My First story :Love by chance Part 10 pg 128 Oct 8

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sririt

@sririt

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Posted: 8 years ago

#191

@Teaser 19/7

Nice teaser

Mihir saw every help running here and there

And before he could know the reason Mr Bhalla called him.

PS: Sorry for being late, out of city. I login whenever I get time, so couldn't make it on time.

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pari21v

@pari21v

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Posted: 8 years ago

#192

Too short update

But superb

Read all parts together

New concept interesting story excited

Update soon

Thanks 4 pm

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Akriti154

@akriti154

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Posted: 8 years ago

#193

Lovely update harshita
so mihir is nt bhallas son bt they love him like their own
finally hero's here
continue soon
thnxxx 4 pm

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Harshita Srivastava

@harshiidiv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Teaser

Amma was arranging dinner on dinning table when appa came and asks - arey madhu kya bnaya h bhut achhi khusboo aa rhi h ..

Amma smiles &says - aj Maine tmhra fav medhu vadha bnaya h with coconut chutney..

Appa - lao jldi do ab mujhse wait nhi ho rha..or ha meri dono dolls kahan h ..

Amma - aati hogi waise bhi dono se mujhe ye umeed to h nhi ki meri kuch help kre..
Appa - arey aisa kyu bolti ho madhu meri betiyon se kaho to WO tmhri help jrur krengi..

Amma - ha ha AGR aisa hota naa to dono dinner prepare krne mein meri help krti..ek h jisse subah jldi utha rhi jata or ek to..

***In bhalla house***

Toshi ji is feeding Raman while he is making face and says - bs maa ab or nhi khaya jayega..

Toshi - arey mera puttar thoda sa or kha le dekh kitna patla home aaya h..
Raman - nhi maa i m fit or main patla nhi bilkul fit hu or AGR ishi tarah khaya rahunga to mihir bhai ki trah mera bhi pait nikal aayega saying he laughed ..

That's all for teaser..for early update hit like button & do comments also...

**Thank you**

Edited by harshiidiv - 8 years ago