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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Awesome 👍🏼
Vivaan is such a nice brother !
Waiting for next update !!

Thanks buddy!

I too want a brother like him!😭

Will be updating on time!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: taahir004
Superb Chapter

Both Suraj and Chakor getting more involved in chatting but he really wants her to concentrate on her studies
Vivaan must be one of the best brothers he actually spoke to his parents already about Suraj and Chakor
it was actually nice to see the parents so forthcoming and accepting that their daughter has grown and now loves someone
waiting to see the outcome of the dinner with Suraj and the family

Thank you so much!

He is for studies while she is full of love! LOL

I too like this Vivaan!

I hope the outcome will be interesting!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Hey!

How are you all?
I'm really happy with the responses I'm getting!
Here is the next part! Just for your information, a small make out present in this part!

Link to previous part: Part 11

Happy reading!

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Part 12

He don't know what to say to the girl who is bringing his life a life.
"You know that's not right." he said to her demand of spending a lot of time with her.
"Everything is fair in"
"Dear! I know but I'm your teacher at school. I have classes to attend and lessons to prepare."
"I will never complain about anything. It's just that I want to be in your arms daily at least 2 minutes."
"What will you do if you get scholarship in a foreign country for your higher studies?"
"Simple! I will not go!"
"I want you to follow your dreams and I never should be your obstacle. If that's not the case, I don't want us to be"
"No No No! I will go! I promise!" interrupting him.

"Do you want to come ... with your brother to my place"
"Yeah sure!" she said excited.
"I didn't even finish what I had to say!" chuckling.
"I will go to the end of this world if I can be with you."
"Someone is reading a lot of Romance quoted books." smiling.
"What to do? My boyfriend isn't romantic, so need to read books to imagine things that will not happen to me, may be just for now." trying to sound sad.
"So what does the story says?"
"Are you sure you want to hear?"
"Hmmm! Why? Is it that bad? Why are you reading it?"
"Bad! You are kidding! Before I just read plain novels. Just 1 month before I started to read this genre.
And I must say, black romance are the best. I can imagine you and me doing plenty plenty"
He couched.
"Drink water and tell me, I will continue."
"No need!"
"So it was to stop me!" acting hurt.
"Hmmm in a way! Yes!"

"Are you afraid orrr getting hor"
"Chakor!" in a stern tone interrupting her.
"Yes Love!" giving a kiss to the phone.
"What are you trying to do?"
"Do you want me to be frank?"
"Depends!"
"I read a make out session part last night and trying to know if it's possible through phone."
"What?" he shrieked.
"It's nothing."
"A sincere school girl like you is reading these kind of stuffs."
"Is it forbidden? You know what we should try one day and I or you can judge."
"You mean to say... I don't know how to judge."
"You are talking as if you have had girlfriend. Wait! Have you... ever had any? You see hmmm what I mean." she s**ttered a little.
"What do you mean Chakor?" sounding innocently.
"You see"
"What I see? I see my papers and that's it!"
"Hmmm Ummm Have you ever did something with someone?"
"You mean play basketball with boys? Yeah of course!"
"Don't play with me. Answer my question!" in a complaining tone.
"If I say you are the first woman who was in my arms and I want only you to be there for the rest of the life."

She is smiling and tears rushed down her cheeks.

"Heeeyy" she screamed as someone snatched her phone.
"Dude! Why is she crying?" her brother.
"What? Crying? Give the phone to her."
"Tell me why"
"Give the phone to her Man!" Suraj.

Hearing the sobs "Chakor! Please stop crying! I'm sorry if I said something wrong. I don't know what"
"I ... Love ... You" in between her sobs.
"Please don't cry!"
"Hmmm Hmmm Ok!" calming herself down "Dinner?" she asked.
"Sure!"
"He is asking to speak to you."
"Hmmm" he nodded even if she can't see him.

"So now tell me!" her brother.
"What?"
"Why she was crying?"
"We talked."
"I can see that." sounding sarcastically.
"Do you mind if she comes with you?"
"Ok Boss!"

"Hello!" she said getting back her phone.
"Please never cry."
"Hmmm!" getting upstairs.
"See you!"
"See you!" and gave him a kiss through phone before cutting it.

