Bhoot Aaya S#3/Note/pg64/12 jan

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Congrats for new story..

Superb and funny update..

Waiting for next update..

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: preetymaaneet
too funny can't control my laugh
bhoot bhi kisa maan's dada-dadi
dadi opps bhoot dadi want to know all affairs of dadu
waah dadu ka chakar hai woh bhi chudail se
p2 ek baat bata yeh chudail ka concept SD ko dekh k aya kya tujhe

actually khushboo ki request thi

horror pe story likhu mein

horror toh smjh nhi aaya

toh socha comedy hi likh du

SD hi toh savu hai yaha

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

very nice

haa ha..

mazzaa aa gya

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preiti

@preetymaaneet

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: priya_21

actually khushboo ki request thi

horror pe story likhu mein
horror toh smjh nhi aaya

toh socha comedy hi likh du

SD hi toh savu hai yaha

laga hi tha

sanju ko dadi bana diya

congs sanju teri promotion ho gayi

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Awesome update

Waiting for next update. .

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Hahahaha ... Omg hillarious update .. Maans dada and dadi is too much ... Poor maan crying for geet ?? 😆dadaji ke affairs ke liye dadi ne geet ko leke chali gayi 🤣 lolzz ... I cant stop laughing .. Waiting for next update soon ... Cant wait for next .. Ab maan ke affairs bhi khol dijiye 😉 dadi tho villian ban gayi hain maaneet ke beech mein 😆

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

terrific banner! hilarious update! well written! Maan;s dada n dadi r dead! Poor Maaneet! dadi takes Geet away as she wants 2 know abt dadaji;s affairs! update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

maan ke dada dadi ke bitch dono fas gye..

they are ghost and still fighting .hehe

where did ghost dado took geet???

awesome update

loved it

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Cute update so maaneet married and maan couldn't think of better place than to get to a haunted mansion that has his dada dadi spirit dadi angry at dada for having affair with the bhoot next door maaneet trap if that wasn't enough dadi took away geet from maan and wouldn't let her go till she gets back at her bhotiya hubby poor maan crying for his geet while geet wanted to go to her maan