Bhoot Aaya S#3/Note/pg64/12 jan

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 1@

hahaha super funny one, liked it. Geet is being possessed by Maan's deceased grandmother while they were enjoying their lovey dovey time.

Maan : geet

Geet : Maannn

CHUP KRO TUM DONO
PHLE ISNE MUJHE JEENE NHI DIYA
AB TUM DONO YAHA AA GYE 🤣

Part 2@

Sad one. dadi ma showing Geet everything. Not expected from maan's parents.

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Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

congrats for new story

very funny as well as emotional too

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Congratulations on new story

Prologue is Captivating

Ghosts ...that awesome looking forward to this story

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hira2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Awesome story Yar
Maan dada dadi became bhot
Feeling bad for them

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IMA9167

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Sad part priya...
How can maan parents ignore them...
Poor dadi and dadu...

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Part 1

Daadi and Dadu in the haveli and now Daadi has taken Geet

while screams for his wife that he wants her back he loves her

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Part 2

Daadi explains Geet while Dadu explains Maan

and its just sad that Maan's parents were not there for their own parents

precap is interesting too

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Part 2 - nice update. well written! dadi speaks 2 Geet n dadu speaks 2 Maan! update soon

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Kawan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

they both just wanted to see their son before going from this world forever!!
and maybe after seeing maan they felt their son presence..
distance between them caused so many misunderstanding..

awesome update

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

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