Aish🤗
Apologies for the late comments yaar, I know its too late.
Actually when I reached the end reading, I was confused what to comment. Some times I fall out of words...
Now this is called a classic climax scene👏 A cinematic one .. you gave a visual impact to it through your writing.
I liked the way you paralleled both of their pain and grief and how in the end both became medicine for each other's grief is note worthy.
Kya?? 😲 Am I reading it correct? Nandini said it? "Muje neend
Nahin aa rahi hein!!!" At last you made her say that.. 😆
Thank you for this beautiful read. Will be waiting for your another SS/OS/FF.😳
Edited by alanta - 8 years ago