Ranjish Hi Sahi: A Chandini FS LAST CHAPTER updated on Pg 9 - Page 10

Originally posted by: alanta

Aish🤗

Apologies for the late comments yaar, I know its too late.

Actually when I reached the end reading, I was confused what to comment. Some times I fall out of words...

Now this is called a classic climax scene👏 A cinematic one .. you gave a visual impact to it through your writing.

I liked the way you paralleled both of their pain and grief and how in the end both became medicine for each other's grief is note worthy.

Kya?? 😲 Am I reading it correct? Nandini said it? "Muje neend Nahin aa rahi hein!!!" At last you made her say that.. 😆

Thank you for this beautiful read. Will be waiting for your another SS/OS/FF.😳

Aish behan🤗

agar tune chandu ke ssath hanky panky kiya b hoga i shall be ok ..I mean woh dhoka nahi hai ..we are in contract basis 😉😆but i cant tolerate this dhoka 🤢😆 matbal .. tere itna accha writing wala talent👏⭐️😭 ye mere liye khatray ki ghanti hai .🤢 chandu ko iss type ka talent pasand hai ..lagta hai abh mere ko ko b tumse writing ka loha lena padega😆 to be in competition😉

lekin phir main tera level ko matchnahi kar sakti aish⭐️ .. u r master piece yaar har matter mien . aur iss write up ke bare mein kya bolu ..i can just say WOW !⭐️👏 I loved each and every line and you take us to this beautiful ride to la la land yaar through u r writings ⭐️

Part 3 (a,b)

he charcoal dark pair, now concealed behind the curtain of his thick jet black lashes, when open was as bright as sunlight on a stream.😳 More than that, those eyes were a reflection of the selfless love he has for her.😳 ⭐️And may be because they are a replica of his father's eyes and that's why so dear to you",⭐️👏 (BEAUTIFUL ⭐️👏 (i can so understand this.I was bold yahi per aish .😳)

kitne saare emotions ko tune pen down kiya ⭐️..i mean ek sacha talented writer hi kar sakta hai ... and that lal and pink color 😆 (u know how to play👏⭐️)

voice sounded like a councillor, someone you know, will listen and not judge."Main sun raha hoon Nandini👏⭐️

He swore, there's a hand inside his chest, he could feel it, which was squeezing his heart.👏⭐️ ..

She held his angvastra, clutching it tightly she inched closer to him, as she demanded "kyun nahin the tum wahan par mere saath?, bolo? kyun nahin the?"⭐️⭐️⭐️

I just loved it aish ...way nandini way saying it ..one could feel what both were going through ..aish I bow down yaar👏

So beautiful aish ...I could imagine each and every scene .

this is tailor made to rt n sbp😎

4(a,b)

Nandu and bindu wala part was ek dum cute . u have written this chote chote things kids do so beautifully him playing , losing interes , hunting for other things , piece of paper etc ..so beautiful aish ⭐️.nandu ka Bindu, aye Bindu! Bolo baba" was so rupa-ish way .👏

roli of his tilak has the same hue as her sindoor, slipped his rings on her fingers, grinned childishly as they hung loosely around them,👏⭐️ was elated looking at the pen tucked in the pen stand, a gift from her.😳

Lautne ki tyaari karo Nandini.⭐️ It was so chandu-ish ⭐️be it vanara wala tadka jo tune diya hai ,👏

or chandu ka foster dad ke saath relation , him snatching bindu from him , father can b both father n mother I mean these things are just just wow wow !⭐️👏

chandu nandu ka convo , those breakdown ⭐️👏I mean those minute details jo tune use kiya hai ..its just awesome yaar👏 .

there are so many lines in this SS which are I mean super se b upar wala⭐️

its so poetic . I swear am not getting words to match up with your standard of writing yaar⭐️

issi liye am coming up with plan ...shumi ne jo jo bola hai na ek dum sahi hai ...👏

uss ne sab kuch bol diya so beautifully⭐️mera kaam easy hogaya hai 😆 kyun ki abh main krithika ka style use kar rahi hoon (copy paste aish😆) I think this will save my gharima 🤢.kyuni ki tere ko pata hai mera std ...mujh se nahi hoga ..uss level ka

aur yesh ...jaise sab bol rahe hai ... ruk jana nahi aish ..plz continue ..tera ye writing talentwa ko aage badne do 👏⭐️. aur hume b dhanya kardo tere write up padhne ka golden wala opportunity de kar 🤗 tune sach mein hume proud wala moment diya hai aaj ..bole toh ek didi ko proud ho raha hai aish