They got ready and went to Suraj's apartment.
He served them soft drinks and the boys started to talk while Chakor started to roam the room with her eyes until it reached a room.
She got up and entered in to find a simple white room with just needed equipments.
She was sitting on the bed seeing outside through the window when bed dipped a little by her side.
She rested her head on the person's shoulder while his hand went around her shoulder.

"I love you." she said.
"Why did you cry?"
"Bro!" she said and turned to see closed door.
"He said he need to fill his bike so went for that."
She composed herself and said: "It's not the only reason."
He smiled "I know." lifting her chin to make her face him "Sorry for making you cry."
She shook her head and leaned towards him with her focus shifting between his lips and his eyes.

He leaned in too.
Their lips touched, breath mingled and everything sparkled.
With her hands which were playing with his hair, she pulled it a bit, making him open his mouth due to small pain to take the charge to explore his mouth.
Their tongue danced for dominance and played in sync.
Her one hand came down towards his shirt button and she started to turn and pull it until a hand grabbed her hand, stopping their kiss.
She raised a brow asking him what, for which he shook his head.
She shook it out and attacked his lips, making him hungry for them while she successfully got out the 1st 3 buttons.

Pulling him on his bed without breaking the kiss, she laid over him.
The kiss which was sweet turned rough and hard.

Leaving his lips, she trailed kisses down his chest-shield.
Loosing the control he had until the moment her soft lips caressed his skin, he flipped their position making him over her.
Locking their eyes for few seconds which showed the emotions they never shared through words, he bent his head a little and softly kissed her lips and slowly broke it before leaving butterfly kisses to her chin, descending down her neckline, more down to the point where her two golden eggs joins as he has opened those 2 buttons of her tops with his teeth while she arched her back before taking his hand and guiding it inside her tops.

Ding Donggg

They separated their body and saw each other questioning.
Chakor pulled him over to the bed and kissed him on his lips before getting up and putting her buttons correctly.

"I will get the door! You put you shirt correctly." she combed her hair with her hands and opened the door to let her brother enter the flat when Suraj got out of the room passing his hand over his hair.
"Ok buddy! I think we are going to get going." seeing his sister who nodded "It's turning black outside and elders are already at home. See you tomorrow."
He smiled "Sure!" and did their hand shake before Vivaan exited the flat.
Suraj went near the door and waited for Chakor to pic her bag.
As she approached the door, she tiptoed and kissed him on cheeks murmuring "Thanks for making my dream come true." again peeked but this time it was his lips before following her brother who was on his phone.

The night went in the speed of tortoise and the same for the rest of the day for Chakor who is waiting patiently for the bell to ring.
Hearing the calling bell, she precipitated to the door to welcome him.
He tried to keep a little distance in front of the elders who came to welcome him in but she took his hand with hers and entwined their fingers, making her parents shook their head seeing their daughter like this.

They all settled around the table with Chakor, Suraj, her brother, her father and her mother.
They started to pick and eat while having light chat when suddenly her father addressed Suraj:
"What are your future plans Son?"

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Thanks a lot for reading buddies!
I know you all expected our Hero meeting our Lady's parents but I just got you all a small make out session and a lot of dialogues!
Did you liked it?
If yes! Hit the LIKE button and COMMENT what you liked!

Next part is for sure the dinner with parents and a small surprise or sad news depending on how you all are going to take!
2 more parts to go and story ends!

Next part: Part 13

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Hi sis..

Its an amazing part..

Their phone convo was superb..

Its a sukorlicious part..

Omg chakor was damn bold girl..i think her bold talks on mobile makes suraj sweat..

I never thought suraj will lose control..bt with this girl nothing he can do..

Bed romance s very hot..

Eagerly waiting for ur surprise sis..

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Amazing update👏

Loved sukor's phone conversation😊

Chakor is so bold, suraj must be so embrassed by her talks😉

Sukor's bed romance was hot😉

Waiting for next

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arena99

@arena99

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#186

Amazing update😊

Loved sukor scenes

Only two more chapters😭

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Superb!

Loved their phone conversation and their romance.

Suraj teased her on the phone! it's the first time Chakor isn't in control.

Vivaan is really an ideal brother, giving them some alone time but not too long. Loved how he was protective of her when she was crying.

Only two parts left ! That's too soon.

Can't wait for the next update!

Edited by meshmesh - 8 years ago

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RINKA

@R_Ritz

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#188

Sorry dear i am so much busy in work these days so i am late here.. I loved sukor scenes.. But only two more parts... I wish you will come up with something new... Tc