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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello lovely people!

Finally we are nearing the end!
This is the last part and it's like 16/17+ (just in the beginning)
Thanks you so much for coming all the way with me!
I'm so happy with all the responses I got!

I will continue my blah blah in the end!

Link to the previous part:
Part 13

Happy readings!

*******

Part 14

She didn't even let him answer as she slammed her lips with his and started to works on his shirt buttons fully.
"You said you will behave?"
"I will with certain limits."
She again took his lips in hers and trailed kisses down his chest-shield while trying to push his shirt out of his body.
"Chakor!"
"Chup!" putting her index finger over her lips "Now get out of that good for nothing shirt." she said settling over his lap.
He obeyed and she started to remove her over coat of her tops.
"What" he got interrupted.
"Do as I said! Else no Oxford!"
He shook his head and got his shirt out of his body.
She trailed the finger tips of her index over his body sending shiver to his spine.

"I want you to do things to me that I can remember for the 5 years I will be away from you." she said huskily.
"You will come here once a year."
"I will not come. If I come, I will not go."
He pushed her upwards making their lips join for a passionate kiss while his hands worked on the hem of her tops as she started to go for his pants.

They pushed and pulled.
Rolled over each other.
Touched and felt everything possible.

These 2 days went in a blink of an eye as they stayed most of the time discovering each others' anatomy.

"You see, I still hold my V-card!" hugging him while he was riding her back to her home "But you know I loved your junior a lot."
"I don't know how come you are a topper and speaking like this. I thought toppers are reserved, calm and composed."
"Just like you."
"So you are calling school tomorrow to confirm your trip." trying to change the topic.
"Can we not talk about that please?"
"Ok!"
"You didn't say anything about... hmm you see?"
"I see a traffic signal and few bikes and cars."
She pinched his hand and he laughed making her heart melt.
"Can't you just answer my question?"
"Everything about you is just special. I will miss you a lot."
"Me too!" planting a simple kiss on his back making him arch his back.
"Please don't do anything."
"Why? You don't like it?"
"I have to concentrate." as a whisper as her little finger entered the hole between 2 buttons and massaged the part up to where she can reach.

"Can't you ask for 1 week permission for me to stay with you?"
"Chakor! Stop being"
"No need to say!" she interrupted as they entered the compound of her house.

He met her parents and they all had dinner before he excused himself from there to go back to his alone life for the rest of 5 years if everything goes well.

Chakor went to school the next day itself and did all the formalities for her trip.

With the help of her mother and brother, the packaging were done and she is all set to take her flight in less than 2 hours.

"Take care of yourself. Eat on time. If it's too much to handle come back Sweety." she didn't even listen to her mom as she saw her love of life nearing them.
"Sure Mom!" and left from there and hugged Suraj with no care of who is seeing her.
He took hold of her hand and pulled her along with him to a corner where no one could see.

She wanted to say something but got interrupted with the life taking bear hug she got from him.
They stayed still for few seconds before she could reach his lips and steal a sweet good bye kiss.
"Miss me and miss me a lot." she said.
He smiled "I'm already missing everything."

His phone rang breaking their beautiful moment.
"Yes!"
"Ok!"
"Coming!"
He cut the call and said:
"You have to get in. They are waiting for you."
She nodded and peeked his lips and they made their way to where her family was.

Bidding bye to everyone and hugging everyone, she entered the security checking port and turned to wave her good bye before disappearing from others eyes.

Once settled in the room allotted for her, everything started to move fast for both the duo, the teacher and his former student. Or it's what they said to themselves to make everything easier.

Even with the time difference they found out a way to chat daily twice.
Most of the time they video chat during nights and messages whenever possible.
She has even missed to contact her parents for days but never missed to talk to him.

"You should call your parents daily."
"It's just that it slips out of my mind."
"How"
"I can't think about anything else than you when I want to speak to someone."
"It's been just 4 years and 11 months that you know me. Your parents should be more important than me."
"Illogical thoughts."
"Chakor!" a stern voice was heard.
"Ok baby! I will try to call them daily once we talk. Like that I will not forget."
"Good girl!"
"Why don't you call me with sweet names?" laying on her bed with her laptop over the pillow.