Hugs and love Aish 🤗

Originally posted by: shubhaR

Aish behan🤗

agar tune chandu ke ssath hanky panky kiya b hoga i shall be ok ..I mean woh dhoka nahi hai ..we are in contract basis 😉😆but i cant tolerate this dhoka 🤢😆 matbal .. tere itna accha writing wala talent👏⭐️😭 ye mere liye khatray ki ghanti hai .🤢 chandu ko iss type ka talent pasand hai ..lagta hai abh mere ko ko b tumse writing ka loha lena padega😆 to be in competition😉

lekin phir main tera level ko matchnahi kar sakti aish⭐️ .. u r master piece yaar har matter mien . aur iss write up ke bare mein kya bolu ..i can just say WOW !⭐️👏 I loved each and every line and you take us to this beautiful ride to la la land yaar through u r writings ⭐️

Part 3 (a,b)

he charcoal dark pair, now concealed behind the curtain of his thick jet black lashes, when open was as bright as sunlight on a stream.😳 More than that, those eyes were a reflection of the selfless love he has for her.😳 ⭐️And may be because they are a replica of his father's eyes and that's why so dear to you",⭐️👏 (BEAUTIFUL ⭐️👏 (i can so understand this.I was bold yahi per aish .😳)

kitne saare emotions ko tune pen down kiya ⭐️..i mean ek sacha talented writer hi kar sakta hai ... and that lal and pink color 😆 (u know how to play👏⭐️)

voice sounded like a councillor, someone you know, will listen and not judge."Main sun raha hoon Nandini👏⭐️

He swore, there's a hand inside his chest, he could feel it, which was squeezing his heart.👏⭐️ ..

She held his angvastra, clutching it tightly she inched closer to him, as she demanded "kyun nahin the tum wahan par mere saath?, bolo? kyun nahin the?"⭐️⭐️⭐️

I just loved it aish ...way nandini way saying it ..one could feel what both were going through ..aish I bow down yaar👏

So beautiful aish ...I could imagine each and every scene .

this is tailor made to rt n sbp😎

4(a,b)

Nandu and bindu wala part was ek dum cute . u have written this chote chote things kids do so beautifully him playing , losing interes , hunting for other things , piece of paper etc ..so beautiful aish ⭐️.nandu ka Bindu, aye Bindu! Bolo baba" was so rupa-ish way .👏

roli of his tilak has the same hue as her sindoor, slipped his rings on her fingers, grinned childishly as they hung loosely around them,👏⭐️ was elated looking at the pen tucked in the pen stand, a gift from her.😳

Lautne ki tyaari karo Nandini.⭐️ It was so chandu-ish ⭐️be it vanara wala tadka jo tune diya hai ,👏

or chandu ka foster dad ke saath relation , him snatching bindu from him , father can b both father n mother I mean these things are just just wow wow !⭐️👏

chandu nandu ka convo , those breakdown ⭐️👏I mean those minute details jo tune use kiya hai ..its just awesome yaar👏 .

there are so many lines in this SS which are I mean super se b upar wala⭐️

its so poetic . I swear am not getting words to match up with your standard of writing yaar⭐️

issi liye am coming up with plan ...shumi ne jo jo bola hai na ek dum sahi hai ...👏

uss ne sab kuch bol diya so beautifully⭐️mera kaam easy hogaya hai 😆 kyun ki abh main krithika ka style use kar rahi hoon (copy paste aish😆) I think this will save my gharima 🤢.kyuni ki tere ko pata hai mera std ...mujh se nahi hoga ..uss level ka

aur yesh ...jaise sab bol rahe hai ... ruk jana nahi aish ..plz continue ..tera ye writing talentwa ko aage badne do 👏⭐️. aur hume b dhanya kardo tere write up padhne ka golden wala opportunity de kar 🤗 tune sach mein hume proud wala moment diya hai aaj ..bole toh ek didi ko proud ho raha hai aish

Hugs and love Aish 🤗

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Amazing ChanDni FF ❤️plz keep writing more on them

Originally posted by: aishwish

Thank you so much, will defo try to write more😊