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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Hi sis..
Its an amazing part..
Their phone convo was superb..
Its a sukorlicious part..
Omg chakor was damn bold girl..i think her bold talks on mobile makes suraj sweat..
I never thought suraj will lose control..bt with this girl nothing he can do..
Bed romance s very hot..
Eagerly waiting for ur surprise sis..

Hey dear!

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you liked the phone covo and find it sukorlicious! ;-)

Luckily I don't have to write this Chakor's thought LOL! But I know when we will get a hand on her over MIB session, a lot of things going to happen!

One you get to know what is going to happen, let see if you like the surprise or hate the shock! LOL

See you dear!

Louve you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update👏
Loved sukor's phone conversation😊
Chakor is so bold, suraj must be so embrassed by her talks😉
Sukor's bed romance was hot😉
Waiting for next

Thanks buddy!

Happy that you loved their moments and found their moment hot!

As I said in Wattpad, I wanted it to be a simple romantic moment but this Chakor just pushed Suraj to an other level! LOL

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: arena99
Amazing update😊
Loved sukor scenes
Only two more chapters😭

Thanks a lot dear!

Yup yaar! Just 2 more chaps!

With a lovely ending!😉

That will be the beginning of another story LOL!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Superb!
Loved their phone conversation and their romance.
Suraj teased her on the phone! it's the first time Chakor isn't in control.
Vivaan is really an ideal brother, giving them some alone time but not too long. Loved how he was protective of her when she was crying.
Only two parts left ! That's too soon.
Can't wait for the next update!

Thank you dear!

Happy that the phone convo and hot romance is loved! ;-)

You remarked it right, he is getting out of his shell and I'm happy for him!

I think of shifting Vivaan to some other country so he doesn't come in between Sukor! What say? LOL

I know that 2 parts is soo soon for this story, but you all will know why in the next part!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Rinka_Ritz
Sorry dear i am so much busy in work these days so i am late here.. I loved sukor scenes.. But only two more parts... I wish you will come up with something new... Tc

Hey! No need to say sorry yaar!

It's just a story and it's my pleasure that you are reading it and liking it!

I know how it's to keep work and be here in same time! So no sorry next time! ;-)

Glad you loved their scenes.

Yup! There are few more ideas, once I finish WWW and XRH, I will take a small break before continuing with the stories!

Hope they will also be interesting!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: taahir004
Amazing and Beautiful Chapter

Suraj and Chakor's phone conversation was awesome
the little time they both spend together in his apartment was magical
now Suraj at her place having dinner with her family
waiting to see if Chakor's father approve Suraj

Thank you so much!

I think the phone convo made quite a good impact LOL

Happy that you find their moments magical! ;-)

I think it will not be a big deal for their parents as his father is addressing him as Son!

I'm too eagerly waiting to write the next part! :-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Aslesha99
That was amazing loved it!

Thank you!

Glad you loved it!

Hope it continues!😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#198

Hello buddies!

How are you all?
I know most of you all wanted the story to be long but in this part you will get to know the reason why this SS will end in one more chapter!
Thanks a lot for your support!

Link to previous part: Part 12

Happy reading!

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Part 13

Chakor took his hand under the table and squeezed it a little as she is being nervous of what he is going to answer and needed a support and that too only from him.
"As you know Sir, I'm doing PhD in Mathematics. I want to continue my teaching profession and do research. If it's on the future with your daughter then I will say I want to wait until she finishes her studies and become what she wanted to become."
Her parents smiled while she muttered:
"Now I want to become your wife and nothing else."
Her brother heard her and laughed and everyone looked at him questioningly.
"What? I have rights to laugh if I remember a joke."
"With a bad timing." she added.

"Sweety!" her mother called.
"Hmmm"
"Do you want to show him your room? He has never been here." her mother said as they were settled now in the hall.
Vivaan coughed loudly while his sister got up and stomped her brother's feet making it feel like accidental and showed all her teeth saying:
"Did it hurt Bro?" as affectionately as possible raising her brows as her parents are behind her now.
"Noo!" he said pressing his feet.
"Would you like to come?" with a wink, she asked her lover who was beside her brother, seeing calmly all this brother-sister drama.
"Hmm Yeah!" taking his time.

They made their way to her room and she pulled him inside and locked the door.

"Your parents are downstairs Chakor."
"Sorry I didn't see them." she said sarcastically.
"You and your brother are behaving like kids."
"Don't worry" putting her hands around his neck and putting her face over his chest "I will behave maturely from the second we will have Chakra" facing him still stuck to his body.
Seeing his questioning look, she added as he put his hands around her form "Our small little boy in future."
"If it's a girl?"
"Sucha!" pulling his collar "Do you like the name? I have even decided a name for our younger son. Rachak."
"Are they enough?"
"I think it will be ok! 2 boys to guide their sister."
"I want only one child." rolling her hair in his finger.
"What?"

