My First story :Love by chance Part 10 pg 128 Oct 8 - Page 48

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjna55

Heyy..

As always amazing part Harshuu..

Love it ..
Love it ..
Love it ..
Sooo Muccchhh ..

Ishra full on Ravan Kumar N Jhansi Ki Rani Mode..
Haahaha..love their cute fight..
Mimi introduce them..
Hahahaha..JHALLI LADKI..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
MR.LONDON RETURN LATE LATEEF..like seriously..Soo thoughtful N Funny name..(Nice Name Harshu..U did make it funny by this name..)..๐Ÿ˜‰
Haww..Raman spills her KARNAME..Hahaha...
Ishu is no less..
She too make fun of him..

Lovely Update..

Enjoyed A lot..

Thanks for PM..

Update Soon..

TakeCare..


Thanku sanju..
I m glad u enjoyed the update..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: subhaa116

It's actually Extremely hillarious update...

Was laughing throughout the update...
These two act like cat and dog...
Waiting for further updates...


Thx dear..
I m glad u l enjoyed the update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: PremPBSB

Part 7

Superb update๐Ÿ˜†
Both ishra r fighting poor mimi they try to stop them. Ishra name cute. Mimi try to make them calm down but both of them not in the mood to giving up. Mimi force ishra to introduce each other. Both ishra get to know each other weakness...their fight is so cute...continue soon..thank u for pm & update


Thx dii
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

<font color="#660099" size="3">Wow that was such a Feisty part</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">I loved the fight between Ishita and Raman</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">yeah their are officially kindergarden kids๐Ÿ˜†</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">poor Mihir and Mihika have to be between Ishita and Raman and Raman is adamant that</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">Ishita is a Jalli and she is oh so angry with him just loved this update</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">sorry once again on been so late</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">hopefull from this month I'll be much more active</font>


Thx Bhaiya
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Posted: 7 years ago


Part -8


Raman - mere karname..

Ishita - hmm your father asks you about future plan BT what you answer him hilarious saying she starts laughing.. & Raman glared mihir & mihir looks on mihika & she held her ears..


Raman - that's not fair bhai ap hmari bateein ish jhalli ko batate ho..

Ishita - or ap akka ap mere batein ish LRLL ko..

MiMi said in Union - sorry guys BT hm tum dono ka mzak nhi udha rhe the wo to bs him ek dusre se share kiya tha ..plz forgive us saying both held their ears..

IshRa - okk saying they hugged their siblings..

Ishita - akka now can u order something bhut bhook lg rhi h..

Raman - yes bhai I m also very Hungry ..ish jhalli ki wajah se itna time waste ho gya..

Ishita - ohh hello ulta chor kotwal ko datein ek to khud LRLl ho or mujhe bol rhe ho ye SB tmhre der krne ki wajah se hua..

MiMi- guys plz ab suru mt ho..warna kuch order nhi hoga or na hm tumse baat krenge..saying both stand up to go BT ishra asked them to stay

After having their food.. They bid bye with each other..


Mihika - achha ab hm niklte h mihir amma wait kr rhi hinge..

Mihir - OK mihku saying he took her in side hug..then said bye ishita also..

Ishita - bye Jiju..

Raman - ok bye Bhabhi nyc to meet u ..

Mihika (smiles)- same here Raman saying they turned to go their destination when Raman called ishita..

Raman - excuse me Bhabhi ki bhna..BT ishita didn't listen so he again called her..

Raman - hey jhalli sun listening this she turned & glared him..

Ishita - hey u again called me with this name ..

Raman (smiles)- that's not my fault maine to tujhe bulaya tha phle achhe naam se pr tune suna nhi I think u also liked this name so Thk h I will only call u by this name only "jhalli" bye...saying he run from there while she curses him ...meanwhile mihika came

Mihika - ishu tu abhi tk yahi h hm baahr dhoond rhe the tujhe chl saying she took her with her & finally this sister & brother duo drove towards their destination..


In bhalla house
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Both brothers reached home ..toshi ji was sitting in living room waiting for the seeing them she called


Toshi - aa gye tum log kaha the mai itni der se tm dono ka wait kr rhi hu..chl hath muh dholo mai khana lagati hu..

Mihir - no maa we had our dinner ..with some friends ap kha lo saying he called neelu for water

Toshi - kon dost puttar..?

Raman (with naughty smile)- Teri hone wali bahu maa listening this mihir spilled water


Toshi - aaram naal pe puttar..

