Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Khamoshiya...gungunane lagi.




When Two Hearts Are
Meant To Be Together...

No Matter How Long It
Takes...

No Matter How Far
They Go...

No Matter How Tough
It Seems...

Love Will Bring Them
Together
To Share a Life
Forever..!!!

 

Destiny tied or not at the same time... after five years she goes to get happiness...

But this happiness is so sort ...but why ?????????????

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Geet is so happy today, she going to became his in every manner...today khurana house decorated like dulhan... because today maaneet going to marry again ...

But what happen Maan not come...

 


season 2 - -Khamoshiya...gungunane lagi... -  Thread 1

 
ek sham tere naam likhi thi
ek wada tune kiya tha
ek wade ke sahare hum chale the 
fir se ek baar khawabo ka mehal bsane
par na tune sunana chaha
aur na mein wo kh paayi
mangna tha tera sath pyaar se
maanga toh tera sath kuch is tarah se
jo na tujhe manjoor tha
na mujhe wo manjoor tha
ab toh khamosiya bhi rone lagi hai
uski awaaze bhi gunjane lagi hai
aye meri mohabbat
sun zara kya khti hai ye khamoshiya 

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ongoing 

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This stored based on geet original story... Am continuing this story after maan memory loss & he not except geet as his wife...

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what happen when his first love come and stand in front of him, can he able to except sameera entry back own life or he able to made new memories with geet forgetting sameera...





First phase(Kya pyaar karonge mujhse)

 threads link



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This is Second phase link

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ye kahani ek ase pyaar ki 

jisse uski manzil na milli

ek asa pyaar jo mila toh shi

par pura na ho ska

usne hath thama toh shi

par wo pakad na saka



khte hai pyaa mein hadde nhi hote
pyaar un sb hado se upar hota hai
kya ho
jb koi apna , kissi aapne ke liye
khud ko kho de
ek asa pyaar jo pura hoke bhi pura na ho saka


Geet ye tumhara kaisa pyaar hai,
Jo tumne khud ke liye maut,
Aur meri liye zindagi ki sja chuni, 

Maan apki zindagi, mere liye sabse anmol hai,
Geet jitni baar bi janam le,
Ydi usse apne maan ki zindagi aur khud ki zindagi mein se kissi ko chunna honga,
To wo apne maan ko hi chunegi.

Geet kyun kiya mujhse itna pyaar

Maan pyaar khud ke bas me thode hota hai,
Pyar kiya nhi jata, ho jata hai,
Is dil ne apko chaha,
Aur sb kuch apko sop diya

Geet maan ki zindagi tumhare bina adhuri hai, ab wo kaise jiyenga

Maan aap akele kaha ho,
Aapke sath mera pyaar hamesha rahenga

Dhoop ki phli kiran ki tarah,
Phoolo me bikhri khusboo ki tarah,
Saawan me barsi boondo ki tarah
Raat me aakash me chaye taaro ki tarah
Aur aapke dil me basi dadkano ki tarah

To fir apse dur kha huyi maan,
Mein to aapki perchai hu,
Aapse juda kaha hu maan

Geet tumne apni zindagi, mere sapne ki khatir kyun kurban kar di

Maan wo sapna apke akele ka kaha tha,
Wo hamara sapna hai,
Hamara pyaar,
Hamari jaan,
Hamare pyaar baare palo ki khushiyama tohfa

Daadi: maan bete khud ko sambaliye

Maan : daadimaa kaise khud ko smjhayu,
Geet ne asa kyun kiya,
Usne mujhe kyun nhi kaha,
Wo kyun nhi smjhi,
Uski zindagi, akele ki nahi,
Meri hai
Tu usne asa fasla kyun liya

Daadi: bete unhe kuch nhi honga

Maan : daadimaa use kuch nhi ho sakta
Uske bina maan kuch nhi h,
Geet tumhare bina maan kuch nhi h,
Kuch bi nhi hai
Mujhe nhi padna uska ye letter,
Geet ye tumhara
Kaisa ye pyaar hai

Geet apne maan ko kbhi sja nhi de sakti, Maan kash mein apko sb bta pati 

Andekhi anjani se ye mohabbat hai,
Chupke se milte dilo ki ye aahat hai,
Jis pyaar ke sab deewane,
Jo kho gya, wohi jaane,
Baatein kitabo ki,
Raatein hai khawabo ki,
Hr khwab ijhaar hai
Kaisa ye pyaar hai
Kaisa ye pyaar hai
Kaisa ye pyaar hai

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kyun na ab pura kiya jaaye is mohabbat ki adhuri dastaan ko 

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ek asi kahani jo adhuri rh gyi thi
ek asa prem jisse manzil mili par ek mod pe bichdne ke lie
fir lauta hai uska pyaar
roop whi naam alag

kya is baar ye kahani puri hongi






Ye kahani hai do pyaar krne walo ki jo puri hoke bhi adhuri rh gyi...


