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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice Teaser
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely teaser
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
teasing teaser
waiting for update and expecting ishra meeting
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting teaser!!
Raman patla nahi par fit hai!!!!

Please continue soon!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: manuishra

Congrats for your first story


Thx manu..
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Originally posted by: harshiita

Thanku so much harshii for this update.. 😛
Superb update dear..
So mihir is not biological son of Mr. & Mrs .bhalla..
Flashback is very nice..
Finally tmne Raman ki entry de hi di thanks for that 😳
BT yrr wahi pe stop kr diya..
BT plzz next update asap..
Thx for pm..


U r most welcome dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Here is the next update..

Part -4


Mihir and Raman was still hugging each other when mihir asks - waise Raman wo ladkiyan kon thi jinki bahon mein bahey daalke aa rha tha tu..

Raman - achha wo wo to meri co passenger thi & u know naa Rkb ka charm hi kuch aisa ki ladkiyon mujhse dur nhi reh skti ..

Mihir - achha beta mujhe na bta ki kaise tu ladkiyon ke piche bhagta h ..

Raman - hold on bhai mai ladkiyon ke piche nhi wo mere piche aati h.
They are still taking when toshi ji came between them & says - arey kya baatein kr rhe ho tm dono jara mujhe bhi mere bachhe ko dekhne do saying she cupped Raman's face and kissed on his temple and start crying when Raman hugs her tight and says - arey meri maa ab to mai aa gya ab q ro rhi ho stop crying saying he wiped her tears.. Then he asks looking at Mr .bhalla - waise mugambo aj Kaise khush hogya Jo mujhe lene aa gye..toshi ji held her ear and says - khote koi aise bolta h apne papa ke bare mein..

Raman - ohho maa sorry plz mera kaam chhod or waise bhi wo mere sath aisa hi to h..meanwhile Mr.bhalla said - agr ap logo ka milna ho gya ho to chle ki poora din yahi rukna h saying he went to parking..

Raman - dekha ye nhi ki itne salon baad beta aaya h to halchal le BT nhi unhe to..

Mihir - achha now enough for talking let's go..all nodded and settled in car drove towards home..
They reached home & toshi ji ran to home for welcome Raman ..he about to enter in home when toshi ji stops him & came with aarti thall she put Tika on her forehead do aarti & welcome him..
He entered and saw whole house decorated beautiful with flowers & lights seeing all this he asks - wow maa kitna beautiful decoration h koi function h kya ..

Mihir - ye Sab tere aane ki khushi mein hai..or ye to kuch nhi maa be aj bhut sare dishes bnai h mujhe to wait nhi ho rha ..
Raman - wow mujhe bhi maa ke hath ke khane ki bhut yaad aati thi mai bs abhi aaya freshnup hoke saying he went to his room...

Toshi - ap dono bhi muh haath dho lo mai abhi khana table pe lgati hu..
After sometime all settled on dinning table & having their dinner..

Toshi ji is feeding Raman while he is making face and says - bs maa ab or nhi khaya jayega..

Toshi - arey mera puttar thoda sa or kha le dekh kitna patla hoke aaya h..
Raman - nhi maa i m fit or main patla nhi bilkul fit hu or AGR ishi tarah khaya rahunga to mihir bhai ki trah mera bhi pait nikal aayega saying he laughed ..when mihir make angry pout & says -see maa ye mujhe mota bol rha h kya mai fat hu maa..

Toshi hugs her - naa mera puttar tu mera handsome munda h saying she scolds Raman - khabardar Raman Jo tune mere puttar nu chidhaya..

Raman nodded silently when mihir wink him & show him tongue looking this Raman says - dekho maa ab bhai mujhe chidha rhe h..toshi ji glared both of them & says - now no badmashi have ur dinner silently while Mr. Bhalla smiles seeing them..

**Iyer house**

Amma was arranging dinner on dinning table when appa came and asks - arey madhu kya bnaya h bhut achhi khusboo aa rhi h ..

Amma smiles &says - aj Maine tmhra fav medhu vadha bnaya h with coconut chutney..

Appa - lao jldi do ab mujhse wait nhi ho rha..or ha meri dono dolls kahan h ..

Amma - aati hogi waise bhi dono se mujhe ye umeed to h nhi ki meri kuch help kre..
Appa - arey aisa kyu bolti ho madhu meri betiyon se kaho to WO tmhri help jrur krengi..

Amma - ha ha AGR aisa hota naa to dono dinner prepare krne mein meri help krti..ek h jisse subah jldi utha rhi jata or ek to..she was saying when both sister came wearing their night suits and settled on dinning table ..

Mihika - hmmm wow amma kya bnaya h bhut achhi smell aa rhi h..
Ishita - right akka smells very rumbanalla amma jldi serve kro wait nhi ho rha...then amma serves them..all start having their dinner when appa says- madhu jara wo pichle hafte Jo mere frnd me pickle bheja tha jara thoda lao amma was going BT ishita says - u sit amma mai le aati hu BT trio said together - nooo ishu then look at each other..

Mihika - u sit ishu mai lati hu..
Amma/Appa - ha kanna tm baithi ye le aayegi..BT ishita without listening anyone went to take jar..

When amma glared appa & says - tm pehle nhi bol skti the mai laa ke rakh deti..
While mihika closed her eyes & ears and Start counting - 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2&...


That's all for update... For early update hit like button & do comments also..frnds if u don't like this story then told me I will not continue.. Bcoz I got very bad response..plz tell me..

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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update
mihir and raman scene was cute and funny toshji and raman scene was lovely appa was defending his daughters what is secret behind pickles
waiting to read further eagerly
pls update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear...eagerly waiting for next..& thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice one . Wat is there in that pickle box..Y s mihika counting numbers.. Update soon

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