"I like your name a lot Chakor!"
"Ho cho sweet baby!"
"How is everything going on?"
"Great and there?"
"I think of changing the college."
"Why?"
"You remember Tina Raichand?"
"Hmmm!" nodding.
"She is the new in charge of teacher as her father bought the college 2 months before."
"When are you changing the college?" frowning.
"I feel something burning."
"Funny!"
"I already applied for the City University. They might call me in few weeks."
"Good!" relaxing and she murmured "Crush my foot! We are in love!"

He proceeded the information he heard and asked:
"When did you know?" in shock.
"In school!" meekly.
"When?"
"I heard her friends talking about this before the 1st trimester exam."
"Why you never said about this when I went to take special classes to her?"
Biting her nails "I was ok with that as she was just your student and you were already mine."
"So what's the problem now?"
"Now she may take advantage of her position on my IF." seeing his question look, she added "Innocent Fianc."
"I thought India Forums!"
"Ahahah funny you!"
"Few of my students got punished as they were using it today!" He yawned.
"Ok baby! Sleep now! Dream about me and think about me! And only about me!"
"Yes Madam!"
She smiled.
"Good night Chakor!"
"Good night baby."


Like this, the rest of the months flew and today she is landing on the land of her dreams.
The land where her future is waiting.
The land where she always belonged.

Pushing the trolley with her luggages, she exited the airport and came towards the waiting area to come face to face with the most awaited person of her life.
Her Man!
Her love of 6 years!
Her life!

Leaving the trolley on the side, she ran and jumped on him for her dearest life.
"I love you Chakor!" he said for the first time in the history of this world.
"I love you sooo much my Ex-Teacher." kissing his cheeks.
"Come let's go. Because of you, your parents and Vivaan stayed at home."
"That's their problem. I wanted you to be the 1st person I see when I come out." still hugging without any care of the world.
"You mean to say I'm the only one in front of your eyes?"
"Always for me!"
He shook his head.
"Why suddenly I love you?" she asked locking their eyes.
"To whom should I say if it's not to the lady with whom I got engaged online few weeks ago?"
"To your wife from tomorrow evening 7:00 PM!"

"I love you my dear life, Chakor!"
"I love you more Suraj!" and kissed on his lips in front of the world that surrounded them to witness the reunion of 2 lovers.

THE END!

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Thanks a lot for all your lovely support!
A small happy journey with you all and the crazy lady and her teacher.
Did I justify the title?
Did you liked it?

I know most of you all want more but to be honest, I want this to end here with an happy note than going around creating problems and solving! LOL

Let me know through LIKES & COMMENTS your thoughts!

And yeah! I will be posting an EPILOGUE in future.
Like something which can happen 10 years after this!
How would it be to see a crazy mother and crazy wife on her marriage anniversary! LOL

When I get time, I will write it down!
Will send PMs to people who actually receives my PMs for every updates!
If you want, add in the comment section and buddy me, so I get your name in the list.

See you soon guys!

- Maithili


Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update👏
Beautiful ending👏
The story justified the title
Loved sukor cute,hot & naughty moments😉
So you will write an epilogue , waiting for it
arena99 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Beautifully written story ❤️
Loved all the characters
Sweet ending
Waiting for epilogue😊
The story justified the title👍🏼👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Again thanks for giving us a beautiful story to read. Loved it till the core .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update!
Wish this part was longer
I thoroughly enjoyed the story, it was different.👏
Eagerly waiting for the epilogue.
Charaju thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update 👏
Loved sukor moments 😳
Romantic Chakor
Waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update sis..
Loved the cute romance btwn sukor..
Chakor frowning was fabulous..
Superb ending for the superb story..
I m super duper happy tat tis story have an epilogue..
Eagerly waiting for tat sis..
Luv u..tc
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful Ending

I felt had it not been for Chakor's boldness Suraj would never have came out that fear of having a family and been loved it was all her determination
and even after 4 years away from each other it seems their love just grew in heaps for each other
now Chakor is back home and I'm sure she would want her marriage soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow wow wow what a beautiful way of ending.. I just loved the update.. You wrote so well... I was dying to read this part and finally read it.. Thanks dear for it
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update👏

Beautiful ending👏
The story justified the title
Loved sukor cute,hot & naughty moments😉
So you will write an epilogue , waiting for it

Thank you dear!
Glad you liked the ending and their moments!
Happy that the title is justified!
Yup! There will be an epilogue after XHR, chat sessions with Sukor from here and a small break!

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