Mihir - I m good maa saying he glared Raman

Toshi - or tu kya bol rha tha Raman mere bahu de naal tm logon ne lunch kiya koi good news h kya ..

Mihir glared Raman for not telling anything..

Raman - arey nhi maa I m just kidding ap to serious ho gye..

Toshi - hatt khota na hoye te maa de naal mazak krta h saying she went from their..&mihir came & held Raman's ears ..

Mihir - salee marwayega kya ..kya bol rha tha ..maine mana kiya tha na phr bhi

Raman - ahh bhai leave my ears yrr its paining..

Mihir - okk pr promise me aage se aisa nhi hoga

Raman - okk bhai bs uske liye kuch rishwat chahiye

Mihir - wo kya h

Raman - 10,000 Rs.

Mihir - for what?

Raman - wo bhai my frnds asking for a party so ap dedo na pause qki wo mugambo to mujhe denge nhi..

Mihir - Raman wo hmare papa h unhe aise mt bola karo

Raman - papa wo sirf apke saarh h for me he is always mugambo "Jo aj tk mujhse khush nhi hua..

Mihir - Ramannn

Raman - bhaiii plz stop this or bolo dive na mujhse party ke liye paise..

Mihir - okk

Raman - thanks bhai you are the best mai abhi apne frnds ko phn krke SB fix krta hu saying he went from their leaving a smiling mihir..


In iyer house
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IshMi reached home where amma was waiting for them..

Amma - aa gyi tum dono kaha thi mai tm dono ka wait kr rhi thi.dekho kanna maine aaj tumhre favorite dishes Bnai h aao kanna saying she make both of them sit on dinning table & start serving them seeing lots of dishes & mostly amma's sugarly love when they are late both look at each other..

Amma - kya hua aise ek dusre ko kyu dekh rhe ho kanna khana kha na dekho mai SB kuch tmhri psnd ka bnaya h or agr kuch or khana h to bolo mai abhi btati hu..

IshMi - no amma its enough..

Amma - to khao na maine bhut pyar Se bnaya h arey mai payesam Lana to bhool gyi ruko abhi lati hu saying she went inside kitchen

Ishita - akka plz pinch me kahi ye SB ek dream to nhi our amma was pouring so much love on us wo bhi when we are late daatne ki jagah wo hme pamper kr rhi h..

Mihika - right ishu mujhe bhi kuch samjh nhi aa rha meanwhile appa came & settled on dinning table

Ishita - thank god appa aap aa gye plz tell us what's the reason behind amma's sweet behavior..

Mihika - ha appa jldi bolo

Appa (smiles)- arey ye to achhi baat h na to is me tension kaise..

ishita - tension nhi appa ye toofan se phle ki shanti h..jrur amma koi bomb blast krne wali h..she was saying when amma came with payesam

Amma - arey vishwa tm nhi aa gye chlo achha h ab SB saath mein khate h or haa mujhe tmlogo se kuch baat share krni h listening her trio saw each other

IshMiPa- kya baat?

Amma - good news ye h ki mihku ke liye ek rishta aaya h..listening this IshMi saw each other

Appa - achha ye to achhi baat h kon h wo log

Amma - wo Mr reddy ka beta..

Appa - arey suna h maine uske bare mein achha ladka h mihku tm to jante ho use Thk h na are u agree for this marriage proposal..

Amma - usse kya puchna hm parents bachho ke liye achha hi sochenge.

Appa - wo to h BT phr bhi mai apni betiyon ki marzi ke Bina unki shadi nhi krunga bolo mihku tum kya chahti ho.

Mihika was totally silent while ishita was saying her - akka isse achha mauka nhi milega bta do appa ko jiju or apke baare mein.. BT mihika was scared of amma ..seeing no other way ishita said - appa akka loves someone listening this her parents was totally shocked.. while mihika saw her shockingly..



That's all for now.. I hope u all liked it so hit like button do comments also.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Updated next part
have a look
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update
ishita told amma and appa that mihika loves someone
waiting for their reaction
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
lovely update
loved ishras banter both are crazy
raman said toshiji about her bahu later shrugged it saying he is just joking
amma brought rishta for mihika but ishu told sbout mihikas love for someone
lets see what will be iyers reaction
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yrr u didn't pm me.. ๐Ÿ˜•
Edited by harshiita - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update harshii..
Loved ishra so much..
They are cutie..
Ishita told amma & appa about MiMi's relationship..
Waiting for their reaction..
Continue soon

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