

and most welcome

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06
awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...so Maan was dreaming all along...😎...He dreamed of Manisha coming close to him by entering in Geet's body and calling him hottie...😉...He was about to kiss him...🤣...hearing this Geet laughed like anything making Maan angry...😛😆...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...

ab bechare maan ka mjak bna diya geet ne

aur maan and kiss

show mein toh mauka mila nhi

socha yhi dedu

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priya_pmlist

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: custodian75
Thanks for posting in blog.
Who is after maan and Geet. Geet I s starting to behave weirdly. Maan knows something is wrong but not what.

now dear

check inbox

😉

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

thanks for liking OS of bhoot aaya series

and sorry for not posting ON IF(here)

because i get same like and comment like series 1😉

thank you very much my regular readers

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Password send to all who comment on previous parts

if any one left who comment

so please comment here

😃

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Small Epilogue

for fun, on demand of regular readers

next day , in office, maan doing work , someone enter in his cabin, he already so tensed from night and geet not leave any chance to irritate him... someone placed hand on his eyes...

btao mein kaun

with little changed voice

he try to stand, but someone pressed his shoulder with elbow...'

remove your hand nowww

uff hotie

maan mummer hotie

nooo

manisha take step back due to his sudden scream...

kya huya hottie

maan : you get out

Manisha : asa kyun hotie

tumne hi toh aaj bulaya tha mujhe

wo story sunani thi

hotie please sit and let me read the story for you.

manisha start explaining story , and he getting shock ... how he knows about that...

manisha : in last hotie we kissed each other

maan so lost , no idea when manisha come closer and kissed on his cheek...

mja aayenga na

maan pushed him and run out from cabin to geet cabin...

**********

geet you know what

my dream going true

geet : aapka mere alawa bhi koi khawab hai

bad idea

Maan : wo raat wala

geet : oh manisha

so is baar kiss huya kya

she laughed again to see his irritated and shocked expression...😆

maan : you tell him

geet : na

maine aapke baare me kuch nhi bataya

just give idea

and manisha itni khush ho gyi

apne hot - hot boss ke liye

Maan : you

i kill you

geet : maan bhoot aaya

she winked 😉

Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago

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Kawan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#159

poor maan.. geet ne toh maze le lio

bechara maan phas gya.

and Manisha. he is so funny..

loved it

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#160

thanks 4 an amusing story! great epilogue! Geet told Manisha! Manisha corners Maan! Poor Maan! Geet had fun at his expense! lovely end!

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