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Posted: 8 years ago
Here is next update

Part -5


Mihika closed her eyes & start counting 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,&.. She couldn't not complete when they hears thuddd...loud noise of breaking a jar...(ishita is a very nice &responsible girl BT she has a old habit of breaking things & sometimes she fell automatically)

Mihika - jar no. 50 saying she was going to kitchen meanwhile ishita came

Ishita pass the pickle in a bowl &says - ye lijiye appa apnka pickle then she looks amma ..

Ishita - amma wo maine nhi thoda apne aao gir gya mai to pickle nikal ke bs jar upar rakh rhi thi or wo khud hi niche aa gya I think that jar don't want to stay in upper shelf ..tbhi..

Amma - ohh that's mean that jar told you ki ishu Hume upar wale shelf mein nhi rehna haina saying she glared

Appa - leave it madhu bachhi h he was saying BT amma glared him & he says - ishu tm koi bachhi nhi ho Jo aise cheese girati ho BT now Sit & have ur dinner.. Haina madhu

Amma - don't make me fool vishwa ki tm ishe daant rhe ho I know very well ..

Mihika - ohho now plz stop talking everyone or have ur food see SB tanda ho rha h..

All starts having their dinner when mihika said - waise ishu I must say aj tune apni half century puri kr di saying she starts laughing..

Ishita glared her - u r so bad akka u r making fun of me..here amma is very angry on me and u also starts.. Then mihika he'll her ears mouthing sorry..


**Bhalla house**


Bhalla's are sitting in leaving room after having their dinner.. Then Mr.bhalla asks - waise Raman ab aage tune kya socha h..tere future ke bare mein..

Raman - of course mugam.. I mean papa..

Mr.bhalla - what are you saying??

Raman - kuch to nhi ..

Mr.bhalla - no I heard like muga...he was saying when mihir starts coughing

Mr.bhalla gave him water - kya hua mihir are u fine puttar mihir nodded says - yes papa I m absolutely fine wo achank khasi aa gyi saying he looked Raman..

Raman understand that he save her from dad so he close his eyes & mouths thanku..
Mr bhalla - ha to bolo Raman tumne kya socha..


Raman - kya kis bare mein
Mihir - arey Raman about ur future plan ..

Raman - ohh ha papa I want to see whole Delhi,meet with my old frnd ..

Mr bhalla - oh ye h tmhre future plan mujhe to kuch or LGA..
Raman - arey papa wo to mai bhai ke baad hi krunga na..
Mr bhalla - kya h wo he asks with serious face..

Raman - shaadi papa or kya wahi to puchh rhe h na ap koi mere future plan..

Mr bhalla - whattt saying loudly.. Tmhre lye yahi future h ..
Raman - to ap kya puchh rhe the he asks meekly.. BT Mr bhalla without answering him went from their.. Then he turn to mihir & mihir starts laughing loudly make Raman more irritate

Raman - what bhai yahan mugambo mujhe daant ke chle gye and u r laughing on me u r so mean yrr saying he make angry pout and sat on couch

Mihir - or kya kru papa tujhse kya puchh rhe the or tu kya bol rha tha..saying he aging start laughing

Raman - kya glt bola mai unhone hi to future plan puchha..

Mihir hit his head with his hand - arey pgl he want to know what's ur plan about future means in carrier not personal or tune kya bola papa wo to mai bhai ke baad krunga naa mtlb shaadi saying he again starts laughing
Raman - I will not leave you saying he runs behind him ..

**Iyer house**

Ishita is doing her project when mihika came inside room with two cup coffee she passed one cup to ishita - le ishu mihika's best coffee I know tujhse achhi to nhi hogi BT peene layak h BT ishu without saying anything she took coffee mug and start sipping coffee without talking her..

Mihika sat besides her - what happens ishu abhi tk gussa h u know naa I m just kidding yrr not else BT she turned her face..after more insisting finally ishita accept her sorry..

Ishita - akka mujhe apse kuch baat krni h ..

Mihika - ha bol ishu kya baat krni..

Ishita - akka apne kya socha..
Mihika - kis bare mein ishu


.Ishita - offo akka about ur & mihir jiju relation..
Mihika - usme sochna kya h we love each other very much..

Ishita - that I know akka BT I want to say that when you both told about ur relationship to ur families..
Mihika - sahi time aane pe bta denge..