Phase 1st - this story is continuation of kaisa ye pyaar hai




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"PYAAR"-khne ko adhura sabd,
Pyaar ka phla akshar adhura hota hai,
Fir bi apne me kitna sampurn(pura) hota hai
Zindagi me aa jaye , to khushiyo se bar de,
Aur dur ho jaye to dard de jaye,

Isi tarah pyaar ki kashmaksh me fasse hai maan aur geet,
Jo chahake bi apne pyaar ko naam nhi de paye,
Aur jb diya
To halato ne un palo ko jine nhi diya,

Asi hi kahani hai maan aur geet ki,
Jinhe takdeer ne milaya,
Pyaar ki khubsurat dhor me banda
Pr fir,
Halato ne unhe ek dusre se juda kr diya,
Kya vishwaas ki dor itni kamjor thi,
Ki vo tufan ko sh na saki,
Jisne unki pyar ki neev ko bi hila diya,
Kya maan geet ki ankho mein apne liye pyaar ko bi na dekh saka,
Uske dard ko bi nhi smjh saka,
Kya koi sach,
Ya phir koi jhoot,
Jo halato ki wajah se kbhi kaha gya,
Jo ek sach sa bn gya

Ek rishte ko ase mod pe lake khada kr sakta hai,
Jha bs judai hai,
Ek dusre tk wapas puchne ka koi rasta na ho,
Kya taqdeer unhe fir se mila payengi,
Kya maan geet ke us sach ko samajh payenga,
Jis adhure sach ne unhe juda kr diya,
Kya wo pura sach jahir hone pe,
Unhe fir se mila payenga.
Aaj wo sath hai,
Pr wo judaai ka dard,
Un haseen bare palo ko kho dene ka dard,
Khi na kahi
Aaj bi zinda hai,
Un yaado me,
Jinme wo ek bi huye,
Khuda ne unke is rishte ko tohfe ye nwaja bi,
Pr taqdeer ne,
Ya kahe naseeb ne,
Us tohfe ko unse chin liya,
Kya wahi khushi,
Wo fir se apni zindagi me la payenge,
Is pyaar ko naam de payenge?
 

Edited by priya_21 - 6 years ago
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wo lamhe


this story simply based on arranged marriage...or said love marriage..this time its little confusing...you know soon why ?

khte hai jodiya upar se bnke aati hai

aur niche aake mil jaati hai

ye ek sanjog hi toh hai
.
.
.
par kya ye jaroori hai
ye sanjog aapko phli baar mein hi aapke shi life partner se mila de
.
aur kuch asa ho
.
.
partners exchange ho jaaye toh πŸ˜²

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Prologue

Adi : maan bhabhi ko kb tk room mein chipake rakhenga

maan : kya yaar tu bhi
teri bhabhi ready ho rhi hai

.
annie jaake apne bhabhi ko le aayo

.
she come out with annie ...
.
pinky : bhabhi gunghat toh utha lo

annie help her in taking out veil...

.
.
pinky : bhabhi you are so beautiful
.
annie : bhai
ye bhabhi nhi hai πŸ˜²

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jinse aapki shaadi huyi hai
.
maan : what you saying annie
.
annie : truth bhai
.
pata hai
.
.
taai ji
ne kissi ko bhi bhabhi ka chehra dekhne nhi diya
.
par maine asi hi koi jhoothi rashm ka khke
dekh liya tha😲

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Dastaan hai ye kissi ki pyaar ki
kissi ke intzaar ki
kissi ki yaado ki
kissi ki buli huyi yaado ki


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this story about One girl who fall in love with maan , but for him his carrier come fast ... this break up push geet in mid of those people where is love or lust both sided man she get in friendship.. saving own self she plan someone murder ...
now how maan save her



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Is Life A Dream ?

    Prologue 



The story about the girl, not only one girl, I think each girl have dream about dreamy life partner...

Zindagi ydi sapno jaise hoti

Toh kitni khubsurat hoti ...😊

Par sapne aur hakikat mein

Koi toh farq hota honga...

She always dreamt about caring, loving husband in own life... But in reality she get or not...

Sapno si Zindagi ...

Ek bura khwab bn jaaye toh...😲


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Chalu toh...toh koi yuhi ched deta hai...

Kyu pati se kuch kaho...

Toh Wo hath mrod deta hai

Kyun umeedo ke badle... tujhe  milti hai  bs nirasha

Kyun khushiyo se  bhara ghar ...lagta hai ek jhotti aasha

Khulke hassu... toh koi tok deta hai

Befikr jiyu... toh koi rok deta hai

Kyu tode h...kbhi sapne... kbhi dil ko

Koshish toh kare ye duniya  ...smjhne ki  ek aurat ko....

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thread 1


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Vivaah - Adhura Bandhan

Concept

rachi hai mehendi in hatho mein... uske naam ki

intzaar hai in aankho ko...uske dedaar ka...

bs kuch pal aur

ho jaayenga pura hmara ye adhura bandan vivaah ka...

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Bs kuch pal aur

Wo simti hongi meri in baahon mein

Intzaar ho jaayenga mera... pura...

Ho jaayenga pura hmara ye adhura bandhan vivah ka...

 


ek sunder khawab jo maine dekha tha

jb neend se jaagi toh bs rakh thi charo aur

jala bs mera sarir nhi us din

usne mere dil ko hi jala diya yu thukra kr 

thread 1

 thread 2

thread 3

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