"I never dreamt of family but with you I want to. I came to know that I can't see you in tears.
I don't want to hurt you. Everything related to babies hurts a lot and if possible I would says we are enough for each other."
"There will be no pleasure without pain."
"You need to stop reading those books."
"If I stop reading how will we make love."
"It's not needed for it. You need to read school related books and not those."
"If you show me you know that and If you teach me that along with Maths. I will not touch any kind of romantic books."
"You are just trying to play with your words Chakor." he said playfully.
"What to do? I need to take the 1st step to make you take the next." peeking his lips.
"I don't want to take any steps for now with my student." he peeked her lips.
"I want to stay like this forever."
"We will." peeking one last time, he separated himself from her and said "Come let's go."

"Wait!" she said and hugged him as tightly as possible.
Freeing him, she held his hand and went downstairs to see all of them watching TV.
"Thanks for the dinner Mr & Mrs Lal. I will take your leave now."
"Call us Mom & Dad Son. You will be no different than my little girl and young man." her father.
Suraj smiled and left from there accompanied by his love until his bike where she kissed him on lips before he left from there.

The next week wasn't any different than the week before with just a factor that changed.
Which is that her parents are seeing him as their son and everything goes well.
Like this the school year arrives to an end and the exams for the final year of school ended.

Even before the results, Chakor parents were invited to school by the principal.
As her father was busy in a case and her mother in correcting copies, Vivaan made to her school on time to be informed that his sister has got a scholarship for Oxford and she needs to leave in less than 2 weeks.

Chakor was taken aback by the piece of information she got while her brother was so happy for his sister.
After questioning, she got to know that her Maths teacher was the one sending candidature of few students and only she got selected with her academic results.
She excused herself asking time to think and went to his flat after informing her brother about her moves.

"Chakor! You! Here!" closing the door.
"Why? You thought I would be packing my bags for London?" pushing him on couch and folding her hands while standing in front of him.
"You mean! You got a place in there. WOW! Congratulations." he got up and took her in embrace.
"You want me to go away from you." tears started to role.
"Hey! It's not that. I wanted the best for my students and that's what happened. You deserved it. You will achieve even better." kissing her tears.
"I don't want anything. I want you." pushing him on the couch and climbing over him before settling there.
"Do your parents know you are here?"
"No but Bro knows! Why did you do this?"
"What? Being at home? I got a day leave in between the corrections."
"No! You know what I'm talking about."

He lifted her face to face her:
"I want you to go and achieve. I will be waiting for you no matter what.
It will be up to you if you want to be with me after your 5 years of studies."
"And I'm just yours no matter what may come or happen."
"So when are going?"
"Once I decided."
"But"
"I want you to do one thing and then I will decide if I will go or not."
"What is that Miss. Lal?"
"Ask my parents to let me stay with you for 2 days." he started to open his mouth but she closed it her fingers "We will just hang out and I promise I will not do anything." taking her fingers from his lips "If everything goes well I will go else I can cancel it even in the last minute."
"What kind of condition is this?"
"I had something else but you will say it's immoral and all, so that's why this solution.
Now the ball is in your court.
I will be waiting in our room.
Talk to them and tell me what you all decided."
She kissed him without letting him take any control and got up and went to his/their room before closing the door.

He thought for several minutes before contacting his friend who took the side of his sister.
So he was obliged to call her father first.

"Hello Sir! It's Suraj."
"Son! How many time I told you to call me Dad."
"I will do it once I really become your son, Sir!"
"Hmmm Ok!"
"I need a help."
He explained calmly the situation and asked if it's okay for him to let his daughter with him for 2 days.
Her father asked few minutes so he can call her mother and talk to her before taking any decision.

As he said, he called him and authorised their daughter with the confidence they had on Suraj and especially on their daughter, Chakor.

"So?" she asked hearing the door cracking sound from where she was laying on the bed with her closed eyes.
"They said no!"
"Then I'm studying here in the college you are getting transferred." opening her eyes as he sat near her.
"They said no you can't deny going to Oxford because of just 2 days." he smiled.
"I knew it!" she jumped over him, making him loose balance.
"You are lucky that it's week-end and I can spend time with you else you would be alone while I will be in school correcting papers."
"No worries! I would have asked for 1 week instead of just 2 days in that case."
He smiled and she peeked his lips.

She hugged him tightly.
"I will miss you a lot."
"We can chat through video calls daily and send messages whenever you want."
"It will not be the same."
"What do you want to do for these 2 days?"
"Stay with you, cuddled to you. Feeling you close to me. Always in your arms."
"Did you really stopped reading those books?"
"Yes! Why are you asking it now?"
"There are still effects of those dark romance."
"Do you want to see the real effect?" she asked as she started to unbutton his shirt.

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Thanks a lot buddies for reading!
How was it?
I hope you got what will come in the next part(a little bit of 16+ and the end of the story with a leap.)

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Next/Last Part: Part 14

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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