Ishita - or wo sahi waqt KB aayega akka..
Mihika - you know naa ishu amma Kaise h ..

Ishita - that's what I m trying to say akka u know naa amma wo aaye din koi na koi rishta lati rhti h abhi to hm appa se bol ke manager krwa dete h BT KB tk akka ..I think this is best time to tell ur families about ur relationship..

Mihika - okk ishu I will talk with mihir.. Saying she hug her meanwhile mihika's phn rings flashes mihir name

Ishita pics her phn & says - hello jiju..
Mihir smiles - hello saali saheba kaisi h ap..

Ishita - I m so so angry with ur mihiku..saying she glared mihika & mihika also glared her & trying to snatch phn BT ishu didn't gave her..

Mihir - oh aisa kya kiya usme tell me I will scolds her..
Ishita narrates jar fiasco..- tell me jiju kya mai jaan booz ke krti hu ye to bs ho jata h u know naa..

Mihir - no I know tm jaanbooz ke nhi krti aisa..kahan h mihika give her phn I will scolds her ..
Ishita show tongue to mihika & gave her phn and run from their..

Mihika - ha bolo buddhu.
Mihir - kya mihku tm bechari ishu ko kyun tang krti h..

Mihika - that's so bad mihir u always take her side..saying she make angry pout..
Mihir - mihku don't make pout yrr I will not control me..

Mihika - tmhe Kaise pta..

Mihir - mujhe SB pta h like this they talk some more times then hung the call..then mihir turn he saw Raman is standing there folding his hand on his chest and smiling looking to mihir

Mihir (st)- omg kahi Raman be sun to nhi kiya no no when he asks - arey Raman what are you doing here ? Koi kaam tha

Raman - wah mere chuperustam bhai I will never thinks that my bhola bhai also have a girl friend.. Or papa ke samne ideal son wait abhi mai papa & maa ko btata hu ki mere brother ne apni dulhaniya dhoondh li h saying he was Going BT mihir held his hand & close his mouth...

Mihir - sshhh Raman ek baar meri puri baat sun le plz..
Raman nodded when mihir says - yrr abhi hme thoda time chahiye phr hm khud apni families ko bta denge.. Tb tk plzz don't say anything to maa papa

Raman - okk BT at least Bhabhi ka naam to btao or I want to meet her..

Mihir - her name is mihika iyer..
Raman - iyer means madrashi omg bhai u loved a madrasan not bad bhai shaadi ke baad u eat that dosa idli saying he starts laughing..

Mihir - to kya hua I love her and plz don't make fun of my mihku smjha..

Raman - okk baba sorry BT KB milwauge mere Madrasan Bhabhi sorry mtlb Bhabhi..

Mihir - OK I will talk with her than inform you bt rememember one thing that don't use this madrasan word in front of her..okk
Raman nodded..


That's all for now many of you want long update I hope I'm complete ur wish frnds ..

Precap - IshRa meeting 😛 so for early update hit like button & do comments also..

Thank you
Edited by harshiidiv - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous Chapter

I always enjoy Mihir and Raman scenes
Appa defending his daughters was lovely
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome chappy
Waiting for their first meeting
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy

Waiting for their first meeting
Update soon


Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update.
Loved ishmi bond.
And Hitler Amma and mogambo papaji awesome.
Waiting for next update.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely one...
Waiting for ishra meeting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dii
Raman is so cute
His convo with Mr Bhalla was omg.. 🤣
Mihir teasing Raman
IshMi part was nice
Waiting for IshRa meet
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update...
Ishita broke the jar..
She has a habit to drop things..
Mihika teased her..
Ishita was angry on her..
Raman is cute...
His future plans..😆
Liked Raman and Mihir's bonding..
Ishita and Mihika patched up...
Ishita complained to Mihir about Mihika...
Raman got to know about Mihika and wanted to meet her..
Plz update soon..
Thank u...
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update
so ishita broke jar again and completed half century loved the way appa was defending ishita from ammas scolding mihika was teasing ishita she got angry mihika said sorry rama is too funny mr.bhalla asked him what is his future plans raman said he will marry after mihir mr.bhalla scolded raman mihir and raman scene was funny ishita and mihika talk was nice ishita and mihir talk was cute raman got to know mihir have girlfriend
waiting for ishra meeting
pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous update dear...eagerly waiting for next...

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